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"What?" said George completely confused
"I think I'm a death eater," Fred repeated
"I heard you. I'm just confused, how can you think you're a death eater, either you're a death eater or your not a death eater, its simple, and besides, you can't be a death eater, you're a Weasley, its like - impossible, well at least illogical," George rambled, obviously avoiding finding out the truth, "do you have the mark on your arm?" He said ripping up the sleeves of Fred's jumper, getting a little hysterical
They both stared at Fred's bare arm that had no marks on it, too relieved to talk.
Fred slowly pulled the sleeve back down his arm.
"Well that doesn't make any sense, why was I doing all those things if I'm not a death eater, maybe I'm just a horrible person."
"Don't be stupid you idiot your not a horrible person," George said, pulling him into a brotherly hug.
"Hermione probably thinks I'm a horrible person, and I am, I cheated on her."
"Yeah but you weren't you, you were under the imperious curse."
"I know, but now I'm really confused, if I was under the imperious curse by Chloe that means she was making me do all those horrible things, so she must be a death eater."
"But these things you apparently did. They never showed up in the news, why is that?"
"I don't know, but if Chloe is a death eater were all in trouble." Said Fred and then all of a sudden he jumped up, "Where's Hermione?"
"In the house, wh-," but George stopped talking because Fred had apparated away.
When Fred arrived at the burrow everything looked normal, but he felt so bad. There was just a bad feeling in the pit of his stomach.
He ran up to Ginny's room because to check if Hermione was in there and the sight he saw made him go week at the knees. Chloe disapparated out of the room with her hand over Hermione's mouth. This hurt Fred enough but the look Hermione gave him before she got taken away was enough to make a fully grown man cringe in the corner, terrified. Obviously she hated him, a lot, and he was standing in the door way thinking he has never and will never love any one else as much as he loves Hermione right now, he had to get her back, to save her and convince her to be with him, he'd do anything, even die for her.
As Fred walked out of the room he closed the door after him and accidentally ran into Ginny.
"Sorry Fred," she said and then she realized Hermione was in her room crying, or so Ginny thought, because he cheated on her, "You better of just been apologizing to Hermione because you made her real upset you know, and you made us upset too, what are you doing hanging around that Chloe bitch again? Last time we never, ever got to see you and you started to change and you weren't acting like my big brother and i… (Sniff) … and I missed you," she said starting to cry, "sorry, I'm just worried."
Fred pulled her into a big hug with a half smile on his face, "I'm sorry Gin, I'll never, ever do it again, I promise," and he kissed her on the forehead.
Then Ginny punched Fred (hard but he'd never admit it hurt) in the chest and said "don't tell Ron I cried he'll be mean to me," she half sniffed half laughed.
Ginny looked up at Fred and saw he had tears in his eyes too.
"What's the matter?" she asked
"I have to find Hermione."
"Isn't she in her room?"
"No, Chloe just took her away, and now I think if we don't get her back soon we might never see her again," he said, mentally punching him self for being so emotional.
"What would Chloe want with Hermione, I mean I know she is a jealous bitch but would she really hurt Hermione to get to you?"
Fred gave Ginny a look that so obviously meant 'yes, yes I do'.
"Your right," she said, "lets get Harry, Ron and George, they'll help us find her, if only mum and dad were home, but its o.k. we'll be alright."
Fred smiled at is little sister, he never realized she was so grown up; she was so brave in the face of danger. Well that's what dating the 'chosen one' does to you I guess.
(A.N sorry it's so emotional and sorry if it's too corny, I'm just in an emotional mood,)
After the four youngest Weasley's and Harry were all in the lounge room Fred explained what was going on (With the help of George to fill in the gaps of when Fred was under the imperious curse).
"Sorry about the punch," Ron said sheepishly looking at Fred's blackening eye, "I didn't know you were, you know, under the imperious curse, I thought you were just being a jerk, like last time, only last time you were also under the imperious curse, so um –"
"Shut up Ron," Ginny said, saving Ron the embarrassment of having to keep talking.
"So what's our plan of action?" Harry asked.
"Well right now we can only assume Chloe's motive to steal Hermione was just to get to me, but it could be far worse, and it probably is seeing as she had imperious dust which makes all signs point to her being a death eater," Fred stated.
"Well how do we find Hermione?"
"Well me and Fred have been working on a new invention," George said shyly, "But it doesn't definitely work."
"Well it's the best chance we've got, I'll go get it," Fred said to George.
"So when do you plan to tell us what the hell the invention is?" Ginny asked impatiently.
"Settle Gin, I was getting to that, geez don't go and cry on me," Fred said slyly
Then for a moment the look in Ginny's eyes made Fred think he should start thinking up a death wish but then she laughed and jokingly pushed his shoulder as he left the room to get the invention.
"Well our genius invention is an apparition tracker, I know, I know, we're geniuses, you can congratulate us later," George said, mock proudly.
Then Fred came back into the lounge room with the apparition tracker, which looked like a metal detector only made of gold and Harry, Ginny and Ron followed Fred and George up to Ginny's room.
"If this invention works as good as we hope it should show us exactly where Chloe has apparated to."
There was a bunch of complicated beeping noises and then a holographic screen of the Earth came up, then it spun and zoomed into England, zoomed into the Burrow and zoomed in once more to show a picture of the Weasley's attic with Hermione strapped into a chair in a corner, passed out and Chloe fixing up a potion in the centre of the room.
(Well that's the chapter, hope you like it, hope its not to teary or corny of bad, sorry if its short but ill update a.s.a.p, bubye)
