Headquarters
Elliot- "12 year old white female, found this morning in an alley badly beaten and raped"
Cragen- "We talked to her yet?"
Olivia- "Nope, she's still in surgery to repair her lung, the nurse put her chances at no more than 70"
Fin- "Who found her?"
Olivia- "Callum Matheson"
Fin- "We got his DNA?"
Elliot- "It's at the lab right now but until we can get a rape kit its useless"
Munch- "What about the ally where she was found? Anything?"
Olivia- "There was less blood than there should have been had she gotten the injuries there, also blood drips, leading to the road"
Fin- "Wait, she was dumped?"
Elliot nodded
Olivia- "From the amount of blood and the conditions, CSU puts the time around 5am"
Fin- "But that makes no sense-if she lives she might be able toID her attackers, plus, she's as good as dead anyway so why not finish the job?"
Olivia shrugged
Munch- "What else have we got"?
Elliot- "Nothin'"
Munch- "So until the girl wakes up we've got squat"
Olivia- "Well when she's out of surgery we can perform a rape kit"
Cragen- "This is going to be tricky"
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24-7 Shop
Fin and Munch walked into the shop and flashed their badges
Munch- "we'd like to speak to the owner please"
Checkout boy- "uuumm… sure I guess, Brian!"
A middle-aged man came out from the back rubbing at his eyes
"I tol' you, don' be disturbin' me!"
Boy- "ummm it's the police"
Brian- "yea and what do they want?"
Fin- "do you mind if we look at your surveillance recording of last night"
Brian- "why"
Fin- "its to help in our rape inquiry"
Brian- "rape?"
Munch- "yea, girl found last night"
Brian- "what's in it for me"
Munch and Fin looked at each other
Munch- "the warm fuzzy feeling that comes from doing something good"
Brian- "sorry, that doesn't work, if it was green and had the dollar sign on it however…."
Munch- "you arrogant little…"
Fin- "-how about, either you give us the tape or we get a search warrant and come back later?"
Brian shrugged and walked off
Fin pulled out his phone and punched in a number
Fin- "sonofa…. Hi Casey, yea we need a search warrant for this guys shop…"
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K and I planned to do this at her house today but her internet stuffed up so we gave up
LawNorderlover01- LOL, being a big fan of this site, I understand your frustration with us for not putting loads into a chapter, bear with us, we are planning to update once a week, since we are writing it at the same time, we are trying to keep ahead of you guys to prevent delays. This one's a shorty but I'll see what we can do to make the future chapters longer.
Somedaycelebrity- we'll see what we can do about reviewing your story, it definately wont be this week though, we are both swamped with homework although K got extentions on all of her stuff (LUCKY!)
DF- thank you, that's sweet, we had her waking up around then anyway. I just wanted to check with you :-), I hope you find this story, we would be glad to hear your opinions and suggestions