I'm not sure how this is going to turn out. Until then, enjoy! (Yes the first chapter is really short. sorry about that)
-Kidnapped-
Chapter 1: The Awakening
Liza was standing in a jungle after a painful fall. How the hell had she landed in a jungle? She could barely hear her own thoughts as they were
muffled by sickening 'whirring' behind her. She made her way slowly to the edge of the jungle. From the corner of her eye, she saw a broken
plane scattered along the beach. 'Oh my god…,' was all she could think at the moment. Then the wing fell. Liza jumped back. 'There dead, I'm
dead, dead……,' she thought. She saw a man among all of them, running, helping, healing. She let the fear in, let the tears pour down her cheeks.
Liza got down on her knees. She wanted help. "Help!" she called. No one heard her. Again, she opened her mouth to call out. But, a grubby
hand from behind stopped it. Then, darkness.
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