Authors note:
So below freezong point is done and it left alot of chalenges for me to deal with . but first i'm gonna talk a lil bout charatcers
Monica: Obviously she is the main attraction bcuz she is nice. exept to the zombies heh...heh... Anyways using her character change was to add a twist to a very well done game. You have all read amber20's outbreak series and no how well it is done, so her version being the inspiration I decided Monica as a good guy would be neat and some may think of it to be interesting. Also to me the girl in the story isn't monica she jus looks like her. When I play BFP on REO i never think of me as being Monica but some chick scientist. Also it makes more sense with some of the stuff with the chemicals. I mean how many plumbers really know how to make a lethal chemical to some big ass plant.
George and Jimmy: George was really there to die, to be completey honest. I didn't want my story for ppl to say was too much like ambers so instead of being the main character he is the opposite and really just a good face to kill. Jimmy on the other hand was one of ma favs to write about. I knew from the start how where and why he was going to die, I knew it becuz it was one of ma first plans. I tried to make him as much of a coward as possible, so his couragious outbreak at the end would be alot more in effect.
Kevin: He is one of my 4 fav characters in the game and also the top romance character for any outbreak writer. With him you can add action that makes sense, being a cop and all, and you can add some attitude as well so ofcoarse Monica needed a boyfriend, so who better than a complete opposite :)
Yoko: Is another one of my 4 favs. I like her bcuz of her story relating to the game and also there is just something about her that makes being her fun so there was no way i was going to kill her in the first installment. I see some really great things in her future with me.
If you noticed everyone (except John) died at the very end. Here I was trying to add to the idea of outbreak. In most levels, especially BFP, your team mates, unless on a very hard difficulty or sumth, will live to the very end and die when you have to defend the turn table or fight the boss. Another thing was I tried to add as many of the rooms and make it as close to the level as possible. My regret was with george, I completely played him wrong, and it was too late to change anything when i realized it, I made him seem like a total jerk which in his character bio, it says he gets along well with others but hey Monica changed right lol. Owell he is dead now. The hole Martin thing was kinda rushed and last minute but it was there to make Monica's (almost sacrifice) more effective. Because a person she trusted more than anything tried to kill her twice, Jimmy had died, George died, she had to watch that other guy die. and then she just gives up, so that's why that happened. Besides the george thing my other large regret was not being able to add onther of ma 4 favs, Cindy. I love that lil waitress but now that Monica's alive, well you always kinda see her and Kevin together well at least i do, Like he is always lending her a soulder and she should take Monica's place. However ma last favourite, David should be no problem. He never is. I think I know which scenario I will do next but if i choose to do that one it will be altered a little, due to some things that need work, but all in all it should be good, but even then review on any chap and tell me which you would like to see. My final problem is alyssa, I love that crazy woman in the game bu again I already have 2 female dominate characters so I don't know how she'll come into play. so anyways if you have anthing you would like to be answered review and as i am always happy to answer questions. Oh p.s. the last three ppl didn't die lol