I think I'm doing something right.
Once I take all your peoples questions and confusions and edit the story it'll be perfect.
I'll even take in mind my little story-hater. Sure it's sappy, but isn't love just sappy?
I'm doing good, so far, only one hate who told me that I'm a horrible writer and that I shouldn't even try.
Well, from the other reviews I've gotten...I'm obviously not.
As for Turning Point...still searching for a new name...
Still looking for that muse.
But I'll keep going.
I have a lot of work to do, I need to weed through the reviews and take out all the complaints, ideas, criticism, and put them into the story, maybe I'll even make them hate each other for a little longer.
I might take away the computer thing...really it didn't do much with my story...just made it...retarded.
I don't know...this would be a good Christmas Vacation project.
W00t.
Thanks you guys, stick with me, I'll finish Turning Point...I hope!