Reviewer Replies

Miriku-Yami's Queen of the Nile-Yami no Hikari: Thanks. I'm glad I'm improving. I am actually working on some rhyming ones and the disclaimer for this poem rhymes so there :)

Sakina the Fallen Angel: I liked that line too. I'll read your fic, but I'm kinda overwhelmed with schoolwork and life in general so it may be a while but I will eventually get around to it.

cheeky-eyes: Oh, that's alright. I'm glad your computer finally got fixed. Hope you like this one too.

Josephine Taylor: Thanks. I'm sure you could write poetry too if you tried. Let me know if you post any and I will read them.

Winter : I finally did Valon! I'm not totally satisfied with it because I don't really know much about his past (I've only seen the dub and they cut most of it out- I heard someone set his house on fire and his guardian or someone close to him died) so the poem is kinda vague... Hope you like it anyways.

Dragon2900: Glad you liked it. I'll do Joey eventually, don't worry.

Disclaimer:

It's high time I told you

(I know it's late, but lawyers, please don't sue)

Yugioh is something I will never own

Since that right belongs to Kazuki Takahashi alone.

As you read my poems I beseech you

To please remember this and leave a review!

Valon

Bright blue eyes should

Reflect a happy life,

But he has seen too much.

Cruelly, life has made him hard

And bitter.

Heartless blue-tinged flames

Stole what he cared about.

He watched, wide-eyed

As his life was devastated.

Tragedy destroyed him too

For now he is consumed by

Anger and sorrow.

Violence became an escape,

But every soul he took

Deepened the void in his heart.

Dark blue eyes reflect

Loneliness, pain, grief-

An empty life.