Hi everyone does everyone like my story so far... well i did get some mail from people saying that i did a good job and they can't wait till i make a new chapter lol... any way im glad your enjoying this story... see whats going on is im making things up while i go so please bare with me.

ON the last chapter... "ok inuyasha show me what you got" he laughed his evil laugh.

Chapter 11 The fight that ends a life

The wind blew over Inuyasha and Naraku both of them wanted to tare into each other. Everyone else backed away so they could fight. Kagome was watching them and she couldnt do nothing about it. Inuyasha and Naraku stared at each other before they moved to attack each other.

"Come on Inuyasha, can you do better then that" Naraku moved from inuyashas sword. "your weak Inuyasha" Naraku slamed him up against the tree.

"Dont count on it Naraku im just getting warmed up" Inuyasha nocked him away sending him flewing in to the side of the Palace.

Kagome didnt want to watch but Naraku's powers were controlling her making her watch his every move. all she could do was cry. The others looked over at her and they all ran towards her trying to snap her out of it.

"come on kagome snap out of it inuyasha's going ot get hurt if we dont do something soon." sango shock kagome but she couldnt responed to nothing.

"dame what are we going to do, if we dont act fast were all doom" Miroku bent down trying to help sango out.

Sesshomaru and Sessama kept there eyes on the battle that was taking place. "what are we going to do Sesshomaru, if we dont get Kagome to responed then theres no hope" Sessama was near tears.

Sesshomaru didnt now what to do for the first time "Sessama i just dont now what im going to do to help" He looked down at rin the back at the battle field.

"wait i think i now what we should do" Sesshomaru took rin and layed her on ahuh he told the dragons to take rin to a save place far from here and to protect her from harm.

The dust from the battle was blowing around Inuyasha and Naraku body they both stoped to take a breath.

"well Naraku i didnt now that you needed to rest am i that stronger then before." Inuyasha started to laugh a bit.

" ahh you wish Inuyasha im not weak yet" he charged at Inuyasha full speed nocking inuyasha on the ground hard.

Inuyasha got up slowly and gave Naraku and evil look. "you now, killing you will bring me great pleasure," Inuyasha got up and dusted the dirt from his butt.

"Well the pleasure will never come im to power for you Inuyasha" He showed off his evil grin "ill kill you before you even touch me"

"ah yea right, Its payback time for what you did to kagome you bastARD. he ran towards naraku and swang his sword "WIND SCAR"

Naraku ducked and the wind scar missed him by a hair "Is that all you got inuyasha, Are you still that weak that you cant even kill me" Naraku hit Inuyasha and sent him flying back.

The others couldnt watch what was going on Inuyasha was losing. Kagome was still crying watching inuyasha get hurt and cant do nothing about it. When Inuyasha got hit again from one of Naraku's hard blows it nocked out Inuyasha. The others wanted to help but Naraku told them that it was there fight and its not any of there buiseness to enter in. Kagome was down in tears when Naraku told her that he was going to kill Inuyasha with a speacial power that he never showed anybody. Naraku flew up in the air and summon a energy so big it looked like the sun was falling from the sky. Then he looked down at sesshomaru

"Sesshomaru, im going to break your sword so that you wont bring your stupid brother or anyone else back alive." with one swing of His hand Naraku broke the sword the sesshomaru was caring, They stared to sesshomaur how now had and evil look on his face a look of death in his eyes./

"DAME YOU NARAKU" sesshomaru yelled at him,

Naraku focused on Inuyasha for a minute. "well inuyasha this is the end of you" the energy fell out of the sky and headed towards inuyasha it was so bright that everyone covered there eyes to hide the light.. when it finialy hit the ground the light became dime. and they looked in inuyasha's direction. But what they saw brought tears to there eyes. Kagome was laying on top of inuyasha her blood was everywhere. her one arm and leg was missing her eyes were opend she wasnt dead yet but she was soon. They ran towards Kagome not to touch her. When Inuyasha woke up by the smell of Kagomes blood on him and looked at her and started to cry.

"Kagome you fool what was you thinking" Inuyasha held her in his arm tears were falling from his eyes on her cheek.

"In..I..Inuyasha...Plea...Please dont..cry... I'll... b..be...o...ok..." Kagome was studring and couldnt keep her eyes open much

"NO you better not leave me i dont now what i will do if you leave me" Inuyasha was trying to help kagome to understand him. Everyone stared at her tears falling from there eyes.

"Plea...please inuyasha...Don...dont hate me... I ... i.. I love you..." Kagome eyes grew dime and closed very slowly she stoped breathing and went cold in inuyashas arms.

" Kagome" he looked down and saw that she wasnt moving, breathing, no more."K...K...Kagome...KAGOME" inuyasha brought his face down to her ears and whispered i love you to her... he looked up at Naraku and his eyes went red. he laid kagome down and kissed her bloody lips. "NARAKU IM GOING TO GUT YOU LIKE A FAT PIG" inuyasha eyes grew redder and his nails grew larger. his teeth became even sharper then before. "your died bastard.". "you took the women i love away...

"ahhh i thought you loved her" Naraku pointed to Kikyou that stood behind Inuyasha she was standing over Kagome's dead body.

"Im not going to let you trick me again i she died a long time ago nothings going to change but now you killed kagome and your going to pay" Inuyasha turned to Naraku and started to cry when the thought of kagome passed his mind.

Kikyou's eyes widen when she saw kagome laying there not moving. "How can He do this, this is not what i told him to do" Kikyou bent down and got a better look at kagome. the others watched her to see what she was up to...

"NARAKU WHAT HAVE YOU DONE" kikyou yelled out for all to here. then she looked at kagome again."ist amazing me and here are the same and yet two different people, I love inuyasha she loves inuyasha i made him happy but she made him even happier she does diserve Inuyasha more then i do." Kikyous eyes begain to water at the thought of what she had to do.

"Kikyou what are you trying to say" Sango nealed down beside her wondering what kikyou ment by that,

"Im going to bring her back using the rest of my lifes energy we will become on so we both can have inuyasha." Kikyou said and looked up at inuyasha that was now fighting with Naraku...

OK please review not i got to tell you one thing i dont now how to do battles im sorry it short but the next on should be long ... now my computer is going to need some fixing so i wont be on for a week or two so bare with me...