My friends are idiots. I was talking to them at lunch today whilst doing my homework and Bravlio (my 'ex', we were never actually going out) grabbed the pencil from me. I tried to get it back, but he wouldn't listen and instead stuck it in his hoodie. I was all like "I don't care, Bravlio, I stuck my hand down a guy's shirt yesterday because he stole me book. You could even stick it in your pants and I'll come after it." Suddenly Brandon practically yelled, "Bravlio, give me the pencil." Me and Isis (another friend; this one's a girl) started cracking up while the guys watched us, all confused. Isn't that screwed up? It was quite disgusting, too.
Oh, and sorry about the whole 'Ren and Kuro being gay' thing. I don't really like either of them, so I stuck them together because they were left over.
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Alternate
Ending
1 year later…
"Hey, Sango, can I talk to you in the park?"
"Sure." The couple left Inuyasha and Kagome's after party and walked down the street, fingers entwined.
Inuyasha and Kagome looked at each other. Kagome smiled her eyes dreamy and far off. "This is it! Let's follow them!"
"But it's our party!"
"But it's their house!"
"Fine."
They followed Sango and Miroku stealthily. The couple was almost to the center of the park when Miroku grabbed Sango's hand and knelt down. "Sango, I know this isn't as quite as flashy as when I said I loved you, but, will you marry me?"
Sango turned around, tears streaming down her face. She dropped to her knees, sobbing into her hands. Miroku looked worried and guilty. "Sango?"
"Yes."
"What?"
She turned back to him and grabbed his hands. "Yes."
Kagome smiled at them dreamily. "Oh, it's so romantic! Why didn't you propose to me like that?"
"What do you mean? I hired a sky writer!"
"Yeah, but not with such… such emotion! It's so sweet!"
Miroku and Sango got up and walked back to their house to announce the news.
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Well, then. This ending was too short to become a chapter, so I deleted it and decided to have a more 'lead into the sequel' –ish ending. And, speaking of sequel's, here's the preview for the sequel.
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Closing Time:
A preview
In their new house, Sango and Miroku feel like they're ready for anything. Miroku's even promised to marry her once he gets a job. Their life's are perfect, the absolute epitome of the happy couple. That is, until Koharu shows up one night unexpectedly. Miroku's ex-lover, she's come to get him back, even if it means destroying his relationship with Sango. In a jealous rage, she yells at Miroku, saying he shouldn't be acting like Mr. Noble, not after what happened. Miroku loses his temper and slaps her, sending her fleeing into the night, crying. Miroku decides to tell Sango his secret, though he's afraid of how it may affect his relationship with her. Two Original characters: Aoshi Yamamoto and Haruki Watanabe will make an appearance.
Miroku's dark past is revealed further, and his life is falling to pieces around him. What will happen next? Read 'Closing Time' to find out!
Coming February 2006
Well, that's it. BBAB is finally over. I'm crying right now…... The completion of this story is shutting a door on middle school, and I'm overwhelmed. I don't know what to do next… My friend and I wrote a book together last year, and now we found a man who is willing to help us get is published…. I'm freaking out, I'm terrified, actually, because if I do get the book published, I won't have time to update any stories. So, I love you guys, I want you to know that. You're the only people who've ever supported my writing, and only because of you guys am I able to continue writing.
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