My replies to reviewers. This is my second chance to do this and I'm jumping up and down!
Rufwardo: I'm sorry, but this is going to be a Mary Sue. This is for my friend who is in love with Obi-Wan (talk to the people who know her. UNDERSTATEMENT!) and it had to be done. But I will assure you, this is my first and more likely than not, only Mary Sue. Thank you for the comment on how it needs clarification. I always hate writing the beginning. If you could possibly tell me what's up and what is needed, I will try to fix it. I'm only mortal and these comments make me stronger.
ButterCowLover: Thanks, that means a lot to me. I'm glad it's up to standard.
obiisgod: Glad to see that you liked it. The next chapter will be soon. Oh, and how many Obi's can YOU fit in a review. It's a challenge. Can you do it? Oh (another oh and I win a prize!) and another thing, no offence over afore mentioned comment.
Mu-San: I am but a mere mortal in this crazy no sleep world. I'm hoping you are kinda joking with that comment but this is a quick explanation to where the rest is; in my frazzled out brain. I have exams coming up, as in, this Friday. I am in the middle of freaking majorly but chapter 3 will come along soon. This is a good week for this story, there's another one I've done that I haven't updated in months!
And to everyone who spoke about the line "Good Jedi are at peace with the world. Good Jedi are calm. Good Jedi don't strangle Yoda." Thank you for the positive feedback on this. I like this line a lot. It seems to make sense. I think I can speak for a lot of people when I say that after a 5 minute speech from Yoda in the backward talk he uses we want to strangle him and put him in the English language classes. I love other languages and all, but what he does is insane. He's still pretty cool though (don't interpret that like that obiisgod) so there wont be much Yoda bashing.
I'm kinda overwhelmed. I've just gone from 1 review in two stories after they've been there for months (I will update that one that's in the middle of the plot by the end of the year. Mid year resolution) to 3 from different people all within a day of this one being posted. WOW! I love all of those who reviewed and I want to give you all hugs. (don't be scared, I can't reach through the computer and I'm not psychotic)
This chapter will be slow as it introduces the characters to each other on a flight. An uneventful flight. It will get interesting next chapter at the latest as they get to know one another. It sounds sappy, and I will take your payouts, but love doesn't happen overnight. Unless it's your new pet puppy, or kitten, or really interesting hamster, or… I'll just shut up now.
Don't stop reviewing.
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Obi-Wan stood in shock. The face looked familiar, but he was at loss to work out from where. "It was no problem. It will be nice to have the company."
He looked at the blue eyes, which shone out from under the cap. "Pardon me for asking, but what is your name? I believe I have seen you somewhere but for the life of me I just can't pick it."
The woman looked at him, a smile forming upon her dark red lips, a total contrast from the rest of her face. "My name is Keitha Tanmarson. My master was Xiu-Juan."
Obi-Wan's face dropped as he remembered the name of his old friend. "I am terribly sorry about your master. I knew her when I was a young padawan."
Keitha's face was bitter sweet. A strand of golden blonde hair dropped across it for good measure. "My master's loss was a blow for the whole order. Excuse me I need some rest. I didn't have much time to before Yoda assigned me to you."
With that she left the room and Obi-Wan started thinking. 'Xiu-Juan. THAT is a name I haven't heard in a long while. She wasn't one to leave things half done. This girl should already have surprising skills.'
He shook his head and moved towards his quarters, thinking about why the devil Yoda had assigned Xiu-Juan's former apprentice to him.
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Keitha walked into her quarters and rested on her narrow bunk. She had not wanted to do this. But the council had wanted her to 'sharpen her skills' so she had had to come. She sighed out loud and reached for the comm. A young female face, around her age filled the screen. "What is it? Who is this?" the tense and slightly peeved face asked. Keitha smiled.
"Guess Who." The face relaxed slightly.
"Not that I'm not happy to talk to you but what's up?"
Keitha looked at her friend, wishing that she was closer so they could have a proper talk, and not be watching every third word they said so hackers didn't know who or where they were. "I've been assigned to Jedi Kenobi to have my skills updated."
The face flushed with anger, then checked itself mentally. Not that this mental check was not very physical. "So the council think that you're what? Crap? Pathetic? Hopeless? I don't see many of them going through what you went through. Maybe THEY should ALL get checked out. Like a physical to see what's up their…"
"Come on, their only doing what they think is best." Keitha knew her friend got very aggressive easily. It was one very keen flaw of hers. A blast rang through the comm.
"I have to run. Someone thought that they could concussion bomb a pretty big thing here."
Keitha tried to hid her disappointment, half accomplishing it. Her friend was very busy. "What did they bomb? A building?"
The face was completely without humour. Straighter than Mace Windu's lightsaber. "No bigger and the operative word is thought. A very stupid politician and his ego. As if they could fit both of those in a building together anyway. All that hot air….. talk to you soon."
And with that, Keitha smiled and the screen went blank.
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Obi-Wan looked at the flight panel. The trip had been 8 hours long, uneventful, and very… relaxing. Keitha entered the flight deck, stopping his thoughts. She sat down in the co-pilot's chair. "We're landing as I speak. I hope you're rested."
She turned to him and a smile lit up her face. It made her seem warm, friendly and… enchanting. A strand of golden hair dropped lightly over her face. He struggled with himself, attempting to banish his thoughts. 'Jedi don't think like that. Jedi don't lust. Jedi don't sit there and think the Jedi they're sitting next to would look very nice in a small bikini.' The scene of Alderaan came into view. It was beautiful, the green hills rolling across the landscape. Obi-Wan manuvered his borrowed craft towards a small jade green tinged retreat. "That is where we are staying." A small waterfall splashed it's gleeful way down a small cliff near the retreat. Gardens surrounded it, as it was the Alderaan way, the nature, peace loving people they were. Obi-Wan hid a blush. This place looked almost romantic, which with his mind not exactly where it was meant to be could be dangerous.
"It looks wonderful." Her voice… It was husky and inviting. 'This is going to be interesting. Train someone who I'm getting a deep infatuation for. This is defiantly going to be intriguing.'
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The next chapter is coming along nicely and it looks to have some things hotting up, and maybe not just between the characters.
Please review and keep in mind, the next chapter is WAY better than this.