Setting 04: 1533 DAY 1, Great Salt Lake Perimeter

"It is astonishing with how little wisdom mankind can be governed,

when that little wisdom is its own."

-Inge, William Ralph

       No sign of him here either  Nonspecifically directed declaration

       Well, keep searching  Imperative directive and indifference

       Where do you suppose he is?  Specifically directed, information interrogative

       If I knew, do you not think that you would know too?  Rhetorical question and scorn

       That is not what I meant  Reflex defensive assertion and disconcertedness

       I know what you meant  Complacent declaration and haughtiness

       I know you know what I meant  Ruffled retort and slight exasperation

       Then we understand each other?  Complacent, rhetorical question and indifference

       Crystal-clear, but where do you suppose he is?  Punchy, reflex dismissal and assertive interrogative

       If somehow I knew and you did not know, would we be randomly flying around?  Rhetorical question and vestigial condescension

       …  Internal conflict and strained suppression of ire

       …  Self-satisfaction and pleasure

       Why didn't the Carrier send more ships besides just ours?  Earnest interrogative

       Obviously the Carrier thinks one scout ship is enough locate him  Reflex ludicrous response

       We both know that is not true  Rebuff and strained patience

       I know you know that we both know the same thing  Self-righteous clarification, feigned admiration, and slight exasperation

       We have been through this many times already Declaration, disapproval, and mild annoyance

       Then stop bringing it up!  Snappy retort and scorn

       …  Pause and discomfiture

       …  Indifference

       You have not answered my question  Declaration and impatience

       Search me  Malicious, absurd suggestion

       …  Pause and frustration

       If I had the answer, you would have it already too  Supercilious explanation

       …  Helplessness and dissatisfaction

       …  Dismissal and indifference

       I fear the worst  Earnest opinion

       I know  Complacent, self-evident declaration

       …  Tested tolerance

       …  Indifference

       Where could he have gone?  Nonspecifically directed rhetorical question, befuddlement, and slight exasperation

       For the last time, I do not know!  Sudden expletive and flood of annoyance

       It was a rhetorical question.  I was not addressing you  Preplanned self-assured clarification and latent affront

       Well, I heard it  Indirect plaintive declaration and annoyance

       Then it is not my fault  Childish declaration of self-exculpation

       Just mind your own business and keep searching  Brusque imperative directive and dismissal

       What are you going to do?  Semi-interested interrogative, information interrogative, and blatant check

       You already know  Patronizing reminder

       What good is looking through the archived data of this planet's sample population?  Interrogative and skepticism

       You already know that too  Patronizing reminder and deliberate condescension

       Do you honestly believe that by knowing everything about the whole you can infer each individual's every possible action in any given situation?  Derisive rhetorical question, slight amusement, and intimated challenge

       What do you think?  Rhetorical question, information interrogative, and contemptuousness

       I know you just meant for me to search your thoughts  Complacent observance and purposive display

       I know we both know what I meant and that I would know what you would know  Self-righteous retort, contemptuousness, and intimated challenge

       …  Disappointment and frustration

       …  Internal revel

       Well, I think we should not assume anything before we know everything  Solemn declaration, indirect caution, and hint directive

       I knew you were thinking that, so please do not remind me  Complacent declaration, haughtiness, imperative directive, disdain

       …  Ire

       …  Self-assuredness and indifference

       Where could he be?  Nonspecifically directed rhetorical question, information interrogative, and curiosity

       Can you not even stop thinking for more than two seconds?  Sudden expletive, imbedded imperative directive, and annoyance

       I just think it is peculiar that after all our time here, he is the first data collector who has not returned from his routine run  Hasty declaration and mitigating clarification

       I know what you are thinking, you do not have to tell me  Complacent declaration, exasperation, and need directive

       And you do not find that peculiar?  Interrogative and lurking suspicion

       You already know what I think  Reflex argumentative assertion and intimated challenge

       You think the timing is peculiar because our data collection here is just about complete  Calm declaration and casual dismissal

       Yes, I know, because I was thinking that, and thank you for reminding me  Overly agreeable concurrence, brusquely feigned deference, and blatant causticity

       You have also considered the possibility that he has defected from the Clan!   Scrutinizing exclamation and marvel

       Yes I have considered that possibility!    Sudden expletive, condescension, and voluminous annoyance

       My apologies  Awkward concession, shock, and fading effervescence

       Stop repeating everything I think!  Directive with imbedded threat and annoyance

       Again, my apologies  Mitigating concession and daunt

       …  Disgust

       …  Discomfiture and uncertainty

       …  Pause and mild annoyance

       …!  Awareness and curiosity

       I detect it, do not repeat yourself  Blunt dismissal, imperative directive, and annoyance

       How clever of them!   Approving exclamation and admiration

       The ability to shift a city out of the visibility spectrum does not make the society intelligent  Offhand derogatory dismissal and pomposity

       …  Adverse skepticism 

       Land over there  Authoritative directive

       I know they cannot see us, but wouldn't we be breaching protocol distance to the samples?  Considerate interrogative, suggestive reminder, skepticism, and latent criticism

       It does not matter because they will not detect us anyway and we need to recharge our engine batteries  Dictatorial dismissal and didactic explanation

       …  Doubt

       Do not worry; even if they notice power surges, they are not advanced enough to discover us  Assurance and disdain

       Fine  Conceded accordance

       Now that we have landed, launch project 'Archangel'  Authoritative directive and eagerness

       I will  Casual acknowledgement

       Have our unit investigate the one they call 'Squall'  Directive and disdain

       Will do Casual acknowledgement and agreement

       Our recording incriminates this 'Squall' as the possible perpetrator  Stalwart declaration and biased speculation

       The recording is not definitive, and I would make no accusations just yet  Earnest declaration, reminder, intimated compromise, and purposive check

       The 'Archangel' unit will soon prove my worst suspicions  Self-assured declaration, anticipation, stimulation, and deliberate inattention

       …  Hesitance and distrust

       Anyway, I am going to go check on the prisoner  Self-important dismissal and indifference

       Fine  Callous acknowledgement

       I wonder if we should abduct another specimen to ransom PuPu back in case he is their prisoner  Nonspecifically directed declaration, consideration, and interest

       That is hardly necessary at this juncture, QyQy  Jeering declaration, hint directive, and purposive interference

       We shall see  Self-assured dismissal and disregard

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Jeremy's Scribbles:

If you didn't catch this in Setting 01, the syntactical structure might seem a bit weird at first glance, because I have a unique method of transcribing what the aliens are communicating.

The "stage directions" after each line they communicates are necessary, and they aren't stage directions; PuPu's alien clan does not communicate with their voices, only their thoughts. They don't have facial expressions either, which means to communicate elements such as sarcasm or emotion, I have to add the "stage directions" and, if you noticed, keep the emotion-denoting punctuation marks (question or exclamation) outside of the brackets.

In actuality, those "stage directions" are called the "pragmatics" of language. The words they actually "speak" are called the "semantics" of language. Because they aren't actually making any sounds with their mouths, I used brackets instead of "quotations" to indicate what they want to communicate with their thoughts. Also, throughout the rest of the story, thoughts are italicized and speech is unmodified. So what the aliens want to communicate show up like this.

However, even by including the pragmatics after the semantics, there is still no way I can differentiate for you which alien is which. If they did not greet each other when a third or fourth being waltzed in, or say their respective names in each line, we would have no idea who the addresser and addressee were for any given statement. That is the flaw of indirect narration, I'm afraid, and I will try to find was to rectify it.

I would appreciate your reviews for this chapter so I can see what you are thinking or feeling, so as better to go back and make corrections for other readers if I see that everyone is stumbling between the same two chapters.  Also, if you catch any spelling or grammar mistakes, would you please notify me via email so that I may correct them as soon as possible?  Thanks in advance.