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Chapter 18: Valentine Ball Night, Part 1.
At the park, the Bladebreakers are now training with each others. Neither do they knew, they were beeing spy on. By someone mysteriouse, among the bushes, "Hmm?" said Kai now looking at the bushes. "Is there something wrong Kai?" asked Ray now looking at the bushes too."No! I thought we were beeing spy on. But I think it was just my imagination" he said.
"What ever, Kai. You want a battle with me? I'm now itching for a beybattle" said Tyson looking foward to Kai saying yes. "Ok! but don't blame me if you lost" he said positioning himself in front of the beydish opposite Tyson. Max is the referee this time."Ready bladers?" said Max, "3, 2, 1, Let it-" Max was cut out by a shout.
"Ray, Ray" said a blond hair girl running toward the Bladebreakers, "I need a word with you, in private" she said looking at the others thenwalk away with Ray."Who's that girl talking with Kai?" asked Tyson. "It's Joice. One of out class-mates" said Kai when two more girls came a long.
"Hei Kai. Whose your cute friend over here?" said Jenny pointing over at Max and Tyson. "Them? Their Max and Tyson" he said looking at Tyson, "are we going to beybattle or just stand here all day?" he said glaring at Tyson."Oh! Can we watch?" said Racheal standing near the stadium with Jenny behind her. "Let it rip" said Tyson and Kai unison.
Meanwhile over at Ray and Joice, "Do you have...any partner for... you know" said joice shyly. "Huh? I don't understand what you're trying to say Joice?" said Ray. "You know, a partner for this saturday night?" she said blushing slightly. "Oh! You ment for the dance? No! I wasn't planing going with anyone. Anyway, I'm going with my friends" said Ray.
"Then can you take me to the dance?" she asked Please say yes, please say yes, she thought.
"Well...um...I guess so" he said "Then I'll see you at the entrance of the auditorrium?" he said.
"Ok, ok! I'll see you then" she said happily, "Bye! See you saturday night" she said pulling her friends along.
"Hei! I still want to see the match" shouted Rachel while being pulling away.
The next day after school, the Bladebreakers are waiting for each other outside the school like usual. Finally everyone was here and they left school. When they came to the local library, "Fellows, I need to do something at the library" said Max.
"What gifts? We still got practice later" said Tyson.
"I know. I'll be at the park later soon after I get this bussiness done ok" he said and he walk into the library. Which left Tyson glaring at no one.
"Come on, Tyson. Let's put our bags and go for some good old beyblading" said Kenny pushing Tyson on his back. When the others has already left, Max pop out his head and see if the cose is clear. Alright the cose is clear he thought. Then he came out and left the library. Infact he went to the gym's coffee shop waiting for someone. A few minutes later, "Sorry to keep you waiting Max" said a girl and Max turn his head and look, it was Mariam.
"That's ok" he saidas he help Mariam to take a seat, "You want anything to drink?" he asked. "Sure. A coffee will do" she said and Max went to the counter to order. He then came with two cups of coffee on both of his hands, "Thank you! So you want to see me because..." she said looking curiusethen take a sip of her coffee.
"Yah! I was wondering if ... you're free on Saturday night?" he said shyly. "You want to ask me out to the dance right?" she said. "Yes? Butif you're not free that's ok" said Max. "Sure" she said taking another sip of her coffee.
"Oh! I was thinking... What did you say your answer was?" said Max. "Sure. I'm free on that day" she said. "Yah! Pick you up on seven?" asked Max. "Ok!" she said. The the whole afternoon both Max and Mariam laugh and chat all sorts of stuff.
Later at the evening when everyone was in their room doing their homework and stuff. Inside Kai's room, he's sitting on the couch beside the window. He then pick up the phone and start dialing.
'Ring, ring' "I'll get it" said Karalin, picking up the phone, "Hello, can I help you?" she said joyly. "Ah...Can I speak to Karalin please?" asked Kai in a polite way.
"Speaking. Who's on the line" said Karalin. "Ah! This is Kai. I was wondering...if you're free on...saturday night?" he said. "Yah, I'm free. You asking me out is it?" she said. "Well... yes. For the ...school's ...night dance?" said Kai shyly.
"Ok! Seven fine with you?" asked Karalin. "Yah! meet you at the entrance of the auditorrium" said Kai happily then he hung up. I never thought this wuld go so smoothly, thought Kai with a smile.
The day of the dance has finally come. Hilary had asked Mariam to come along to Kai's mansion to have a little girl conversation. Which makes the Saint Shields are invited too. "What gives Hilary?" asked Mariam been pull into Hilary's room. Then she locked the door and the connection door too. "I want to asked you something. Did Max asked you out tonight?" she said.
"Yah! Why?" asked Mariam curiously."Well don't you want to look your best for the dance?" asked Hilary. "I didn't thought about that. ButI thought...Wha?" she said the been pull to the make up table. "Then leave it all to me. I'll turn you into a delicate young lady" she said and get to work. "Take it easy, Hilary. Hei! that's my hair. Ouch!" cried Mariam.
Later that evening, the time has come to leave for the dance. "Girls, are you ready for the dance?" asked Tyson knocking on Hilary's room's door.
"We're going to be late you know" said Ray "Better hurry...up?" he said when the door opens. The boys just stared at the two girls.(A/n: Did I say stare,I mean they drool at the young lady. lol)
Hilary is wearing a black velvet, stripeless night gown with a silver scarf around neck and shoulder. Mariam has dressed in a violet cheongsam and her hair is tied into a bun. The two girls look like an angel in front of the boys. "What are you boys looking at?" said Hilary and the boys shook their head and was back at reality.
"Nothing" said Tyson, "You just look beautiful than before. Are you ready to go?" asked Tyson. "Yap!" said Hilary and unison. They walked outside and get on the limo to their school.
Outside the new Beyblade Auditorrium, "Let's go in then" said Max holding Mariam by her palm "You look beautifeul tonight" whisper Max at mariam's ear. They gang start walking except Kai and Ray. "What are you guys waiting for? Come on" he said.
"I'll be with you guys in a minute" said Ray. "Same goes for me" said Kai.
"Alright then" said Tyson holding Hilary's arm on the way in. "We'll try to save what's left at the table" said Kenny walking in with the others.
"Who are you waiting for Kai?" asked Ray looking at Kai. "No one, just want to be alone" he said cooly. A car came along and three girls and a boy came out. "I'll just parked the car. You guys can go in with out me" said that boy. The girl on the right was a blond wearing a metalicviolet spergetti night gown with a furry scarf around her. The girl at the middle is a sky blue hair wearing a meroon night gown with it's scarf sewed to it. The girl on the left is an orange wearing a purple tank top gown.
"Ray" said the blond hair girl, Joice, " Hai Kai! Sorry to keep you waiting. Let me introduced you to some of my friends. This is William, Jenny's date" Joice said.
"It's a pleasure to meet you both. I believe you're the Bladebreakers, am I right?" asked William.
"Yes! Who want to know" said Kai with his arm cross. "You guys are not in yet?" said a voice from behind, "Who are they?" he asked.
"Oh! He's Ray, Joice's partner for tonight" said the orange hair girl, Jenny. "Oh, nice to meet you. Can we go in now. I'm starving here" he said. "Ok!" said Jenny and she and Racheal and William went in. "Shall we go in?' asked Joice.
Now only Kai was left alone outside. Where could his Valentine be? The place was quite, 'crack', "Huh?" said Kai looking at the bushes, Somone is defenetly spying on us. But who, he thought. The a benz pull over and four delicate girls came down. Kai was shocked to see them.
Bladebreakers: Well that was the end of part one. Hope you will review and tell me how you feel about this story. And try to guess who the four girls are.
Roxanne: Shouldn't it be obvious that who those girls are?
Bladebreakers: Well maybe "Scream" How did you get out? Aren't you suppose to be at the dance?O.o
Roxanne: I was behind you all the time. You just too caught up with your writing you didn't notice me. "Sweatdrop"
Bladebreakers: Well I hope you're not going to start an argur with me like Cornelia.
Roxanne: Nope! I'm just here to...
Bladebreakers: What ever! Will you just go back to the story, anyway please review. "Pushing her in"