Doggie Days
By. DemonGirl-Setsuna
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DemonGirl-Setsuna: Hi there! Setsuna here!
I'd like to say that the first 7 chapters were done on notepad, not Microsoft Word, like chapters 8 to now!
It takes me about an hour to type up one chapter and upload it and post it! Plus I do have work I have to do in class, so I'll be lucky if I could even post two chapters instead of one!
As for revising chapters 1-7, actually I'm happy with them, even though their full of grammar mistakes and spelling errors, I'm pleased!
Only because people can read them and as they get deeper into the story-line, they can see the errors & mistakes vanish, and the writing style improve.
Meaning I'm keeping chapters 1-7 the way they are, so readers can see my improving writing abilities!
Here is Ch. 13!
Please Enjoy!
Disclaimer: I don't own InuYasha or anything belonging to Rumiko Takahashi.
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Ch. 13
The Death of Remii and
the Talk of Sweet Dreams
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"I repeat: Get away from him, now!", Kagome shouts.
"My master said I can't kill you, wench", Remii retorts, "But I can kill you and tell him that you got in my way of killing him", she points towards InuYasha slumped against the wall, then fades back into the surroundings.
'Where is it?', Kagome thinks, searching around, 'There it is!', she releases her arrow.
As the arrow strikes the wall, Kagome can hear a gasp of pain.
"You striked me down…", Remii gasps, her body appearing around the arrow; it's sticking out her left breast and through her heart, "…You wench…", she falls limp on the arrow.
"That was a close one", Kagome sighs, 'InuYasha!', she screams in her head, running to his side, 'Please be alive'.
InuYasha's breathing is soft, but shaky. Kagome gently shakes him by his left shoulder.
"InuYasha, wake up!", she shakes harder, until he grabs her hand, "InuYasha?"
"Don't talk so loud, my head's pounding", he says, putting his other hand to the bump on the side of his head from colliding with the wall, he removes his hand and opens his eyes, "Just great, a head injury", he says, staring at the blood on his hand.
"What about your shoulder?", Kagome asks.
"It only hurts when I move it", he replies.
"Can I take a look", she says.
"Only if your gentle", InuYasha says.
"I will", she kneals beside him on his right side, she examines his shoulder when she notices something, "What happened to your neck?", she pulls his hair aside to uncover the bruise around his neck.
"That's from Remii's chain being wrapped around my neck a couple hours ago", he huffs, "Where is Remii?"
"She is right there", Kagome replies, pointing.
"How did you track her, by the time I saw her shadow, I couldn't dodge her attack", InuYasha says, amazed.
Kagome walks over to the dissolving corpse, "I tracked her using this", she pulls a jewel shard off the clothing and holds it up.
"A shikon jewel shard! But how?"
"I figured that tracking her by her shadow was foolish, so while she was preoccupied digging her claws into you, I stuck a shard on her clothes, then shot an arrow at her, and when she blended in again, I only had to track the jewel shard on her clothes", she replies, smiling.
(A/N: It was a good thing Kagome did keep some of the jewel shards with her, instead of giving them all to Himiko!)
"You're not a dumb girl after all", he says, a blush flaring on his cheeks, "Thank you, for saving me Kagome".
"Can you walk?", Kagome asks, offering her hand to him.
"Yeah, I think so", he takes her hand and stands up, he wobbles and catches his hand on the wall to steady himself, "Just give me a minute to clear my head", he groans.
"You want to take some of Himiko's potion?", she says, looking in her bag.
"You still have it?"
"Here it is", she pulls out a bottle, "But how are we going to heat it up?"
"Midori uses fox fire like Shippo does, right?", InuYasha suggests.
"You're right! Midori wake up, we need you", Kagome calls.
"What is it, Kagome?", Midori yawns, poking out from under Kagome's hair.
"We need you to heat this bottle up with your fox fire", Kagome says, handing her the bottle.
"Sure Kagome", her hands glow bluish-green as she rubs the bottle, "All done", she hands the bottle back to Kagome, "Kagome, where is InuYasha?"
"I'm behind you, brat", InuYasha growls, after drinking from the bottle.
"Oh, so you're InuYasha", she squeaks, turning to face him, "Now I know why Kagome talks about you in her sleep, and what sweet things she says too", she adds, smiling cutely.
A blush flares onto Kagome's cheeks.
"As mush as I want to know what she said, we first have to escape this hell hole", he says, considering Kagome's feelings on this, "Lets get going", he starts to walk away, "Well, come on!", he shouts back.
"We're coming!", the girls say, following him.
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DemonGirl-Setsuna: That was the end of Ch. 13! What did you think? Please review!
The next chapter is called; 'Captured and InuYasha's Torment'.
Catch you readers next time!
