Eleka gave me permission to post what I thought might be a chapter two of her fic, so here it is.
If you want chapter 1, go read it on her account at this link.
www. fanfiction. net/s/2171993/1/
yes, there are spaces so I can actually post the address here.
Emiko frowned even more.
"You can't reach him...I hope it didn't happen..."
Daisuke looked questioningly at his mother.
"What do you mean?"
"I thought it was a legend of some sort and only that. You see Daisuke, there is a point in time, the 3 months before a tamer turns 15. The tamer's spirit and his kaitou's separate before joining completely."
Daisuke looked confused.
"As in they have to stay together until they find their sacred maiden or die. But if something happens, to push away the tamer's kaitou, they're forced out and disappear, along with the other tamer's kaitou. But to do that takes a lot of energy, and it's a really big strain. It could kill the tamer."
Daisuke seemed as though his mother's words had finally dawned on him.
"But I didn't-...that means...Satoshi!"
Daisuke didn't know why, but he was panicked. He couldn't bear the thought of Satoshi dying. He quickly said goodbye to his mother and not bothered with how he looked, ran as fast as he could to the commander's house.
'What did he do?..'
Daisuke had finally reached Satoshi's house, out of breath, but still focused on getting in. He knocked as hard as could on the door.
"Hiwatari-kun? Are you okay?"
No response. Daisuke called again with even more urgency.
"Satoshi?"
Still, there was no response from within. Daisuke tried to open the door, knowing it was likely futile. Surprisingly, it opened. Daisuke had once been to the commander's house before, so he was able, with a few wrong turns, find his way to his fellow tamer's room.
"Hhiwatari-kun..."
Daisuke looked around. The bed's covers were jumbled and strewn around the room, but there was no one in site. Suddenly, he remembered that the young commander had left while they walked home to the station.
'Maybe he's still there...I hope he's okay...'
Daisuke quickly walked toward the station. On the way, he saw a shape in the street. He looked closer and recognized the soft blue hair.
"Hiwatari-kun!"
The commander stirred.
"N-niwa..."
Satoshi coughed. Daisuke saw the crimson liquid fall from his lips.
"No! Hiwatari-kun, stay awake!"
Daisuke hurried to his side and picked up the commander. He carried him as carefully as he could back to his home.
"Mom!"
Emiko had been sitting in the kitchen awaiting her son's return. She went to the door and saw her son and the young commander. She still felt tense around him but seeing the condition he was in, ignored that fact that he was their enemy.
"So it is true...Daisuke, lay him on the couch, you go get some pillows and a blanket. Then please start a bath."
"Okay."
Daisuke hurried off to complete the tasks he had been given.
Somewhere else, far away from the Niwa home and their tamer's, two bewildered kaitous hovered, unsure of what had just occurred.
There goes what I thought of might be her chapter two, maybe I can continue this if she doesn't mind...
