CHAPTER 2: THE MAKEOVER PART II
2 And Half Months Later.
They were almost done. Their was only two weeks left of summer vacation and they were entering the most important part of the makeover, the hair, makeup, and shopping. Over the past months Hermione had probably gotten what would be considered the perfect hourglass figure, the same could be said of Gwen but Gwen wasn't as curvy as Hermione was. Hermione who decided that she would start being called Mia, and Gwen had gone out to the mall or the movies practically every day in order to teach Mia how to flirt and to get people to notice her without even trying.
First Mia and Gwen went to stores in order to get shirts they bought:
10 tank tops
6 halters tops
15 long sleeved shirts
4 denim jackets
8 dress shirts
Then they went to get pants and skirts:
25 pairs of jeans
20 denim skirts
5 dress skirts
Their next stop was shoes:
3 gym shoes
6 sneakers
8 boots
4 heels
Then they went to get the underwear, to Gwen this was important because she felt as though a person is defined by what type of underwear they wear. Lets just say that Mia unlike Gwen did not like thongs, she preferred lacy boy shorts and she bought them in every color. Getting the bras though were a bigger problem because over the summer she had grown and she wasn't sure what cup she was so she had to ask the sales lady what size she thought would fit her best, can you say embarrassing. In the end she turned out to be a 36 C. and that was the end of the shopping spree. Now it was time for the hair.
When Gwen and Mia first went to the hair salon Mia was slightly scared of what they were going to do to her. When the hair stylist saw her she almost fainted from the sight of all the frizz. It took them a total of 1 hour to straighten Mia's hair, then they had to do her eyebrows and giver her a facial, manicure, and pedicure. Which took another half hour. After that they went to another store where they bought tons of hair conditioners and shampoos along with makeup. They went to Mia's home after that so they could pack every thing in Mia's trunks, and give her a makeup lesson.
But when they got there Mia's parents had a surprise for her. Apparently while Mia and Gwen had been gone an owl had arrived informing Mia's parents that she had gotten the head girl position at Hogwarts. When Mia heard this she started jumping up and down with joy. To her the summer had been perfect. She couldn't wait for her friends to see the new her because over the summer she hadn't told anyone about her makeover she wanted it to be a surprise.
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