Hey whoever actually reads this stuff.
Well as you can probably figure out this isnt really the next chapterI felt restless about not updating it and so I felt I needed to put something up here. ok so heres the deal.
Normally99.9 of the time I like to decide things on my own, but out of curiosity and since ive hit a few glitches I was interested in hearing some of your ideas. So yeah heres a few questions that I would be very interested to here your answers to.
Should my oc character Jess fall for one of the bladebreakers? If so which one?
Should Kai and Angel "fall" for one another or should they continue to remain distant?
What do you honestly think about my story so far? what things are good what things are bad you know the good stuff to know.
If you could change one thing about my story what would you change?lol these questions are great huh.
Well hey if anyone is reading this except moonshine who is doing an awesome job of reviewing and keeping me writing could you please review so that I actually have the motivation to finish this. Well hey read and review my story if it please you and yes flames are accepted. hey constructive criticism makes you better lol uhh keyword being constructive. Well hey thanx for hanging there for me and just since you've been patient enough to read all of this im leaving a preview of whats gonna happen in the next chapter but don't expect me to give away all the "good parts." Lol "good parts" yeah that's a joke.
PREVIEWS
Kai couldn't seem to stop staring at Angel. What was going on? She was just another chic, weak, a nuissance, and clingy.
"Is that really what shes like?" asked a voice.
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Angel stared at Kai as an excited Jess cheered loudly beside her. For some reason no matter hwo she tried to focus on anythign and everythign else, she couldn't seem to keep her gaze from drifting back to Kai. She just kept thinking and wondering about him. He had saved her yesterday, but why? He didn't even have a clue what was going on and he saved her?…but it didn't matter hed leave her to them just like everyone else had.
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"Do you see her?" asked a malicious voice in the leaders earpiece.
"Yes sir."
"Good. You know what to do then."
This is going to be easy. Grinned the shaded leader
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"Angel who are these guys?" Kai asked staring at the unconscious form around him.
Kai lowered his head to look in her eyes, "Angel please, I want to know, I need to know." He said gently.
Just for the record it sounds a lot like Kai and Angel are going to be together but one thing I know to be true is that relationships are fragile. Esp. in the beginning. If not treated with care and persistence, it will break when tossed about in times' wind.
Well once again thanx for reading this, and please read and review my stuff. I could hold the uhh what chapter am I on again? chapter for ransom to be paid in reviews lol, but im not like that. So hey stay awesome, peace out, and pray I dont try and do stuff like this late at night anymore. Later
LightInTheDarkTempest