To those of you who reviewed, what can I say but: THANK YOU!
Fire Blazing Chan S.E.- I agree with you, people should watchmore spy movies. It should be… like the law: people have to do it…or else go to jail. Wasn't your name 'Stormbender S.E.' before? Why'd you change it? I liked that name. When I first saw your new name, I was all confused and I said to myself, "Wasn't her name Stormbender S.E.?" Then I put two and two together and realized it was you. Thanks for reviewing!
Hiko-Chan- Thank you for reviewing. And for the record, I too would rather die than be married to a pig like Zhao.
Flames 220- Thanks for reviewing. I LOVE ZUKO TOO! I, too, wish he would smile more, but alas, he doesn't. Wait, he did actually, twice in fact. In one episode, he laughed when Aang and people stole the pirate's ship and he grinned when his uncle told Commander Zhao that he was more honorable than him.
Chapter 7: A letter to my lover
Zuko, too much in shock to realize where he was going, marched to his room and took out a pen and some paper. He was going to write to Ayaka and tell her to come visit him in the dead of night with her brother. Zuko invited Ryu because he knew that he couldn't stand Ayaka getting married to a pervert like Zhao as much as he did. As he wrote his letter, he started to think. Zhao wouldn't have done this on his own, he thought, there must be something or someone behind it. If I know Zhao, then there has to be some kind of explanation. Dammit! This fuckin' sucks ass! This is a whole bunch of bullshit! Crap! Zuko had never cursed so much in his life, he was so mad. "Damn you Captain Zhao, when I get my hands on you I'm gonna kill you like the worthless piece of shit that you are," he said to himself. He finished writing his letter and looked it over. "That looks good enough. Time to send it," he said and walked to the place where his father kept reptilian birds. (He didn't know what the hell it was actually called, so he made up a name for it. This is it: "The Lair." Pretty stupid, huh?).
Once he got there, he found a bird named Orpheus who opened his beak for him to put the letter in. "Do you know where the Shimon Fire Island is, Orpheus?" Zuko asked the bird. Orpheus squawked to tell him that he did. Zuko smiled. "Good," he said. "Bring this letter to the palace and find Ayaka. She has long black hair, tied in a ponytail and blue eyes. Find her and give this to her. Understand?" he said to Orpheus. Again the bird squawked to show that he understood. Zuko grinned and put the letter in his beak. As soon as the bird disappeared, Zuko decided to go see his Sensei and talk to him about what he had just learned. He walked to the highest tower in the palace to where Koryu slept and knocked on the door. However, there was no answer, so he decided to let himself in. Koryu's room was well furbished and …uh, interestingly decorated. Zuko kept his eyes shut…he didn't want to look at the walls…or the ceiling…or the mirror…or anything else in the room for that matter. Koryu is just as perverted as Zhao, thought Zuko. Zuko sighed. Oh well, nothing you can do, I suppose, he thought. "Sensei Koryu," called Zuko, hoping that Koryu was in his private bathroom, but there was no answer. Dammit, thought Zuko, This totally sucks! I can't talk to anyone about this! Damn! And so, with his eyes still closed, he tried to walk out of Koryu's room. (However that proved extremely difficult so he opened his eyes and ran out the door.) "I'm never going into that room again," he said. When his "traumatic" experience was over, he turned around and kicked Koryu's door. You suck, he thought.
Zuko sulked his way through the palace going wherever his feet would take him, he didn't care. All he wanted was to forget everything that happened to him. He had never felt so miserable in his life. "Grr. This is pointless. I can't just stay here feeling sorry for myself, like a little 5- year-old! I have to do something!" he said furious with himself for moping around the palace like a bum. He decided to go for a walk. He walked all along the beach and into the city. He didn't fell like doing anything at all but…well, sulk and feel sorry for himself. Dammit Zuko! Get a grip! Jeez! He longed for the time when he shall see Ayaka again when all is still and quiet… he couldn't wait. Well, Zuko's got something on his mind!
Damn! This must be (in my opinion) the most boring chapter in my story! All Zuko does…is sulk! Man! Who knew he was so sensitive? This also must be the shortest chapter as well. sigh I still hope you guys like it. And for one person that Ididn't putin, I am so sorry! When I pressed the edit/preview button, I didn't see the save changes buttonand I thought I had to delete your name because I thought the page took up too much room. Again, I AM SO SORRY!