Well I know what I said last time but it's a lie I tell you a really big lie. This story does have a plot. Well sorta. I don't know every tiny detail yet so I'll just have to wing it for a little while. Did anyone have any problems with any of the words I used? Well I hope not. I would like to point out that I think that this story is yaoi because I want to write a sequel to this story and their both male in that story, but if you don't want Ranma and Ryoga to get together just don't read the sequel to this and you can still call it a Ranko/Ryoga fic. Also Ryoga is falling in love with Ranma not what gender he is, and so, because Ranma is normally a boy I class it as yaoi. Now I know that this tiny little sentence could start a snowball of controversy but I don't care, so there.
Wow, I know, I know. Its been ages since I last updated and for all those people who reviewed, thank you. I started reading over the first 5 chapters(I've got them all written I just haven't posted) and I got about 2 lines into the first chapter and had to stop. I sucked, I really did suck back then. I'm not going to even attempt to fix them up, I'd probably commit suicide before I go past the first chapter, seeing as how bad they were. (To all the people who read both chapters and could enjoy it, I praise you on your patience and interpretation skills, you must have needed a dictionary to understand what the hell I was writing.)
I will however, go through the next 3 chapters (that have never been seen by the public), and try to fix them up as best I can, still can't grantee that it will be my best work, but if you hang around long enough, it will get better, I'm sure. I hope.
PS: sometimes Ranma will be called Ranma-Chan, Ranko, or just plain Ranma, it doesn't matter which name I use he will still be a she until I state otherwise.
" " Speaking
' ' thoughts (these will come in later)
flashbacks (they'll come in later)
-3 Months Later-
"Ha. I finally made it back." Ryoga sighed as he looked at the school gate where everyone was pouring out, talking with their friends about what they were going to do now that they didn't have school anymore. Just then, he heard something that always got him riled up.
"Oh my pigtailed goddess. Now that, the evil sorcerer Ranma Saotome hasn't shown his face in school for a while, we can finally be together my love. Come to me." Kuno's voice could be heard by the whole school. Everyone turned around to see what would happen.
"Kuno, leave me alone. Get it through your head I don't love you. Now if you don't mind…" Ranma-Chan yelled looking rather tired and pissed off at the same time. She kicked Kuno into the air but he only went as far as the front gate, landing right on top of Ryoga. Ryoga let out a loud moan that got the attention of everyone.
"Oh I'm so sorry Ryoga. I didn't know you were there." Ranma-Chan apologized while hefting Kuno off Ryoga and helping him up and dusting him off.
"S'ok Ranma, really you can stop now. What's wrong with you? Normally Kuno would have flown across the sky but he only landed about 2 meters away." Ryoga said as he picked up his pack back, which had fallen off when Kuno had knocked him over.
"Yeah I know what you mean. I've been like this all week. I hardly have enough energy to spar anymore. I'm getting tired and moody and I'm always feeling sick." Ranma-Chan explained as they walked along.
"Have you gone to see doctor Tofu about it yet?" Ryoga asked, but before Ranma could answer…
"Will you two slow down and wait for me. How could you just leave me there? I'd expect that from Ranma, but not you Ryoga." Akane yelled as she stormed up to them in a huff.
"I'm sorry Akane." Ryoga said getting the whole sentence out of his mouth without stammering once. He was very pleased. He was finally gaining control over his feelings for Akane. Then he remembered that Ranma hadn't answered his question yet.
"Hey Ranma you haven't answered my question." Ryoga said turning towards Ranma-Chan.
"I haven't been because Kasumi seems to be over there a lot more often than she used to be. And I know better than to go see doctor Tofu when Kasumi's around." Ranma-Chan said
"Well you could go now, I know for a fact that she's not there. I can't come, because I've got to practice for an upcoming cooking contest that I want to enter, so I'll see you two later then. Bye." And with that Akane ran down the street heading back to the Tendo Dojo.
"Well come on Ryoga lets go see doctor Tofu." Ranma-Chan said as she changed directions and headed in the direction of the good doctor.
"Hey! Why am I coming? I don't need to see him. Ranma don't run away from me when I'm talking to you. Hey get back here." Ryoga yelled after a laughing Ranma-Chan as she ran down the street.
When they got to the doctors they were both relieved that Akane was right about Kasumi not being there, but it looked like they weren't the only ones using this time as a chance to see doctor Tofu. The waiting room was filled with people. They took a number and jumped in line. After about a 2 hour wait they finally got to see doctor Tofu.
"Well it's about time. I was starting to think that we would never get to see you today doctor." Ranma said as she took a seat.
"Yes I know what you mean Ranma. I've seen so many people today. I would think it's the most I've ever seen in a day. I wonder why some of them waited two days after their accident to come to me." Doctor Tofu said as he got out his Ranma's chart.
"Now what's wrong Ranma? You don't look very well today." Doctor Tofu then listened to Ranma's symptoms looking more confused by the minute. When Ranma had finished talking Doctor Tofu got up went to his bookshelf, took a book out leafed through it and then put it back.
"This is very strange Ranma, very strange indeed. I never would have guessed that this could happen. Although it should have popped into my head that this might happen. Ranma, with you being a girl now really does prove it." Doctor Tofu then seemed to forget that they were in the room and started mumbling to himself.
"So Doctor, what's wrong with him?" Ryoga said. Ranma was starting to get worried until doctor Tofu started talking again.
"Well Ranma the reason that you're always sick is because you've got a really bad case of morning sickness." Doctor Tofu stated.
"Hang on. How could Ranma have morning sickness when…?" Ryoga voice drifted away as he realized what the doctor was implying.
"Hey what's going on you guys, tell me." Ranma looked at Ryoga then to Doctor Tofu then back to Ryoga again.
"Ranma I have some good news for you… You're pregnant." Doctor Tofu said in his best professional voice.
"What…did you…just say? Ryoga please tell me I heard wrong. I heard wrong didn't I?" Ranma ranted trying to convince herself that she heard wrong.
"No Ranma you heard right. Congratulations." Ryoga said trying not to sound too freaked out.
"NO IT'S NOT TRUE. I'M NOT PREGNANT, I TELL YOU. I'M NOT." Ranma yelled getting the attention of everyone in the waiting room. She couldn't take it any more, they were all lying to her. She did the only thing she could do. She ran. She ran out of the doctor's office and out side to the street crying.
"Ranma, come back don't go. Calm down." Ryoga yelled as he ran after her.
"Poor girl, getting pregnant like that at her age. Well at least she has a good boyfriend who sounds like his going to stand by her." The next patient said to Doctor Tofu.
TBC
did you all see that one coming? Well I did but that would be cause I'm the author and it's my story and I can do anything. Even take over the world bwahahahahahaha…bwahahahaha…bwahahaha… ok I'm tired now from all that laughing. Ha, like I could take over the world. Yeah right like that's gonna happen anytime soon. Now I need help. Well I'm still writing but it's not like you haven't noticed that already cause you've gotten this far.
The language still sounds really childish doesn't it? Well, it has been awhile, that's the excuse I'm using anyway.
I edited some things, but I didn't want to change to much, cause all the ideas from when I was writing this chapter have gone now, so I have to rely on the old story line in my head, and the cryptic messages I send myself in my stories. If you do find any bugs in the chapter feel free to tell me about them, in a nice tone please. I would really hate for someone to write how I can improve, but sound like a real bitch at the same time. I just don't see the point in bagging someone, cause they won't take what to say into count and even if the suggestion might be good, they won't listen to it, cause all they'll see I a big mean poo poo head.
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