QUESTION: (I even bolded that so it would catch your attention) okay
first off, Have yall ever noticed that when you're fighting certain
heartless and you're in the right view that you can see a pink heart fly
away? Seriously you can, my sister noticed in the jungle and I noticed in
Hallow Bastion And after that I could see them all the time!
Now this one is important, I made two covers and I can't decide what stories I want each one t go to. well mainly this one since Painful Returns is on hold. so if it's not that big of a trouble could yall go to :
PLEASE, so I can have some opinion on which one goes where!
I forgot the reviews! How could I?
Damn it! Well I'll do them for chapters 2 and 3
First off with Chapter 3 reviews:
DigtalDreamer: uh... You're review confused me a little...... Did my story catch you at the wrong time? Like after you ate a dozen sugar cookies or something along those lines? Well the only thing I got from it was you liked it so THANKS!!!
Yoink: (it won't let me copy your name so I'll just put up the first part) I'm glad you like the way I capture his personality! And I'm very happy you think it's good!
PrincessSwifty: Don't Choke poor Riku! I need him awake during this chapter! I'm so glad you love it! Angst is a pretty good thing to read isn't it?
Now Ch. 2
Vixen: hmm. maybe you shoulda eaten more. mighta calmed you down a bit! Thank you, I'm glad you like it and I thought I wasn't descriptive enough! I'm glad you think it was good!
PrincessSwifty: don't kill Riku! What will I do with him as a corpse, be careful!
Digital dreamer: Hehe I made you twitch! I'm glad your loving it!
Shadow: we do feel his pain don't we?
Trysten: Ohhh I gave Ansem brownie points. I'm probably taking them away now though. I suck at staying incharacter with people.. Though who has issues? Me or Ansem? Hmmmmmmmm
SPECIAL THANKS!
PrincessSwifty and Trysten You guys have been with me from the beginning! So big thanks and a special gift baggy! Yeah. I have a gift baggu. yeah.. Oh well the though counts!
Authors note: I have decided to play with something here. this is my own little thing probably completely off but it deals with Deep dive and Another Story, Another Side. I haven't seen Deep dive. I wish I could watch it. I'll download it as soon as I get my com fixed but. anyways I've been reading up on it. at that should work. anyways I've come up with my own opinions so.
Never Again
By: Life's Scar
Chapter Four
"The Fiend looked up and knew
His mounted scale aloft no more;
But fled murmuring,
And with him fled the shades of night."
-John Milton, "Paradise Lost"
Riku opened looked over to the sound of Kairi yawning, "Good morning," He said sitting up and stretching his arms.
"Did you sleep well?" She asked looking at him, noticing the circles under his eyes.
"Yeah." He lied, "How about you? You and Sora looked nice together!"
He gave her a suggestive smile and her whole face went red, when he started laughing she picked up the pillow she had been laying on and threw it at him. It hit him smack in the face and she began laughing, "I can't believe you thought that!"
He shrugged and looked at her, "Yeah well, what do you expect when you wake up. you're hair all tangled. clothes ruffled."
She turned a shade redder and ran her hand through her long brown hair and smoothed it down when she noticed that he was laughing even harder she stood up and walked over to him, "We'll see you laughing." She said before she fell down on top of him and began to tickle him.
He laughed until she touched one of his sore ribs and he cried out in pain, "I'm sorry!" she cried out jumping off of him.
"Hey, It's okay!" He said pushing himself up.
Sora was looking at the two with a confused look. Riku looked over at Sora and shook his head, "Listen Kairi, it's okay. it wasn't like you meant to. Let's just go get some breakfast."
"Okay." Kairi said still worried though.
Sora jumped up and moved to catch up with Riku, "You don't look like you slept well." He whispered into his friend's ear so Kairi didn't hear him.
"I'm fine, I wish all of you would stop worrying about me." Riku whispered back looking intently at Sora.
"If you weren't would you tell me?"
Riku shrugged, "Maybe."
"That's why I worry." Sora said as he hurried to the breakfast table.
Sora sniffed the burnt air and made a face, "Did Leon cook again?"
Cloud glared at Sora and said, "I didn't wake up to catch him. he nearly burnt my house down." he mumbled wiping at his sleep deprived eyes.
Squall glared at the two and put his toast on his plate. throwing the eggs out, "Don't eat it if you don't like it."
"I can't wait until you go back to Rinoa." Cloud muttered as he scrapped out the rest of the food, "You guys might as well make yourselves a bowl of cereal. unless this. is appetizing."
Sora jumped at the cabinet bringing out the sweetest kind of cereal that he could find, Riku made a face and sighed as Sora poured each of them a bowl, "If you add any sugar to mine this time I'll kick your butt," Kairi said.
"That's the same here!" Cloud agreed making a face as Sora spooned even more sugar into his bowl.
"How about you, Riku?" Sora asked holding a giant spoonful over Riku's bowl.
"I'll skip it this time." Riku said not even sure if he'd be able to stand the cereal by itself.
Sora shrugged his shoulders and said, "Your lose."
Riku laughed at Sora and shook his head. No wonder why he was always so hyper.
~*~
Riku sat out looking at the rain that had begun to pour again. How much more rain would come before it started to flood. The rain soaked his clothes causing his hair to stick to his neck. The water ran down his face he let it run into his mouth and smiled. This was something he missed, just standing out in whatever weather there was and taking in what it gave.
Rain drops landed in his eyes and he blinked the moisture away. Dragging his hand through his wet hair he spun around when he heard someone step up behind him. He spun around to be face to face with a yellow eyes demon just like him, "Who are you?" Riku demanded.
"You know me." He mumbled looking straight at him.
Riku noticed the lighter, more grayish, hair color. The yellow eyed him moved slowly as if it took a lot to move, "No I do not." Riku said moving closer to get a better look at the man who wore a dark hood over his face.
This man could not look just like him.. it was impossible.
"I'm always with you."
"No!"
"I've taken your heart."
"No!"
"Your body is mine."
"No!"
"Your soul is mine."
"No!"
"My little pet."
"You can not be! You have no body!"
"But I do. can't you tell. I'm here. I'm moving. I'm you my little silver haired dog!"
"But.."
"We share the same body, we share this. I've taken your body to get out of the darkness once again."
"But I have mine!"
"So I merely took part of you. I plan to take the rest."
"NO!" Riku yelled as he tackled the man to the ground.
Everyone ran out to see two Riku's fighting. or it seemed to them. Except one had bright green eyes and the other eyes shined a bright yellow. similar to the color of the heartless. the shadows, "Riku!" Sora yelled running up to the two.
"I will have it all!" Ansem yelled as he gripped Riku by his throat cutting off any air Riku could possibly get in, his yellow eyes glowing evily.
Riku slammed his fist into Ansem's face causing him to loosen his grip just enough for Riku to take in a deep breathe, "I will kill you!" Riku yelled as he continued to pound Ansem's face.
Spots began to explode in Riku's eyes, Ansem's grip was not loosening, he was stuck. He brought his knee up and kneed Ansem wherever his knee decided to land and rolled the man off of him as he struggled to catch his breath.
"Die!" Ansem yelled as he brought a dagger down into Riku's gut.
TBC
If you didn't notice Ansem is the yellow eyed unknown.. OMG or the yellow eyed Riku in my story.
Yes I do plan on updateing so please don't hunt me down!
I love cliff hangers.......... uh yeah...
Now this one is important, I made two covers and I can't decide what stories I want each one t go to. well mainly this one since Painful Returns is on hold. so if it's not that big of a trouble could yall go to :
PLEASE, so I can have some opinion on which one goes where!
I forgot the reviews! How could I?
Damn it! Well I'll do them for chapters 2 and 3
First off with Chapter 3 reviews:
DigtalDreamer: uh... You're review confused me a little...... Did my story catch you at the wrong time? Like after you ate a dozen sugar cookies or something along those lines? Well the only thing I got from it was you liked it so THANKS!!!
Yoink: (it won't let me copy your name so I'll just put up the first part) I'm glad you like the way I capture his personality! And I'm very happy you think it's good!
PrincessSwifty: Don't Choke poor Riku! I need him awake during this chapter! I'm so glad you love it! Angst is a pretty good thing to read isn't it?
Now Ch. 2
Vixen: hmm. maybe you shoulda eaten more. mighta calmed you down a bit! Thank you, I'm glad you like it and I thought I wasn't descriptive enough! I'm glad you think it was good!
PrincessSwifty: don't kill Riku! What will I do with him as a corpse, be careful!
Digital dreamer: Hehe I made you twitch! I'm glad your loving it!
Shadow: we do feel his pain don't we?
Trysten: Ohhh I gave Ansem brownie points. I'm probably taking them away now though. I suck at staying incharacter with people.. Though who has issues? Me or Ansem? Hmmmmmmmm
SPECIAL THANKS!
PrincessSwifty and Trysten You guys have been with me from the beginning! So big thanks and a special gift baggy! Yeah. I have a gift baggu. yeah.. Oh well the though counts!
Authors note: I have decided to play with something here. this is my own little thing probably completely off but it deals with Deep dive and Another Story, Another Side. I haven't seen Deep dive. I wish I could watch it. I'll download it as soon as I get my com fixed but. anyways I've been reading up on it. at that should work. anyways I've come up with my own opinions so.
Never Again
By: Life's Scar
Chapter Four
"The Fiend looked up and knew
His mounted scale aloft no more;
But fled murmuring,
And with him fled the shades of night."
-John Milton, "Paradise Lost"
Riku opened looked over to the sound of Kairi yawning, "Good morning," He said sitting up and stretching his arms.
"Did you sleep well?" She asked looking at him, noticing the circles under his eyes.
"Yeah." He lied, "How about you? You and Sora looked nice together!"
He gave her a suggestive smile and her whole face went red, when he started laughing she picked up the pillow she had been laying on and threw it at him. It hit him smack in the face and she began laughing, "I can't believe you thought that!"
He shrugged and looked at her, "Yeah well, what do you expect when you wake up. you're hair all tangled. clothes ruffled."
She turned a shade redder and ran her hand through her long brown hair and smoothed it down when she noticed that he was laughing even harder she stood up and walked over to him, "We'll see you laughing." She said before she fell down on top of him and began to tickle him.
He laughed until she touched one of his sore ribs and he cried out in pain, "I'm sorry!" she cried out jumping off of him.
"Hey, It's okay!" He said pushing himself up.
Sora was looking at the two with a confused look. Riku looked over at Sora and shook his head, "Listen Kairi, it's okay. it wasn't like you meant to. Let's just go get some breakfast."
"Okay." Kairi said still worried though.
Sora jumped up and moved to catch up with Riku, "You don't look like you slept well." He whispered into his friend's ear so Kairi didn't hear him.
"I'm fine, I wish all of you would stop worrying about me." Riku whispered back looking intently at Sora.
"If you weren't would you tell me?"
Riku shrugged, "Maybe."
"That's why I worry." Sora said as he hurried to the breakfast table.
Sora sniffed the burnt air and made a face, "Did Leon cook again?"
Cloud glared at Sora and said, "I didn't wake up to catch him. he nearly burnt my house down." he mumbled wiping at his sleep deprived eyes.
Squall glared at the two and put his toast on his plate. throwing the eggs out, "Don't eat it if you don't like it."
"I can't wait until you go back to Rinoa." Cloud muttered as he scrapped out the rest of the food, "You guys might as well make yourselves a bowl of cereal. unless this. is appetizing."
Sora jumped at the cabinet bringing out the sweetest kind of cereal that he could find, Riku made a face and sighed as Sora poured each of them a bowl, "If you add any sugar to mine this time I'll kick your butt," Kairi said.
"That's the same here!" Cloud agreed making a face as Sora spooned even more sugar into his bowl.
"How about you, Riku?" Sora asked holding a giant spoonful over Riku's bowl.
"I'll skip it this time." Riku said not even sure if he'd be able to stand the cereal by itself.
Sora shrugged his shoulders and said, "Your lose."
Riku laughed at Sora and shook his head. No wonder why he was always so hyper.
~*~
Riku sat out looking at the rain that had begun to pour again. How much more rain would come before it started to flood. The rain soaked his clothes causing his hair to stick to his neck. The water ran down his face he let it run into his mouth and smiled. This was something he missed, just standing out in whatever weather there was and taking in what it gave.
Rain drops landed in his eyes and he blinked the moisture away. Dragging his hand through his wet hair he spun around when he heard someone step up behind him. He spun around to be face to face with a yellow eyes demon just like him, "Who are you?" Riku demanded.
"You know me." He mumbled looking straight at him.
Riku noticed the lighter, more grayish, hair color. The yellow eyed him moved slowly as if it took a lot to move, "No I do not." Riku said moving closer to get a better look at the man who wore a dark hood over his face.
This man could not look just like him.. it was impossible.
"I'm always with you."
"No!"
"I've taken your heart."
"No!"
"Your body is mine."
"No!"
"Your soul is mine."
"No!"
"My little pet."
"You can not be! You have no body!"
"But I do. can't you tell. I'm here. I'm moving. I'm you my little silver haired dog!"
"But.."
"We share the same body, we share this. I've taken your body to get out of the darkness once again."
"But I have mine!"
"So I merely took part of you. I plan to take the rest."
"NO!" Riku yelled as he tackled the man to the ground.
Everyone ran out to see two Riku's fighting. or it seemed to them. Except one had bright green eyes and the other eyes shined a bright yellow. similar to the color of the heartless. the shadows, "Riku!" Sora yelled running up to the two.
"I will have it all!" Ansem yelled as he gripped Riku by his throat cutting off any air Riku could possibly get in, his yellow eyes glowing evily.
Riku slammed his fist into Ansem's face causing him to loosen his grip just enough for Riku to take in a deep breathe, "I will kill you!" Riku yelled as he continued to pound Ansem's face.
Spots began to explode in Riku's eyes, Ansem's grip was not loosening, he was stuck. He brought his knee up and kneed Ansem wherever his knee decided to land and rolled the man off of him as he struggled to catch his breath.
"Die!" Ansem yelled as he brought a dagger down into Riku's gut.
TBC
If you didn't notice Ansem is the yellow eyed unknown.. OMG or the yellow eyed Riku in my story.
Yes I do plan on updateing so please don't hunt me down!
I love cliff hangers.......... uh yeah...