Forbidden and Impossible
Disclaimer: Haha, this is pretty sad, but I'm almost wishing I was a girl so's I could own Inuyasha. Rumiko Takahashi you lucky dog...
Explanation: This is a four part story song I wrote. Y'know, kinda like Jesus of Suburbia or Homecoming on Green Day's American Idiot, or 2112 on Rush's 2112 album (I own neither, well, I have them, but I don't... I don't own the rights to them. Right okay, that's good). It's my longest one yet... I just need someone who can play a sitar... (you'll see). Anyways i can see how this will be good or really really bad. SO PLEASE REVIEW AND TELL. It would be really helpful if you could tell me.
Anyway, read away:
Death Is Only Temporary
Part I- The Void
1, 2, 3, 4!
(Imagine a kinda heavy, fast electric guitar riff, a break, and a drum intro)
This blood that coats my hands,
Was not here yesterday,
Imprisoned by a thousand bonds,
The price that I must pay!
Close your eyes…
Be whisked away to the end,
Apocalypse…
This is the message I send…
I cannot take this pain you give me,
Eats away at my skin,
From the darkness baby free me,
Save me from my own sin!
Close your eyes…
Armageddon is coming,
Apocalypse…
That the void brings…
The world lives yet I must die,
Written on Satan's list,
I try to break my fate, I try,
What did I do to deserve this!
Close your eyes…
Don't cry over dried blood,
Apocalypse…
My end, I'm done.
Like a gun up to my head,
No escape from consequence,
Life's not been the same since,
I'm better off dead…
Part II- The Other Side
(An acoustic guitar plays a slower tune…)
All around me darkness lives,
Pressure that never forgives,
The air reeks of stale blood,
Tears as thick as rain-wet mud,
Here is where sadness rules,
No hope, only spiritless fools,
Pull my knees up to my chest,
Surely death would have been best…
I just want to cry,
But the darkness swallows tears,
So I sit here for eternity,
Stewing in sadness and fears.
If I had known the pain it brings,
The inner voids cursed scenes,
The knife would've found my wrist,
And not my hand now in a fist,
I thought the void would end it all,
But I still live, more miserable,
Than I had been in tainted life,
Even on the most evil night.
I just want to cry,
But the darkness swallows tears,
So I sit here for eternity,
Stewing in sadness and tears.
Part III- The Voice
(Electric guitar begins, but with a psychedelic like sound)
Voices (voices…)
Carry me away,
Pulling me towards,
The light of day,
Voices (voices…)
Lifting my heart,
Darkness is purged,
Sadness parts,
Sunshine (sunshine…)
Hole in the sky,
Carried on whispers,
Upwards I fly,
Sunshine (sunshine…)
Enters my soul,
As I am pulled,
Towards heavenly hole…
(A psychedelic (love that word!) solo type- thingy with a sitar)
Open (open…)
Open your eyes,
Feel the cool wind,
See the blue sky,
Open (open…)
Up to the world,
Born again,
Flower unfurled…
('bout five seconds of silence)
Part IV- The Savior
(Guitar picks up; guy playing the sitar is shot)
Hey, I see you cryin',
Down on your knees letting your tears fall,
Hey, why aren't you tryin',
To continue with your life at all?
Are all these tears that you are shedding,
Falling over me?
Are you crying for life,
That could never be…
Hey, I whisper your name,
And you look up in shock and in disbelief,
Hey, you're not in vain,
For it was your voice that brought my soul to me,
Were all those tears thatyou were shedding,
Falling over me?
Were you crying for a life,
That will always be?
Hey, I pull you to me,
And let your chin rest upon my shoulder,
Hey, hold on to me,
'Cause you the reason I will live my life
(Guitar picks up to a lively strumming)
So don't give your life away,
Try to see each and every day,
And even though the hole's still in my hand,
For you I will live, that is my only plan…
(Electric guitar stops, acoustic guitar plays a slow tune)
Cry over losses,
Cry over the damned,
But don't cry for those,
Who you still… have…
(End with a final strum)
Fin.
So? Whacha think? Make sure to tell me in your REVIEWS.
For those of you who are wondering, my first album (Bomb's Away) will be released in 2010 on some record company of whoever's brave enough will sponsor me. It will be a real tear jerker. No it won't. Anyway, ya'lls gotta promise me you's gonna buy it okay? Or else I'll sell like, 2 copies. I'm hopin' to up that to six. Whatever. Here's the firstpart ofthe first song:
OOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH...
Well Bob was a fish monger,
He sold fish by the bay,
One day he caught a giant shark,
And he just had to say:
"Whooeee, that's a shark,
I think I'll eat is with a spork,
And then I'll walk it in the park,
and then we'll go somewhere and..."
Okay... I think I'll leave you off there... Hopefully none of you know what that last word is. Hehe...
Stupid Nikolai.