Faye: I've suddenly got it!
Online Offline has had a NAME change!
It will also soon have a slight makeover:3 I'm re-reading and re-doing the chapters.
Soon this story will actually be somewhat error-less!
I'm so excited!
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But anyway.
The name has been changed to Here, But Never There
If you're wondering where I came up with that at it was quite simple. I was reading through it, the second chapter I believe, and it said "How come we can get along online, but offline we hate one another."
It kind of just grew from there.
I felt guilty for having practically the same title as the author of "Online Loves, Offline Hates" especially when each story had sort of the same basic idea.
So thanks to all the fans who are patiently awaiting the return of "Turning Point," which will hopefully soon be given a new title..., but until then, this is the story that I'm fixing up.
I might just try to get them all fixed and then put them up.
If you don't feel like going back and re-reading, don't. If you enjoyed it the first time and want to re-read it, go ahead, it's probably at least a little bit better than it was before. If you've never read it before, and now you have, you're lucky because you got it best. Lol.
I noticed a lot of errors already, but most were only in the chat dialogues and I wanted those to actually be somewhat realistic, I mean, not many people type perfectly when they're online.
So here you go, I'll give another note once it has been revised, but for now...tell me your opinions on the new title!