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Miriku-Yami's Queen of the Nile-Yami no Hikari: Two reviews from you. Yay! Your poems don't suck. I read them and I think they are quite nice. I hope you like this poem too!
Winter: You're welcome. Do you know what color their eyes are? I'm trying to make each poem relate to eye color in a weird sort of metaphor type thingy... Thank you so much for your nice comments.
Josephine Taylor: Thanks for this review and for reviewing my other fics too. I hope you enjoy this poem as well.
Serenity Wheeler
She is full of love and admiration.
Her eyes shine with trust.
They are encouraging.
Like hot chocolate,
Bringing life to frozen limbs
On a frosty winter day,
Her eyes are warm brown,
Full of strength and support
For those she cares about.
When all else fails she still
Believes her brother can win.
After all, he gave her sight.
Even when things looked hopeless
He persevered.
Now she sees the world through
Rose-colored glasses.
Naivety clouds her perception.
Perhaps it is better that way.
For if her brother had failed
Her and broken her faith in him
Her eyes wouldn't see
Anything
At all.