Takanoru: I've been listening to Jimmy Buffett a lot lately. I love the song "It's Five o'clock Somewhere" so had to use it here. Enjoy!
Kicked Out
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Roy and Maes were sitting together talking happily like "brothers" do. To anyone else they seemed to be the best of friends having a good time, which they were, except they were drunk.
"Ha, ha, ha I dun… beleeeve you did thhaat Roy! Poor Ed!" Maes laughed. Roy gave him a drunken smirk then looked at his empty shot glass.
"Poouuuuur me sumthin tall an' strong," Roy sang as he "jumped" onto the bar.
"Make it a huurrricane, ha, ha, b'fore I gooo insane," Hughes sang as he joined Roy on the bar.
"Isss ooonly half past twelve, but I dun care," Roy began again as he threw his arm over Mae's shoulder.
"Hey, you two get outta here if you're that drunk," said the bartender. They nodded their heads and climbed down, tripping over their own feet.
As they walked out they sang, "Isss fiiiive o'clock sumwheeeere."
Takanoru: I like the image of the two of them drunk. Or maybe the image of Roy bursting into song.