Title: My Pride
By: Alchemist X
Summary: Ed has become a sin, Envy's greatest dream has come true. Now all he has to do is seduce him. Envy/Ed a.k.a Envy/Pride
Disclaimer: Okay I don't own FMA, or the characters. I don't even own "Pride" I've seen fan art of him, thought it was a fun idea so I wrote a story about it. If ANYONE has any information about Pride I would love to know it!
Chapter One:
Ed starred at his reflection, with cold lifeless eyes. He ran his fingers threw his loose hair and sighed. His hair was out of its usual braid, and he wore a outfit similar to Envy's. Weird marking ran up his arms, down his legs, and the sign of the dragon eating its own tail was on his chest.
The down behind him opened and someone walked in. That someone was… Envy.
"You know you should keep your hair down more often, you look pretty good…" Envy commented. Ed was quiet, and Envy gritted his teeth in annoyance. "So Lust told me you haven't talked since you got here… pretty sad… you shouldn't hold a grudge on us for you're mistake." He said.
He saw that Ed weakly nodded his head.
That's right, I was his mistake, but it was worth it. Giving Al a body. It was worth it. But the dull marks on his arms should have left once the transmutation was over. They didn't. And the next thing he knew, He woke up here… there… With Lust and Gluttony standing over him. Lust gave him his new clothes, and told him the bad news. His life had changed forever…
"… you given?" Envy asked. Ed snapped out of his thoughts and looked at the sin. "What?" he asked. Envy glared, "I asked, what pathetic name were you given?"
"oh…" Ed sighed, "They called me… Pride…"
"Pride?" Envy asked, "That's lame, but it fits you…" he mumbled and sat on the sorry excuse of a bed that was in the room. "At least your talking…You know Ed your going to have to forget your LIFE, your one of us now. So get over it, and act like it a homunculi"
"Uh huh" Ed nodded and went back to looking at his reflection. There was a long moment of silence. Envy thought he might have hurt the chibi's feeling when… "Hey…Envy," he said.
Envy looked at him; Edward had never really called him Envy before. Sure his called him by his name when he was talking to that pathetic brother of his, or the Colonel. But not to him… It was usually "Bastard" or "Ass hole" or "Monster…" never… Envy.
"What?" He asked trying to hide this jumping feeling he got when Ed called him.
"How am I suppose to go on with my life? How do You live?" Ed asked.
If Envy had a heart, it probably would have snapped in two. His once prideful, stubborn chibi looked so sad and hopeless. He wanted to hug the little blond… wait…hug… this was still Edward Elric… that…bastards son… he didn't want to Hug his half brother, the person he accused of all his problems.
Envy didn't answer Ed's question instead stood up angrily and stormed out of the room. Ed watched not saying a word. But when Envy opened the door he saw Lust at the entrance. "Lust?" Envy asked.
Lust nodded to him and looked at Edward, "Pride, come with me." She said.
Edward got up silently and passed Envy. Envy watched Ed and Lust walk down the hallway. The Sin was shaking slightly, but he didn't know why. Was he really that angry, or did "Pride" shake him up?
2 hours later Ed came back in. He slammed the door close and slowly slid to the floor. Breathing harshly and thinking… "Edo?" came a voice. And ed looked at his bed to see Envy.
"Your still here?" Ed asked.
"Why did Lust take you away? Going over union rules?" Envy chuckled at his own joke but Ed didn't find it so funny.
"Yeah actually, she explained to me what a freak I was…" he mumbled.
"Now now Chibi-san… that's no way too…"
"Why?" Ed asked cutting Envy off. Envy was a little offended the boy cut him off but waited for his question. "Why do you call me Ed? Edo? Or that cursed Chibi crap. I'm pride now remember?" Ed asked.
Envy sighed and got off the bed. With out warning he hugged Ed. Ed was shocked but… happy. Someone in the horrible place was showing him kindness. He had meat Dante. Who seemed like a heartless bitch, who hated his guts. And wrath was a little timid around him now. But greed was the worse flashing him toothily ugly smiles that told Ed he was on his turf. Ed kept a constant guard up. And now that he was in his "room" he wanted to cry…
…and he did… in front of Envy. Who held him sadly and said, "I don't know why Edo… I wish I did… but I don't…"
"I thought the name "Pride" fit me?" He asked slightly mocking Envy's earlier statement.
"Yea well, being a Homunculi doesn't…"
Author's Panic Ramblings: GAH! I KILLED IT! XD I am so killing the ending for the series, but oh well. I really really really hope I didn't get anyone out of character… to much. And I also hope I didn't kill the character's definition. Like I really don't know Dante… all I know about her is that she's Envy's mom and the Sin's boss. I'm Also disappointed in how short it is I couldn't think of anything else. And truth be told I'm having problems coming up with a plot… I have ideas floating around for FUTURE chapters… but that's it. IDEAS WOULD BE GREAT! (I'll give you credit if you spark my dead Light bulb.)
Anyway REIVEW PLEASE!
