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Genre:
Action/Adventure, Sci-Fi, Suspense, Romance

Disclaimer:
"Martin Mystery" and "Totally Spies: Undercover" is owned by Marathon Animation
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Soundtrack: (Lyrics removed due to new policy)
Green Day - American Idiot

PG-13 or T rating for Offensive Language

Chapter 4 - At the Mothership

Meanwhile, Shuttle Independence UE5 finally went past Neptune, slowly disclosing the alien spacecraft behind the planet. It wasn't as they thought it be.

"Oh my gosh!" Cried Diana, the other astronauts looked outside through the window. Except for MOM, the others were amazed. They had never seen anything that big in their entire lives. It exceeds beyond their imagination. The alien spacecraft was shaped like a giant black box, 3 times the size of Jupiter and was moving at a slow pace.

"Speed slowing down to 900 miles per hour" Alan said and slows the shuttle to 1034 MPH as it flew above the Mothership's top surface

Space Shuttle Independence UE5 activated its landing gears and its wheels rolled safely on the giant spacecraft. The shuttle came to a complete stop. They unbuckle their seat belts; they were surprised to find themselves stuck on the floor. There was gravity on the ship

Quickly, the crew got dressed in their white NASA Outer spacesuits and the Oxygen tank backpack. The spacesuits were heavy as they walked towards the hatch. The airtight hatch opened. The surface of the mothership was black and flat. They were amazed at first sight. Martin was the first to step out of the shuttle, followed by Diana, Valeri, Alexis, MOM and George.

"One small step for man, one giant leap for mankind!" Quoted Martin.

"Who do you think you are?" Yelled Alexis. "Neil Armstrong?"

Martin stuck the Canadian flag proudly on the surface. A second later, Valeri stuck the Russian colors 3 feet away followed by George who then left the United Kingdom flag beside the Russian flag. It was a proud moment for them as they spread the flags open to show the bright colors.

"Whose gonna put for America?" Diana appealed. She was holding onto the American flag.

"Aahh! Who cares about those American idiots!" Alexis cried and went back to gather around Neil.

Diana sighed and stuck the flag next to the Canadian colors. She then gathered around Neil along with the others.

"Okay, let's get to work." Cried Valeri as he stood next to Neil.

"Alexis will stay here. Martin, Diana, MOM, Yuri, Valeri and I will go down." Neil commanded. Alexis nodded in agreement as he was too afraid to enter the alienship.

Valeri took out the laser from the exterior compartments. It was shaped like a giant cylinder. He stuck the laser on the black surface and it automatically cuts a big hole, big enough for one astronaut to squeeze through. The cut section sank inside along with the laser. Everybody looked down into the hole. Inside was a long hallway, there were no doors or marks on the walls. The walls were metallic grey and small lamps fitted on the selling lighting the hallway. One by one, the astronauts climbed inside. Neil was the first, followed by Martin, MOM, Valeri and Diana who was having doubts about entering.

"Whoa. So this is how the inside of an alien spaceship looks like." Martin exclaimed as he looked around. "Cool!"

"I'm having a bad feeling about this." Cried Diana as Valeri helped her down.

"MOM! What the hell are you doing?" Neil said in amazement as he watched MOM taking off his space helmet.

"Don't worry." MOM assured as she put down her helmet on the floor. "We can breath."

The others looked at each other and timidly removed their helmets. As they were doing so, they took a deep breath, but quickly realized that there was oxygen.

"Hey, we can breath!" Alan cried

"No one in the universe can survive without oxygen." MOM explained. Martin agreed

Neil took out the black notebook from his NASA Oxygen tank backpack. He opened the computer and a program immediately appeared on the monitor. The machine scanned a 500 mile radius of the alien spaceship. One by one, 3D passageways, walls and other objects appeared on the screen. "I'm getting a map on the computer...Looks like this spacecraft is just a void space of passageways and secrets rooms... according to the locator, we're still somewhere at the top. And it's a 103 long miles to the center"

"What's that over there?" Valeri turned his attention to a tunnel that is horizontal instead of vertical like the other passageways in the map.

"Look's like a passage...but why is it horizontal?" Martin questioned.

"I don't know, but it looks like a long way down" Valeri said.

"And perhaps a way to the center." Alan concluded to Valeri's statement. "C'mon let's go"

SPACE SHUTTLE CONSTITUTION WRECKAGE - UNKNOWN EARTH TIME

Unknown to the crew, Space Shuttle Constitution was already on the top surface of the mothership long before them. The Shuttle Orbiter landed 200 miles away from the landing site of Space Shuttle Independence UE5. The Orbiter had impacted hard on the surface and rolled 5 times before landing on its bottom. The cabins were still intact. The rear boosters were emitting smoke and its wings had detached away from the shuttle, the titanium surface was dented all over and its shiny metallic surface turned black, The words "UNITED STATES" and "CONSTITUTION UE5" could be faintly read on the shuttle's sides.

In the cockpit, Marty tried to lift himself up, but his heavy inner orange NASA spacesuit prevented him from doing it. He tried again, this time, believing in himself and ignoring his sore knee cap with the weight of the heavy spacesuit. He successfully stood up under his own power. Marty smiled. He looked around the cockpit, the place was in a mess. The monitors were cracked, the seats had detached and were all over the place, some buttons and dials were missing and everything that was stored in the cupboards were thrown all over the place. Marty made sure there was no one in there and entered the main cabin.

Like the cockpit, the main cabin was in a big mix-up, Marty looked around for survivors and saw something moved in the corner of the cabin. He immediately ran towards it and cleared the debris covering the person. It was Alex. She was sleeping like a baby. Marty grabbed her shoulders and shook to wake her.

"Alex... Alexandra wake up!"

Alex's big brown eyes slowly opened. "Marty? Is that you? Oh man I've had the worst nightmare. I dreamed that we, Sam and Clover were out in space to stop an alien mothership from destroying the Earth. Pretty scary huh?"

"Um Alexandra, I don't know how to tell you this but that was no nightmare."

Alex froze for a second. Her face looked a little shock. "Oh, no wonder it was so real."

Marty sighed and sweatdropped. He helped Alex up to her feet and went around the cabin to find the others

"AGGRAH!" A blood thundering screech filled the atmosphere.

Marty paused for a moment and said, "That sounds like..."

"Clover!" The couple figured.

Without delay, Alex and Marty ran towards the source, pushing away the debris that came in their way. The sound came from the supply room. When they entered, they spotted Clover crying on the floor. Marty and Alex thought that she was hurt and went over to her.

"Clover! You okay girlfriend?" Alex appealed as she rubbed her back.

"I broke a nail!" Clover sobbed. "Can you believe that?"

Alex and Marty sweatdropped. How did Clover knew that despite the orange gloves covering her hands? Marty looked at Alex and softly said, "How can she tell?"

"Don't look at me!" Alex answered and sighed.

"C'mon, we've got to find the others." Clover said and looked around.

"Find what?" An unknown female voice cried behind them.

Alex, Clover and Marty turned around. It was Sam. Her right hand was pressing against her forehead. The trio went over to her and gave her a big hug.

"Oh! Sammy, you okay?" Clover asked.

"Other than a nasty vertigo, I'm doing fine." Samantha responded as she rubbed her acing head. Clover helped to a seat and comforted her. Marty continued to look around for the others.

"Where's Yuri?" Marty curiously cried out.

"Right here." Cried a voice in an accent. The spies turned around and spotted Yuri pushing away the rubble that was on top of him. Marty, Alex and Clover helped him up to his feet as he dusted away his uniform, proudly displaying the golden wing badge on his orange spacesuit.

"Is everybody all right?" Yuri asked as he looked around.

"Yes." They all responded.

Suddenly, they heard a loud sound coming from the cockpit. It sounded like metal rod hitting the floor. Yuri slowly and quietly crept towards the cockpit, everybody followed behind. When they reached there, they were surprised to find Alan tinkering with the controls, doing everything he could to get the Shuttle started. All of a sudden, he banged his fist on the controls. He lowered his head down. The others knew that things were not looking good.

"The Shuttle's main engine is destroyed." Cried Alan sadly. He had lost hope of ever making it back to Earth. When Alex heard that, she ran out of the cockpit. Marty was stumped and followed her. Marty then spotted Alex crying in the corner of the maincabin. It was heartbreaking to see Alex like this. He went over to her.

"Alex, what's wrong?"

"I... I don't wanna die like this Marty." Alex gloomy reacted as she wiped her tears.

"Alex, look at me, you've been a WOOHP agent for years now. And you always got out of sticky situation."

"But that was different! We're all alone out here, Jerry can WOOHP us out of this, you heard Alan, the main engine's destroyed."

"Alex, I'm sure there's another way. You've gotta believe in yourself. Look, I'll add to Jerry's promise, you'll make it back to Earth safe and sound. Not a scratch on ya!"

Alex looked up at Marty. Marty put on a wide smile. "Promise?"

"Promise. Believe in yourself okay?" Marty requested and held onto Alex's hand tightly

"Okay."

Marty gave Alex a peck on the cheek and hugged her tightly. Before they knew it, the astronauts wore their outer white NASA spacesuits, Yuri and Alan stepped out into the surface first followed by the spies and Marty.

"C'mon, we have to go into the spaceship." Alan prompted as he went over to the exterior compartments next to the hatch."

"But Alan, without parts 1 and 2, the bomb is useless." Sam told the astronaut.

"Don't worry, we'll find them." Alan said and opened the exterior compartment. He took out the same drill as the one found on Shuttle Independence UE5.

Aww… nice sweet talk Marty…HA HA! Anyways, you'll be going with Ominae for a few days, hope you don't mind the busy schedule.

Mathew: I've already enabled my e-mail on my account, check it out….

Ominae: Okay, I'll check it out someday…See you again…

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