(AN- These are reviews from 2004, note that any upward-angle-bracket (6 key + shift) happy-faces will not show up. Oh, and I corrected as much spelling and grammar as I could.)

Okona

2004-03-19

CH 1

Signed

-squeeks- WHE! I like! But...Remington and Julie-su are related in a ways, since Archie comix are takin' a long ass time to reveal Kragok's his pop, but what they don't know won't hurt em'. Please continue!

Omega Rush

2004-04-12

CH 1

Signed

Hi, I've actually been reading your story for quite a while now, but never activated my account until recently. Anywho, I really like your story and give major props on the plot. One question though, what is going to happen between Velociti and Sonic? For some reason I tend to like stories that pair up the Sonic gang with original characters. Anyways, keep up the good work!

nokiasama2003

2004-05-08

CH 1

Signed

O.o! You're finished already! Wow...it's been a while since I've checked up on this fic, I have some major reading to do now, but still, wow! You must have had some devotions towards this. :-) Will drop in more often to read more of your splendid works!

dyingsoul 362004-05-082Signed

oh liking this so far.
like how you've made Knux's character.

richard the pedantic

2004-05-17

CH 2

Signed

Alas I only have time at present to read the first two chapters for now. Damn College. Anyway, this story looks good; you seem to have captured the image of drunken misery well.
Unfortunately I know sod all about sonic which will probably interfere with my understanding of assorted things later on, but this still looks good.
Aufweider-bye

okona2000 3

Anonymous

Aw...poor Knux-hugs him to make I'm feel better, only he looks more irritated- MORE MORE MORE!

dyingsoul 36

2004-05-08

CH 3

Signed

Tarsa sounds pretty cool. I think this is a great Knux story

Piccard, Divinity Marine

2004-03-27

CH 4

Signed

This story is great so far! Sorry I live on reviews but I'm not that good at writing them, kinda ironic really.
Anyway, this fic is a great read. I'll read the other chapters now! (BTW, I loved the 'I'd sooner sleep with Michael Jackson' line, priceless!)

TWolf and Tre D

2004-04-27

CH 4

Signed

I kinda got confused at the end. nice job!

(AN- I love this review. It just says so many things.)

nokiasama2003

2004-03-23

CH 5

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-lifts eyebrow- Herman...-giggles in a demonic way-
Knuckles: IT'S NOT FUNNY, YOU RABID BITCH!
Nokia: -glarz at him- Shut yo mouth!
Knuckles: -Shuts up, but gives her a murderous look-

ShadowCatz 5

Anonymous

Your Sonic story is awesome! You're a good writer! I'm glad you liked my fic 2! I'd recommend your story to others on fanfiction... if I knew any... Great Job! Byes! - Meow!

k-chan

2004-03-23

CH 5

Anonymous

Me hates it. Me thinks u should stop...right now! x-D
K, I'm just kidding! It's interesting so far. It's hard to find a fic containing all the archie characters. -sobs- Wish they'd make a season 3 to satAM, only they involve the chaotix and others. And keep Knux in character. In Underground, he was a little...too...nice...-shiverz-

Matt Lans

2004-03-24

CH 5

Signed

Great job so far.
Herman the Echidna, LOL!

PAT THE KITSUNE

2004-04-25

CH 5

Anonymous

Awesome fic so far! I feel so happy for Knux now that he found another girl. I'll continue to read this fic for now but at the moment I have to go so I'll just review from this chapter. I hope Knux stays with Tarsa and you add Shadow to this story a little more! Shadow and Knux are so cute and sexy! ( hugs two plushies of Knux and Shadow ) I can't wait to read the rest of this!

Gamegirl2

2004-03-27

CH 6

Signed

Welp, here's my second review on chap 6.

Gamegirl2

2004-03-25

CH 7

Signed

Is this the story you wanted me to read? Well, in any case, I read it. I don't think it's too bad and it's pretty funny at parts. I liked it and I'll read chapter 8 when it's out. I'll review chapter 6 some other time since right now the bell's almost ringing and I gotta get my stuff.

Piccard, Divinity Marine

2004-03-27

CH 7

Signed

AW! Why'd ya stop the lemon? I'll review more, I promise!
Heh, and my minds telling me how foolish Tails is... scary movie my ass!
/\/--
Piccard: Tails, they weren't watching scary movies.
Tails: Well what were they doing?
Piccard: They were fu...
Velociti: Don't say it!
(Piccard gets hit HARD in the back of the head and falls unconscious)

nokiasama2003

2004-03-26

CH 8

Signed

Hey, read it and liked! ;-) Thanks for reviewing one of my fics too, btw. And most of my stuffs on for...certain reasons - walks off, face red-

Piccard, Divinity Marine

2004-03-27

CH 8

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Yes, I do like this so far! (I hope that reference at the bottom was to me... -worries-)
Heh, this fic is one of the best that I've read in a long time! Of course I can't be biased to me own fics... heh heh heh .;;
Still, please continue this soon. I'm looking forward to reading the next part!
/\/--

Piccard, Divinity Marine

2004-03-31

CH 9

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Heh, I liked that chapter! Indeed, calling me Picasso... if I could draw as well as him I'd have cash for sure (If he can get away with THAT then I know I'm rubbish!) .;;
One phrase... LEMONY GOODNESS! You can never get enough of it! -puts up poster advertising it- It's turned me into what I am! (IS that a good thing...)
Anyway, please update this soon, I really want to read the next chapter and my patience isn't that good lately -eye twitch- caffeine is a BAD thing... -goes off with a chainsaw, very 'active'-
BTW, 'Teatime' in Britain is roughly 5/ 6PM... 12/ 1 PM over there, so you'll be having your lunch while I fuel my hunger! .

PAT THE KITSUNE

2004-05-02

CH 10

Anonymous

NO! WHAT HAPPENED 2 TARSA! I CAN ONLY GUESS
4 NOW. I LUV THE LEMON! TIS SEXY! I HOPE AS I READ MORE I C MORE LEMONS. I LUV THIS STORY SO FAR! WELL THAT IS ALL I CAN SAY 4 NOW SO CYA!

(AN- Please, in the future….. take a moment to see if your caps lock is on. And if you ever feel the urge to review in caps…. Think of how stupid it makes you look…. Like poor Pat, for example. –tsk tsk-)

Piccard, Divinity Marine

2004-04-02

CH 11

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YAY! Let's all bang our heads into the walls! -follows Shadows lead- Damn, you need a new wall! .;
Anyway, being incredibly tired right now I can't really say much... apart from that I loved the last two chapters! Please keep this up... gimme something to look forward too after my break!
-puts up big poster saying 'gone for Easter' and gives the peace sign- later!

Gamegirl2

2004-04-07

CH 11

Signed

Wow... this story left me confused at some parts but also made me laugh here and there. Couldn't agree with you with one of your statement. Cliffhangers ARE a lot of fun!

Piccard, Divinity Marine

2004-04-07

CH 12

Signed

you thought I was gone for good for a month didn't you, huh? I managed to take a quick break from my 'holidays' and read this chapter! .
/\/--
Really good chapter is the most I can say. I'm tired as hell... then again I always am, but I'm really looking forward to reading the next one.
--\/\
Who knows when I'll get back, to be honest, who really cares? Suffice to say... I'll keep reading this! -gives peace sign- Cya later!

Piccard, Divinity Marine

2004-04-10

CH 15

Signed

GUESS WHOSE BACK BABY!
Finally I am back home... and raring to review peoples work... or maybe just yours, we'll see how it goes! .;
I did read both chapters, and by reviewing the two of them at once I feel that I'm cheating you out of reviews... oh well, I liked them both, and I do think that it's finally going into a plot, unlike my work. heh heh heh... (BTW I agree with sonic about the two girls kissing... but then you do know me... .;)
Anyway, I'll let you write the next one or two, hope they're as good as these ones! Catch ya later/\/--

PAT THE KITSUNE

2004-05-11

CH 15

Anonymous

IT'S ME AGAIN AND I'M STILL READING YOUR STORY! (IF U HAVEN'T NOTICED I REVIEW EVERY 5 CHAPTERS) I'M STILL LOVING THIS STORY THE MORE I READ IT! I CAN'T WAIT 2 READ THE REST AND U'LL PROBABLY GET ANOTHER REVIEW FROM ME IN A FEW DAYS. I CAN'T WAIT 2 C WHAT KNUX DOES NEXT! UNFORTIANETLY (YES I NO I PROBABLY SPELLED THAT WRONG) I HAVE 2 GO NOW BUT I'LL CONHTINUE 2 READ 2MORROW! BYE! -

RKC

2004-04-19

CH 16

Anonymous

good story, but if you had kept shadow alive, he could have defeated her by like using chaos control to separate them, since she is just a really big and evil emerald. just a suggestion.

Piccard, Divinity Marine

2004-04-12

CH 16

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I know someone's reading this as well... that someone being me! heh, and as you put an obligation to ferrets it is my moral duty to review! .
-wails- why did Shadow have to die... man, lots of people are gonna be peeved... oh well, they deserve it. They don't review they suffer the consequences!
Heh, overall I liked that chapter, and don't worry, I don't think you're too depressing, all authors have their own style, technique and talents. I hope to read more stuff from you after this is finished! .

Magnus The Hedgehog

2004-04-14

CH 16

Signed

Sonic with Sally? Naughty Sonic... I'm sure he could be castrated for that...

Omega Rush

2004-04-13

CH 17

Signed

Nice, cool, and nice. Wait I already said that. Man, Tarsa musta had a rough childhood. Well good thing that she didn't have to live through it again. Night of the living Shadow. Sorry, had to do it. Keep it up!

Piccard, Divinity Marine

2004-04-14

CH 17

Signed

Yay, Shadows technically alive... or is he? Spirit... er, breathing er... now I'm confused! o.o;
Heh, She admired her own breasts... I take it that was purely for comedy value... I couldn't picture anyone really doing that (Apart from a certain someone I know .;;)
Overall that was a great chapter, can't wait for the next one... Thanks for getting my name right (.) oh, and I'm a big Monty python fan, try the parrot sketch sometime (Ask me and I'll find it for ya!)

Magnus The Hedgehog

2004-04-14

CH 17

Signed

Tarsa:-Looking down her shirt- Gawd I missed you two...
Heh, I'm finding this to be humorous as well as dark... Well, see ya next chapter.

Omega Rush

2004-04-14

CH 18

Signed

Nice chapter, just ignore those guys. I'd like to see them do better.

Piccard, Divinity Marine

2004-04-15

CH 18

Signed

For this I shall quote a line from the legendary Jon Cleese... slightly adapted:
/\
I wish to register a complaint about this 'edgehog wot I purchased not 'alf an 'our ago from this very boutique...
/\
It's a stiff, bereft of life... this thing wouldn't plume if you put 4 million vaults through it... it has expired and gone to join the choir invisible, THIS IS AN EX HEDGEHOG!
/\/--
.; Now back to the review!
/\/--
Grr... this is a good story you ungrateful little gits! -whacks them all round the head with a pipe till they pass out- sorry, I just get carried away... .;;
Well, unlike them -points to the heap of characters- I liked that chapter... please update this soon as I really wanna read the rest of that fight!
Oh, before I go... -walks to pile and grabs Rouge off the top- take advantage as I always say! -smirks and runs off with her slung over his shoulder- cya in a few weeks, if you get my meaning! . (wink wink, nudge nudge, say no more say no more...) ((another python skit to those who think I'm barking mad!))

Magnus The Hedgehog

2004-04-15

CH 18

Signed

Tarsa vs. Itshell... YAY! Catfight! Catfight! Make more. Yes yes.
Heh, guess my buddy Piccard likes your fic too.

RKC

2004-04-19

CH 18

Anonymous

the fight scene isn't crappy... Anyways, good story, and I'm almost caught up!

Omega Rush

2004-04-16

CH 19

Signed

HAHAHAAHAH, shadow could use this to his advantage to get with sally, but still I love this story. Don't stop making it or I'll poke you with pointy objects. Just kidding, lol.

Piccard, Divinity Marine

2004-04-16

CH 19

Signed

WOO! Body swapping to the max! So now... Shadow is Sonic and Sonic is Shadow... hmm... give me a minute to think about this... (gets dizzy fast and slams into a wall)
Heh, I loved the rest of the fight scene there, and the chapter as a whole, please continue this soon, I wanna read the next part! .

RKC

2004-04-19

CH 19

Anonymous

woo-hoo! another great chapter. I like the twist too.

Omega Rush

2004-04-19

CH 20

Signed

Keep on typing and I'll keep on reading. Good job.

PAT THE KITSUNE

2004-05-31

CH 20

Anonymous

HI! SORRY I HAVEN'T REVIEWED IN SUCH A LONG TIME! I HAD AND STILL HAVE A LOT OF HOMEWORK BFORE SCHOOL IS OUT. WELL, I'M STILL LUVING THIS STORY AND I HOPE 2 FINISH IT EITHER L8ER 2DAY OR SOMETIME SOON. I CAN'T WAIT 2 C WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! I LUV THE PART WHERE SONIC AND SHADOW SWITCH BODIES. THAT WAS TOTALLY UNEXPECTED! WELL, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK ON ALL U'RE OTHER STORIES U MAY B WRITING! CYA!

Omega Rush

2004-04-21

CH 21

Signed

I'm just gonna make this a short review like last time. I'm tired and I need sleep. Anyways, I like the story and I hate that it's almost over. Well like they say, all good things must come to an end.

Piccard, Divinity Marine

2004-04-27

CH 22

Signed

Heh, I'm back! In college so I gotta be quick! ;
I loved the last two chapters, this has been a great story, and I look forward to reading your next one... or do an epilogue, yes... DO IT!
-starts singing Monty Python style before being knocked out by a metal arm-
Carter:Sigh: Must Piccard ALWAYS do that?
/\/--
If I had time to write more I would... but I can't so I won't so you'll just have to live with it!
(lol, speak to ya soon, I hope! .;)

Omega Rush

2004-04-27

CH 22

Signed

Aw, it's over, shoot. Oh wait, you still have the epilogue. Well still a great story and I can't wait to read more of your work.

xenayr 22

Anonymous

Hm... As I sit here reading your story I find that I can't stop. I should be working on a certain task, but I am drawn to keep reading. I actually read the whole story in more or less one sitting. I was very impressed with the whole plot, and even found my self drifting off (in a good way) as I do when reading books by the greatest of authors. The ending seemed rushed (as you more or less stated). A lot of good twists, and the story ended very unpredictably. Guess this was a general review...but if you want I may go and review the individual chapters. Nice work!

McGuirk

2004-04-29

CH 24

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MY EYES! THEY BURN!
I just read the entire thing at one time...and I think I forgot to blink!
Good story, and it's a bitch getting me to say that...
One thing that got me though, is it went from a drunken, loser-ass Knuckles going job hunting to an End-Of-The-World epic!

Omega Rush

2004-04-29

CH 24

Signed

Great story and thanks for clearing up some stuff for me. I really enjoyed reading it and reviewing. Now my brain hurts from doing to much thinking today.

xenayr 24

Anonymous

Nice way to tie up all the loose ends, but also leave some idea for yet another fascinating fic. Superb work. I will read definitely be reading more from you.

anonymous 2004-05-04 24 Anonymous

That was a great fic. You have so much potential as a writer, and I hope you continue to write more and more in the future. I want to read the rest of your fics now, because this one is just what I look for in a fic. A wonderful mix of zaniness and darkness, something that keeps me reading. Thank you for such a great read.

dyingsoul 36

2004-05-08

CH 23

Signed

good story, it's a shame what happened between sonic and velocity (Did I spell that right?) and shadow is pretty cool in this especially when he and Karpa first got together.
Tails is a pervert but I still love him.
as for knuckles he's still got his duty but I hope he does find happiness with Tarsa.

Spawn of 84

2004-05-08

CH 23

Signed

I like this story.
Now start writing the sequel or I will
come to your house and make you watch Glitter
five times in a row.

Piccard, Divinity Marine

2004-05-11

CH 23

Signed

Whoa, great epilogue... I would love to comment more, but A) I'm pushed for to much time, and B) My ICT teacher is actually sitting next to me, so I gotta be quick!
That was a great chapter, now I'll read your authors notes and I'll start on another of your fics when I get a chance! v Cya!

Piccard, Divinity Marine

2004-05-11

CH 24

Signed

nice... that one gave me a little insight into the characters. Great ending to a great fic!
I can't wait to read more of your fics, and I will when I get a chance! (Maybe I should do something like this for TMJ...)

Lemon Piper

2004-05-22

CH 24

Signed

Wow! That was good! Confusing, but good! Itshell was a really good villain, too! She has got to look freaky. I really wish you had a pic somewhere. Oh and, -huggles Remmy- why HIM? 00 Anyway, you should really do more, I'll sure r&r it! 0 (Okay, about my name, it's a hippie term referring to someone who puts a hole and joint in a lemon or other fruit and smoke a scented flavor. Bah! It doesn't refer to lemoneyness!) -adds you to faves-

PAT THE KITSUNE

2004-05-31

CH 24

Anonymous

WELL, THAT DIDN'T TAKE VERY LONG. I FINISHED YOUR STORY WITHIN AN HOUR OF MY LAST REVIEW. IT WAS GREAT! THAT IS 1 OF THE BEST STORIES I EVER READ! I WILL SOON START 2 READ ALL YOUR OTHER STORIES! I LUVED THIS STORY SO MUCH! WHEN I FINALLY GET MY STORIES UP ( YES, I DO HAVE AN ACCOUNT; I JUST HAVEN'T PUT ANY STORIES UP YET BECAUSE I HAVEN'T TYPED THEM YET. BSIDES I'M STILL IN SCHOOL 4 2 WEEKS!) I WILL RECOMMEND YOUR STORIES 2 OTHER PEOPLE! CYA AROUND!

Xenose

2004-06-05

CH 24

Signed

It's a little bit, no, scrap that, it's COMPLETELY insane. But it's good. I like it. Keep up the work etc. etc. And you have a strange way of coming up with names. Okay, I go now.