Sorry I haven't edited in so long, I was away… I got some great reviews, but it would be even more helpful if I got specific suggestions! Anyway back to the story. (P. S. My brain elves are named Jack, Jill, and Aniruddha.) (P. P. S. Brain elves are like little voices in your head that tell you what to do, kind of like your conscience.) Two new characters come in this time. They are Pansy's foster parents. Her foster mom is named Shira, and her foster dad's name is Andrew.
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(Talking)
Pansy: Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh! …I think he likes me!
Shira: (shouting from downstairs) Pansy!
Pansy: What?
Shira: Are you doing your homework?
Pansy: (lying) Um… yes… well… I guess so… 'ish… um… mumble mumble Shit! Mumble mumble…
Andrew: (also shouting) Pansy! Do what your mother says!
Pansy: She's not my mother!
Andrew: She is for now!
Pansy: (Choosing to ignore this comment) and you're not my father!
Andrew: Oh Pansy! Do you always have to do this? (Coming into her room)
Pansy: (in tears) go away! I hate you! Sniffle sniffle
Andrew: Oh Pansy, you know Shira and I love you more than anything in the world! That's why we took you in the first place!
Pansy: No! You only took me in because your mother made you! Don't think I don't remember! I was five and a half years old, and I remember the entire thing!
Andrew: That isn't true! (Which indeed it was) We took you in to our loving arms because we chose to! (This was quite a lie.) Honey I know you're still upset about what happened with your parents, but you'll have to get over it some time!
Pansy: Just shut up and leave my room you liar!
Andrew: But Pansy I…
Pansy: I don't care! I don't care! I don't care! Just LEAVE!
Andrew: Okay! Okay! But sweety you kno…
Pansy: LEAVE ME ALONE! NOW! GO!
Andrew: Fine!
(Andrew left the room)
Pansy lay on her bed crying for hours, thinking about the night they left.
(Flashback)
It had been a stormy night. The entire muggle village was silent, and foreboding. All of a sudden a lightning bolt lit up the sky, and illuminated in front of her bed was a tall, hooded figure. Pansy saw his outstretched arm and slowly followedit with her eyes until she reached the fingers. There, clenched in his four fingered hand, was a wand.
Did you like it? I have a major cliff hanger there, can you guess who it is? There is a big hint in there some where... Just a note, in the next chapter I start in the middle of a flashback, just so you don't get confused... Please R+R!
