Hello everyone! I know this is a bit past Thanksgiving, but oh well. Thanks to anyone who reads this. It's my first ever fanfic, so please go easy on me. Please? Review with some advice too please.
Thanksgiving Murder
It was a very cold Thanksgiving Day and the snow was falling very heavily.
Hello my name is Ray, and I am a member of The Blade Breakers. The other
Blade Breakers are Tyson, Max, and Kai. We also invited The Demolition Boys.
Their names are Tala, Ian, Spencer, and Bryan. We were about to sit down for dinner
When Tyson yelled from the other room that the news people said that it was a blizzard
They were experiencing, not a small Thanksgiving snow. So everyone except for me, Tala, and Kai started to freak out. Then Tala simply said that The Demolition Boys would just
Go home now, but as they opened the door they got covered in so much snow that they looked like snowmen. We then agreed that they would have to stay at the dojo with us. So we then went off to eat. We said grace and of course Tyson was the first one to eat, but when he did he fell over dead. Everyone screamed as the dead Tyson fell to the ground. It appears we have a mystery on our hands said a voice from the dark said. Then stepped out a short kid wearing glasses and kind of dorky clothes who had apparently just arrived. We were now wondering how he got in. So we quickly jumped on him blaming him for murdering Tyson and trying to murder the rest of us as well. We meant to only hurt him but in the end we accidentally killed him. After all that we were so tired that we went on to bed. When we woke up the next morning the snow was gone and we could all go outside. The Demolition Boys then went on home. When the cops arrived we told them what happened to Tyson and how we thought the kid did it, but when they saw that the kid was dead they arrested all of us for murder. We all went to jail and are still there. Except for Kai who mysteriously disappeared.
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So, what did ya guys think? Please go easy! But I need some advice, cause I don;t want to listen to my sister. She said something about paragraphs, but who cares. She's just my sister, right? Her name is Hikata. Again, thanks for reading.