This is a story that challenges the very existence of the creation. What if
a tragedy happened in the beginning of time that threw off the balance of
the Universe? What if those who wanted nothing more than power, and it
ruined more lives than could be counted caused this tragedy? And what if
this was all centered on the child of the stars, Chaos, and she never even
knew what she was? This is the story of the adventure of a child, and then
a woman trying to find herself, and a chance at the life she was meant to
live. And the mortals who were thrown in this cauldron of adventure and
deceit.
And just a warning, this first chapter is laying the layout of the future story, and I tried to make it sound as biblical and serious as I could. But don't worry about it, the story goes back to the 'normal' writing style in the next chapter.
Anyway, PLEASE JUST GIVE IT A CHANCE! And even if you're not sure if it's worth the time it would take to read, at least try something new and tell me what you think about it.
Anyway, enjoy!
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In the beginning of time, everything was created in a certain and specific order. First the blackness of space came into being, and then in that space stars came immediately after in order to fill the darkness with some light. For that was the way of things, and it shall always be so. For everything in creation there will be an equal and opposite to counteract it. And then, because it was the way of things at the time, 10 fates were brought to life. Immediately after the fates, which were the children of the sun and order another was born. Her name was chaos.
But because when the world and all of the planets were first created, they thought it expedient for chaos to sleep. And sleep she would until the time came for her to work hand in hand with the fates. Order counteracting chaos, everything in its perfect balance.
But that was not the way it was to be, because the one of the fates, by the name of Balzazar had a different idea. He called his brothers together to discuss it, and they came to a conclusion. After all they thought. What need was there for chaos? It only brought pain in the world, and they perceived it as right that only order would exist.
And so, before the earth was even created, with people to populate it the great plan fell apart. For the fates did something that they thought to be good, but was in actuality was a barbarous act for which they could never be forgiven.
They combined all of their might, and went to the sleeping form of chaos, resting in the blackness of space. And before her eyes could fly open, they imprisoned her in a cage of pure light, which forced her to continue to sleep on, despite the imprisonment.
They then continued to create the world, and had absolute power over everything around them. Where they wanted an ocean, they put it without fear of it ever flooding. And everything went exactly where they wanted it, and they began to like the feeling of being in charge.
That was how their first great idea came about. For soon after the creation of earth, another plane of existence would come into being. And this was why everything was created in the first place. And in this plane, all of the spirits of those who would live could be born much like the fates and chaos were once.
And this would be where the fates would live thereon in. And chaos would live in the next plane created, and that was hell. A place where the souls could go when they died. It's own type of paradise, despite the fact that many living people began to fear it.
But the fates began to turn, and the power went to their heads. And so they thought 'why should they live their own lives, if we can make them better?'
And this was the big part in the great plan, far worse than even capturing chaos. For they had thought of something they chose to call 'destiny.' And they thought it like a great game, and began to become full of themselves. For it was up to them to choose when someone was born, and when they would die. And everything that happened in a single person's life happened according to this great order. For hand in hand with chaos comes choice, and they had taken that away forever.
And while they manipulated these people's lives like pieces on a chessboard, they began to get more and more overconfident, thinking that nothing could happen to ruin what they called their great plan, that was a new deviation from what was meant to happen.
But Balzazar, now sure of his genius because this all came from his plan, began to turn his eyes to chaos. And he didn't see her as a partner in the same cause, but he saw her as his worst enemy, despite the fact that she had never met him. She was still like a small child, not even born yet for she had yet to awaken. But Balzazar began to wonder how he could hurt her the most, without letting her go, or allowing her to have the power she was born with to change the new way of the world. And once more came an idea what would change everything.
And when he gave his idea to his brothers, at first they laughed at him, thinking it was some sort of horrible joke. That he could never be serious to think they would risk everything like that. But he had a power over them because they had listened to him once, and would do it again.
They would enslave chaos.
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I just finished reading the bible for a while, so maybe you can tell that I was wording it sort of like that. But don't worry, that won't last long. I just felt like it for this chapter.
If you want to find out how and why they enslaved chaos and what this has to do with the animes I would advise you review and tell me. I wrote this again because I got NO reviews on my other story, and decided it wasn't worth continuing. Don't make me do the same thing here.
Email me at sirencalling@yahoo.com PLEASE I would love to hear what you have to say. And to insult me for my new idea on chaos, and what it really is.
Ja ne siren
And just a warning, this first chapter is laying the layout of the future story, and I tried to make it sound as biblical and serious as I could. But don't worry about it, the story goes back to the 'normal' writing style in the next chapter.
Anyway, PLEASE JUST GIVE IT A CHANCE! And even if you're not sure if it's worth the time it would take to read, at least try something new and tell me what you think about it.
Anyway, enjoy!
***
In the beginning of time, everything was created in a certain and specific order. First the blackness of space came into being, and then in that space stars came immediately after in order to fill the darkness with some light. For that was the way of things, and it shall always be so. For everything in creation there will be an equal and opposite to counteract it. And then, because it was the way of things at the time, 10 fates were brought to life. Immediately after the fates, which were the children of the sun and order another was born. Her name was chaos.
But because when the world and all of the planets were first created, they thought it expedient for chaos to sleep. And sleep she would until the time came for her to work hand in hand with the fates. Order counteracting chaos, everything in its perfect balance.
But that was not the way it was to be, because the one of the fates, by the name of Balzazar had a different idea. He called his brothers together to discuss it, and they came to a conclusion. After all they thought. What need was there for chaos? It only brought pain in the world, and they perceived it as right that only order would exist.
And so, before the earth was even created, with people to populate it the great plan fell apart. For the fates did something that they thought to be good, but was in actuality was a barbarous act for which they could never be forgiven.
They combined all of their might, and went to the sleeping form of chaos, resting in the blackness of space. And before her eyes could fly open, they imprisoned her in a cage of pure light, which forced her to continue to sleep on, despite the imprisonment.
They then continued to create the world, and had absolute power over everything around them. Where they wanted an ocean, they put it without fear of it ever flooding. And everything went exactly where they wanted it, and they began to like the feeling of being in charge.
That was how their first great idea came about. For soon after the creation of earth, another plane of existence would come into being. And this was why everything was created in the first place. And in this plane, all of the spirits of those who would live could be born much like the fates and chaos were once.
And this would be where the fates would live thereon in. And chaos would live in the next plane created, and that was hell. A place where the souls could go when they died. It's own type of paradise, despite the fact that many living people began to fear it.
But the fates began to turn, and the power went to their heads. And so they thought 'why should they live their own lives, if we can make them better?'
And this was the big part in the great plan, far worse than even capturing chaos. For they had thought of something they chose to call 'destiny.' And they thought it like a great game, and began to become full of themselves. For it was up to them to choose when someone was born, and when they would die. And everything that happened in a single person's life happened according to this great order. For hand in hand with chaos comes choice, and they had taken that away forever.
And while they manipulated these people's lives like pieces on a chessboard, they began to get more and more overconfident, thinking that nothing could happen to ruin what they called their great plan, that was a new deviation from what was meant to happen.
But Balzazar, now sure of his genius because this all came from his plan, began to turn his eyes to chaos. And he didn't see her as a partner in the same cause, but he saw her as his worst enemy, despite the fact that she had never met him. She was still like a small child, not even born yet for she had yet to awaken. But Balzazar began to wonder how he could hurt her the most, without letting her go, or allowing her to have the power she was born with to change the new way of the world. And once more came an idea what would change everything.
And when he gave his idea to his brothers, at first they laughed at him, thinking it was some sort of horrible joke. That he could never be serious to think they would risk everything like that. But he had a power over them because they had listened to him once, and would do it again.
They would enslave chaos.
***
I just finished reading the bible for a while, so maybe you can tell that I was wording it sort of like that. But don't worry, that won't last long. I just felt like it for this chapter.
If you want to find out how and why they enslaved chaos and what this has to do with the animes I would advise you review and tell me. I wrote this again because I got NO reviews on my other story, and decided it wasn't worth continuing. Don't make me do the same thing here.
Email me at sirencalling@yahoo.com PLEASE I would love to hear what you have to say. And to insult me for my new idea on chaos, and what it really is.
Ja ne siren