Hi All it's me again I know it's been awhile hay I'm really sorry but I've been juggling a lot of school work and other tasks but I swear that I will finish this story and if I don't you can hit me with a tuna thank you very much but my computer crashed so I'm sorta screwed with my previous chapters I going to try and rewrite the first two chapters but I'm a sucky writer and this is first fic so I trying as hard as I can thanks for the great reviews now I've decided for a little more lemony freshness wink so off we go! O yaeh S/M? Means spelling mistake if you see one it will be after the word please send what I should have used in your reviews just number them and I'll fix it TX

-Raven Guy

Disclaimer: I don't own Eragon GET IT THROUGH YOUR SKULLS

Chapter 5 always remember to drink LEMONade on hot days wink

A/N I know early in the chapter huh well I've decided to screw the whole POV thing so from now on it 3rd person this is just so there's know confusion.

"o come on" Eragon said to Saphira "I get to make out with her once and then YOU get all mad at me"

"Eragon" said the blue behemoth (Saphira HAY I HEARD THAT) (me sorry sorry (cowering in fear)) "you know what could happen to her if you just go around fucking every girl you meet"

"All right I get your point" said Eragon down cast.

The Next day.

Arya walked up to Eragon the next day and said "hi it's a bit hot out today want to take a swim" (some readers should know where this is going wink wink)

"All right" he said "I'll meet you where we meet in chapter 2 (A/N I've decided to make it so the characters know there in a story)

"'k" she said

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a bout an hour later at the place in chapter three.

Eragon walked throw the grass to the place where they had met before he told Saphira who he was going to be with

"It goes against my better judgment but I won't interrupt"

Arya walked out wearing a blue two piece that made her look really sexy it accented her curves and seemed to be about a size to small in the upper piece it made Eragon feel a slight string in his pants he himself was only wearing shorts

"Hi Arya wanna jump in" he said nervously she gave him a look and dove in; he jumped in after her he saw her body moving towred the surface and he swam toured(S/M?) her body broke the surface a moment before his he popped up and startled her he silenced her with a deep kiss they kissed a few more times and then Arya flicked her tongue across his lips and made him shudder there next kiss allowed for the exploration of each others mouths before there next kiss (Eragon Was very hard now) he held the strap that held her top in place and said Jierda (S/M?) her top fell off her supple breasts she kissed him again pressing her chest ageist his and felt him shudder he then toke hold her hard pink nipples and tickled her with his fingers she shuddered at the sensation he than began to lick in the small hallow between the two hardened mounds she ground her hips into his hardness and shuddered as the sensation shook her to her core Eragon though seemed unfazed he begin to suck on one of her breast while massaging the other she groaned with pleasure and begin to feel wetness coming from inside her as well as the water surrounding them he begin to kiss her lips again and she begin stroking his chest and feeling his abs around her fingers she then ran her fingers down towards his pants which had a small lump in them she begin to stroke the top of the lump and he shuddered and begin to buck in to her the only thing stopping him were his pants which she happily removed for him then she started to kiss him again and again all down his neck with a fiery ferocity that surprised him he begin to paddle towards shore as she begin to lick his chest he reached the shore and rolled over so she was on top of him but then he rolled himself over again so he was on top she begin to remove her pants and turned himself around on top of her so he was facing her entrance he began to play with the black curls growing there and she shuddered he licked up her leg and up to her entrance there he begin to lick all around the folds of skin occasionally skittering across them she shuddered again he smiled and than licked her folds up and down she seemed to go crazy she thought let me give you the pleasure to which you have treated me she liked the head of his hardness and he suddenly licked and nibbled on the delicate skin more frocesly she begin to take the head of the shaft in her mouth and licked it all around Eragon started to lick and nibble and kiss the whole area around her folds then he cupped his mouth around her enterce and sucked on it she could not hold it in any longer and blasted her cum into his mouth as her first of many orgasms hit her he swallowed every drop and preceded his tongue into her as she went nuts suckling and rocking her head back and forth on this hardness his first orgasms hit and he relsed his load in to her mouth and she swallowed it all (A/N I've decided that elves and part elves 1 can have as meny orgasms in a row as any one would care to count 2 they get orgasms faster then people 3 they don't get tired from having sex they actually get more energy 4 there fluids taste different)he then tured himself over so his face was even with hers she looked at him and then thrust herself into him they were connected by his hardness.

After the WAHOO wink

Nasduada ran to Arya and Eragon as they walked through camp

"Something's happened Elva just predicted that Galbtorix has ordered his men to attack in two days"!

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Mwaaa HAAA HAAA cliff hanger well this toke me 3 days to write so press that little blue botten it will make me update faster!

-Raven Guy