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Trillian42: Yeah, I was writing the first chapter at my best friend's house, and she only has word pad, so it came out looking all weird, but I HAD to write it right then, you know what mean? Anyway, I tried to check it in Beta, but it didn't work very well, and the format was all funky looking, anyway, none of the other one's will be done without word processor! That's 4 sure! Day if ur reading this, sorry, but defiantly look into getting "word!"
-Britannia
Friendsfreak5604: Thanks! The strange twist thing was Dayna's (my best friend's) idea, I was asking her what would make it a little more interesting, and then she said, "I don't know, have something huge happen, and then make it a dream, or a thought, or a premonition," and then I said, "Brilliant!" And came up with the Owen/Keely thing: ) I was also totally glad it was a dream! This kind of turns into a thriller type thing, like in Flightplan, where Kyle (Jodie Foster)'s daughter's there with her and just disappears, and the heart they made's still on the window! Anyway they start to think they're crazy, or imagined it, but they both saw it, who would do that…who else right? They result will surprise you, ; ) I know, I'm killing all of you here, lol
-Britannia
Spoinker: Thanks! It gets more awesome and thriller-y, hope everyone likes the next chapter!
-Britannia
Be234therz: Yeah, it will, remember: ALL my stories end happily! LOL Enjoy this chapter!
Daynaluvsphil: Thanks Day! I was sooo hoping u weren't going to say win an Oscar for it like the other day! That was hilarious. I don't think I've EVER laughed harder, and your mom, "Dayna, Oscar's are for acting NOT writing…" LOL! That was soooooo classic, and what made it funnier, is I think you were serious! Sorry all done embarrassing u online, anyway, talk 2 you soon!
Xoxo,
-Britannia
"But there's no way…Mom we saw the message!" Dana said touching the mirror
"Phil….we…how…I…" Keely said
"Keely, are you SURE you saw the message?"
"Yes Phil! We both did!" Keely said aggravated
"Well, where do you suppose it went?" the police officer, who's name was Officer McLoughlin, said
"I don't know, but it was there!"
"Yes, Officer, it was there, but I don't know how it just disappeared!" Dana said
"Officer, look, it obviously wasn't here, and Dana and Keely just let their imaginations get the better of them," Phil said
"No! Damn it, Phil! It was there, I don't care what you think, it was there!" Just then Keely scared herself, she actually sounded crazy, she looked from Dana, to Phil, to Officer McLoughlin, then just left the room. Officer McLoughlin looked at Phil like, "You sure know how to pick 'em." when Dana looked at Phil and shook her head, then ran after Keely.
"Mom! We saw it, don't worry, you're not crazy."
"I know, but Dana…."
"What! If just you, or just I saw it, then it would be different, but we BOTH saw it! Mom, if you're crazy then, so am I."
"Dana….maybe we did imagine it,"
"NO! I know what I saw, and so do you, don't let Officer Practical tell you any different!"
"Dana, maybe we are crazy,"
"NO! Stop saying that! We aren't crazy!"
"Dana, the more you say it, the more it sounds true."
"Stop it!We-"
"Dana, do not say that again! We must be!"
"No we aren't!"
"Dana, you really need to think this through, we see the message, then we come back and it's gone, no smear, nothing, just gone, how do you think that happened?"
"I don't know mom! All I know is that we saw it!"
"Dana Mandy Teslow-Diffy, do not raise your voice at me, and the discussion is over, O.K.? Nothing was there, we just imagined it."
"No!"
"Dana!" Keely yelled, "Stop it,"
"Mom, I-"
"Dana, don't! I'm not talking about this anymore!"
"Fine," Dana said, although she was close to crying, her eyes were stinging, but she didn't want Keely to see her cry about this, so she ran outside, and just walked.
She had no idea where she was going, and it was starting to rain. As she walked she heard a song playing in a store, and it fit perfectly with what was happening:
Raindrops keep fallin' on my head
And just like the guy whose feet are too big for his bed
Nothin' seems to fit
Those raindrops are fallin' on my head, they keep fallin'
So I just did me some talkin' to the sun
And I said I didn't like the way he got things done
Sleepin' on the job
Those raindrops are fallin' on my head, they keep fallin'
But there's one thing I know
The blues they send to meet me won't defeat me
It won't be long till happiness steps up to greet me
Raindrops keep fallin' on my head
But that doesn't mean my eyes will soon be turnin' red
Cryin's not for me
'Cause I'm never gonna stop the rain by complainin'
Because I'm free
Nothin's worryin' me
------ trumpet ------
It won't be long till happiness steps up to greet me
Raindrops keep fallin' on my head
But that doesn't mean my eyes will soon be turnin' red
Cryin's not for me
'Cause I'm never gonna stop the rain by complainin'
Because I'm free
Nothin's worryin' me
She was almost soaking wet by now, and she was so sad about everything that happened, she just wished she could rewind it, and do it all again. It would have been good, had that been possible, but it wasn't. She continued to walk, still not knowing where she was going when she heard a familiar voice say, "Yeah, she's about this tall, dark brown hair, looks like me."
Dana turned, and saw Keely giving her description to a store owner.
"And how old is this girl?" the old man, who looked like Santa Claus, said.
"17,"
"Oh, golly be, we don't want a loose a little gem like that do we?" he said, removing his little round Santa glasses, and buffing them
"No, we don't, have you seen her?"
He chuckled, and sounded exactly like Santa's laugh, it was really creepy, then Santa 2 said, "No, I'm quite sorry dear, but no 17 year-old, brunette clones of you have passed by here,"
"Um, thank-you anyway, sir."
"Your quite welcome," he said, and chuckled again, and when a few people walked by, he disappeared.
Dana shook her head, and then yelled, "Mom!"
Keely looked immediately, and saw Dana, soaking wet, waving at her, and smiling her face off
"Ohmygod! Dana!" she said, running to her and hugging her.
"Hi!" Dana said
"Why….how…when..?"
"I had to get out and think, mom I know we aren't crazy,"
"Dana, we're not starting this again are we?"
"Mom-"
"DaNA!"
"Right, sorry,"
"Thank-you. Look, you're going to catch pneumonia, so let's get back to the hotel, before anything else happens, O.K.?"
"Fine,"
Keely linked arms with wet Dana so she couldn't run off, they passed Santa's store, and Santa tipped his hat, (no, not a Santa hat:P) and smiled. Dana and Keely smiled back, and kept walking.
When they finally got back to the hotel, Dana ran into the room, and flopped down on the bed.
"Uh-uh! Get your soaking wet self off the bed, and change, now!"
"Yes, ma'am," Dana said, jumping off the bed, and running to the closet.
"Oh no!" Keely said
"What!" Dana said, running out of the closet,
"Again!"
"Wha-" Dana stopped mid-sentence, their was another message on the mirror, it read, "Give up, give up, if you want to make it out alive, telling won't do any good, somehow the messages are only here, when you are, ever think you trigger them? Or maybe you're crazy, either way, you won't end up married to Phil, Keely, and Dana-you'll never have the happy life you want, ever!"
"See Mom!" Dana said, that's it, I'm taking a picture of it this time, she said, luckily she left her camera on the end table right by the bathroom, she held up the camera, turned the flash off, and took six pictures from different angles.
"There, as long as one of us doesn't leave the room, it'll stay here, so you go tell your dad and Officer McLoughlin, and I'll stay here,"
"No, what if something happens? I'll leave, call, and they can come here themselves."
"Good idea Boo-Bop."
"Thanks," Dana said
She walked out into the room, picked up her cell, and ran back into the bathroom
"Mom I called them,"
"Great,"
"Keely! We got here as soon as we could what- Oh my God!" Phil said when he saw the mirror
"What is going on! I-…." Officer McLoughlin said, "For the love of my socks!" he mumbled when he saw the mirror
"See, we told you!" Dana said
"Hrmph." Officer McLoughlin said
"Excuse me?" Keely said
"This all a clever ruse to prove a point, I don't believe it,"
"Officer, that's not it al all!"
"Hrmph." he said again
"Oh would you stop making that noise!" Keely said irritated
"Look, Mrs. Diffy, I have no evidence to prove that you didn't do this, or that you did,"
"We didn't. That should be evidence enough."
"Yes, but how do we know that, now do we?"
"We know that!" Keely said pointing from her to Dana, and back again
"That doesn't mean anything!"
"Yes… it ..does!" Keely said putting irritated emphasis on every word
"No, pal, it doesn't."
"Look officer, here's the evidence, can't you analyze it for prints or something! I know the person wrote it,
wrote it with their finger." Phil interjected
"Oh Lord," Officer McLoughlin mumbled, "Fine, fine, if it'll get your women to can it."
"Yeah it will," Phil said, and rolled his eyes, behind his back.
Officer McLoughlin began analyzing when Dana heard footsteps from inside the shower.
A/N: Dun, dun, dun! Who's in their shower? Why are they there? Will anyone make it out alive.
Laughs like Vincent Price You'll just have to wait, and see………