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Genre:
Action/Adventure, Sci-Fi, Suspense, Romance
Disclaimer:
"Martin Mystery" and "Totally Spies: Undercover" is owned by Marathon Animation
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Soundtrack: (Lyrics removed due to new policy)
Green Day - American Idiot
PG-13 or T rating for Offensive Language
Chapter 9 - A Bad Mistake
They quickly boarded into Shuttle Independence UE5. Everyone ditched their outer spacesuits, wearing only their orange inner NASA spacesuits. The alien army had already caught up to the astronauts and were getting ready to surround the spacecraft.
"We have to leave now before the aliens get to us." Alan said as he rushed towards the cockpit.
"Yuri, take the remote." Neil requested, "This will activate the bomb. When we leave the alien spaceship, press the red button."
"Got it Neil." The cosmonaut responded and took the remote from Neil. His left hand accidentally bumped into the metal wall and he dropped the remote. He bent down to pick it up when…
Valeri heard a chunky sound as he took a step. He lifted his foot and saw that he had accidentally stepped onto the remote control. Yuri was in rage. He started to yell at Valeri in Russian. Valeri fought back with another wave of Russian talk. 2 minutes later, Neil and Alan came in the lounge to see what the commotion was all about.
"Guys, we have to leave right now!" Alan yelled in anger, wondering why the others were still lingering around.
"What's going on in here?" Martin asked as he, Marty, Diana and the spies peered behind Yuri
"He stepped on the remote." Yuri responded with a hateful glare at Valeri.
"How was I supposed to know it was on the floor!" Valeri defended himself
Alan looked at the remote, which was crushed beyond repair. His eyes widen in fear. "Oh no, what the hell did you 2 do to the remote!"
Neil looked at the cosmonauts with an angry glare. "Stupid Russians that's the last time I trust you Soviet idiots with anything."
"I dare you to say that again you British idiot!" Yuri stood up and yelled. Valeri held him down.
Alan picked up the crushed remote and looked at it. "Since the backup remote can only go for 500 miles, someone is going to have to stay back and activate the bomb from the backup remote!"
Everyone looked at each other. Yuri started to yell at Valeri in Russian and before they knew it, exchange of words turned to a wrestling match as the pair started fighting. Yuri slammed his friend into the wall. Alex and Sam quickly held onto Yuri while Diana and Clover held back Valeri.
"Let me go... that arsehole damaged the control!" Yuri screamed as he struggled to free himself.
"You are the one who dropped it, idiot!" Valeri fought back as he tried to get free.
"Both of you stop!" Alexis yelled at the cosmonauts. Yuri and Valeri stopped struggling for a second. Alexis then scolded the pair in Russian. But the cosmonauts still continued to struggle. Neil started yelling and Alan tried to stop him. It was a chaotic moment as everyone else in the room watched. A tear rolled from Alex's eye. Hope was lost for ever getting home.
"STOP!" MOM suddenly busted at the top of her voice. Everyone turned to look at her. "If no one wants to risk their lives... I will."
Martin was shocked. He looked at MOM, who had a very serious look on her face, her eye lids were shut tight "MOM?"
"Okay, I'm with you." Said Yuri. Sam, Alex, Clover, Marty, Alan and Neil gave Yuri an angry glare.
"Are you out of your mind?" Diana was alarmed
MOM growled softly and banged her fist on one of the metal cupboards. Diana was taken aback. "Diana... Please. Like I said, if no one goes I'll go!"
The others stared at her with shock. They knew that she didn't want to die, but yet she wanted to sacrifice her life for the world. It was indeed a heroic act. MOM turned her head to the ground. A drop of tear fell from her face.
"I'll accompany you down MOM." Alan offered.
MOM looked up at Alan and gave a small grin. "Thank you."
Alan held onto MOM's hand and they stepped inside the cylinder shaped, airtight glass elevator. Martin and Diana started helplessly as their boss was taken back down to the surface of the alien ship again. This time, not returning.
In the elevator, Alan wore his space helmet. The elevator reached it's destination. MOM looked at the scenery outside. Alan knew that she didn't want to die like this.
"MOM. Before you go. I just wanna say that I love you." Alan said solemnly, his eyes fixed on MOM's eyes.
MOM was taken aback. "Excuse me?"
Alan gazed at MOM and started to kiss her on the mouth. MOM was astounded. She had never been kissed be anyone in her entire life as it was always work, work and work. They repelled away from each other and continued to gaze lovingly
"I guess this is it.." Cried MOM as she put on her space helmet. There was still a slight blush on her face.
Alan grabbed onto MOM on her shoulders and threw her into the far end of the glass elevator. Once it reach the floor, the elevator door opened. Alan then stepped out of the elevator floor and activated the airtight glass door to close. MOM was taken aback. She opened her eyes to see that it was already shut tight. She banged her fist at the door. She started helplessly at Alan as the elevator rose back up into the UE5 Space Shuttle.
When the elevator reached the cabin, they were shocked to find MOM in tears as the airtight door slid open. Neil went inside and helped MOM out of it.
"MOM, what happened out there?" Neil asked.
"Will's gone. He risked his life for me!" MOM cried and let out another wave of tears. She had never felt this way for a long time.
"Let's patch a video and sent it back to Earth." Neil suggested.
Mathew: Thanks, still waiting for the part…
Ominae: I'll check it out when I have the time…
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