Title: My Pride
By: Alchemist X
Summary: Ed has become a sin; Envy's greatest dream has come true. Now all he has to do is seduce him. Envy/Ed a.k.a Envy/Pride
Disclaimer: Okay I don't own FMA, or the characters. I don't even own "Pride" I've seen fan art of him, thought it was a fun idea so I wrote a story about it. If ANYONE has any information about Pride I would love to know it!
Special Thanks you Meh Reviewers:
Maruken: WOW! Thanks for another review, and the good ideas. I might use one, Thank you for your encouragement. This has lifted the thought that I might be the one that kills any future Ed as Pride stories… -- … Thanks again and keep up the reviews. They full the imagination!
SinxEnvy: WHEE! An Update! Thanks for your review… love ya' name!
Nelja: sigh I know, I know... I really should have, and I knew I'd get something wrong. And I'll probably make more mistakes. Just please Bare with me, and maybe help me along the way! I'll try to fit some of the information you gave me into it. I'm sure it will be a relief to all readers. Thanks for your review and your help!
Touya Koori Tenshi: Aw! Thanks... but come on, I must have killed something. But your review meant a lot. So, stay cool! And keep review.
Shimmy: OH! Thank you sooo much! What would I do without that information? Oh man, I feel so dumb. Because I knew all that! I guess I got lost in all the pictures of Ed as Pride. I was so excited…sigh But thank you, thank you, thank you! That meant a lot to me, and thanks again, but for being patient and not yelling at me!
Eds-lil-problem: Thank you for your review, hope this update was soon enough for you!
Envylover1414- Of course i'll upate, oh looky... i just did
Ah yes, I had so many people review, some I knew and some I didn't. And thank you people who put me on your fav. And watch list. I LOVE YOU ALL! NOTE: this chapter is short so I added another, longer one. I felt bad about leaving you hanging with something so short…
Chapter Two:
Drip…Drip…Drip…
Something was sliding down his arm, something wet, something…
Ed looked down at his alchemic markings and gasp. They were… dripping. All the way down his arm. He looked at his other arm, and his legs. They were doing the same thing. It looked so much like blood. He thought he'd have a fainting spell. But he stayed conscious as he watched it cover his whole limbs. Then he felt it drip its way down his chest and up his neck.
IT WAS TAKING OVER!
A stinging sensation came over Pride, and he screamed in horror and pain.
Ed shot up in his small cot bed. And quickly examined his body… the marks were still intact. But the stinging sensation was still there.
His hand came up and touch the mark of the Sin, it was what hurt.
It started glowing, and Ed quickly became scared. Where was Envy? was that suppose to happen?
His eyes locked on to his desk where his mirror laid. And a sheet of paper with a really badly drawn map of the building they stay in. The rooms were labeled with little heads of the people who occupied them. He picked it up and sighed in relief, "Thanks Envy…" gee… never thought he'd ever say that.
There he was… His finger was placed on the crayon drawing of Pride's Head. There was Wrath… Lust…and Gluttony… and There at the whole other end of the map… was Envy. 'He probably worked extra hard to make himself look better then the other drawings…' Ed smiled to himself. He grabbed his small blanket and draped it around his shoulders. Another Sting of pain and he bit back a yelp and some tears, before leaving.
Knock Knock Knock
"I swear to god Gluttony, I'm not going to take you to the kitchen again!" Envy yelled opening the door, but stopped his evil ranting early once he saw, Ed. Who's body was shaking from a pain, and his Sin mark was glowing. He was fighting back the tears and jumped to Envy.
"En..Envy… It…It hurts…" he whimpered.
"What? I don't know what to do!" Envy stated turning his back to the chibi. And Ed thought he'd slam the door in his face for a moment. Before Envy paused, and pointed to the dark room with a sigh. "Come on in, Edo…" he said. Ed would have smiled if the pain wasn't there, and came in.
Both crawled into the small bed without a word, and Envy hugged Ed close to stop the teen from shivering so much. Secretly Envy knew what was going on… Ed was finishing becoming a homunculi… He was losing his memory…
Sorry it was so short everyone! I felt really bad about that so I added another chapter. Really long to, so all my reviewers should be happy! I don't usually post two chapters at once, but I thought I should be nice, so you should be nice and review in each chapter!
PLEASE! Either way, REVIEW!