Don't know what it is but this has really got me writing. This chapter will be not as violent as the previous chapters so don't complain I got to write some story board don't I? Well if I don't here is some other stuff. Disclaimer, I don't own fable or this is what it would have been with a deeper fighting system.

Chapter3, Death-bringger

Raven looked up at the young martial artist as he wiped the blood from his hand onto his orange outer shirt that had eastern writing on the front. Raven took the time to make sure the man was not out to kill Raven.

"So you are my guardian angle." Raven was ready to fight but the monk held an open hand, which meant he did not want to fight.

"No, it was just luck that you had my sympathy. I could tell by looking at you that you have no training in the way of the open fist." The boy took a fighting position. "I however do wish to have a sprawl with you."

"Sprawl?" Raven took a wild swing at the monk's head and missed. "Shining Fist!" The monk changed stances and punched the ground. A powerful spring of air had knocked Raven a few feet backward before he hit the ground. "Bear Claw." The Monk jumped ready to pounce but Raven did a quick evasive maneuver to dodge the move. He then took his foot to the Monk's chest and flipped him on his back. Raven then took to his feet and landed a blow to his opponent's chest.

"Do you give up now?" Raven smirked at his opponent on the ground.

"That would be wise. You have proven worthy to train in my school. You are a lot stronger than what I had expected." He reiterated.

"What? You want me to train under you. As far as I see it you are under me." Raven looked agitated as the monk smiled.

"You must not know me then, I am Shining Phoenix of the East. But if you wish to be humbled I will be more than happy than to oblige you." Phoenix then went to the fighting style Hidden Fist. His hands were opened like he was going to surrender but his fingers were slightly curved. He then darted in to thin air. Raven could see through this trick as the master was really just jumping off tree trunks. Raven timed the jump when he was coming toward a third tree to his left so he casted force push to knock him into the tree. Raven jumped over to the master and nailed him again in the chest with a strong punch. The Master flipped a few yards back to gain some room. He was holding his chest in pain as he began to cough out more threats.

"So if you can survive I will just show you my techniques." Shining Phoenix spat on the ground.

"Survive what, you look like you will need to survive another hit." Raven charged full steam.

"From my father's Arena name, Silver Phoenix style." Phoenix casted a silver glowing phoenix that wrapped itself around the monk. He stood there for a few seconds and his eyes turned the color of blood. The spirit of his father was joining the fight. A classic fighting style that only masters of will and a strong mind could use. Maybe Shining Phoenix could be a powerful asset to his quest.

"Okay you win I would like to learn the way of the 'opened' fist." Raven put up his hands but the monk just stood there.

"How could I just give up the chance to kill one of the same blood as Death-bringger." The monk came towards Raven but Raven just dodged out of the way.

"Same blood, Death-bringger?" Raven's mind was riddled with questions. The monk was able to grab Raven's leg and tossed him into a tree. Raven was temporally knocked unconscious and the father would waste no time in killing him. His arm gained a silver light in the form of a phoenix wing. He charged the tree were Raven's head was resting. He tried to decapitate Raven but he missed by an inch cutting the tree in two. A warm breeze swept through the area waking up the sleeping beast inside Raven.

"So Malicious you have changed. You don't seem to be as sinister as when you Jack and me worked together. I was right to curse your family and leave you to die." Raven's other self got up and put his hands out and to black orbs formed and electricity jumped back and forth. Three black chains wrapped around the man's arms, and his legs and they all stuck into the ground. "Let me see your chest." Raven walked over to the monk and ripped open his shirt. There was a large D and a cross behind him. "I see that Skorm's mark as ailed you and your family." Raven laughed as he turned his hand green like the technique he used in the tournament and began to draw words across the chest of the monk with his fingers that where now covered with venom.

"Skorm's mark is a horrible spell even scum bags like you are over. Trapping the ghost of my family in the world as you feast on the energy they produce." The monk flinched as the final word was written on him

It shall occur again, the blade will be released one way or another and it will devoir the world in the hands of my off spring. Alister shall die to his touch and Avo will cower at just the mentioning of his name. The rising will bring a new age in this time of uncertainty.

"Now if you don't mind I missed my son's birthday so I think it is only fitting that I give him a load of ass kicking moves. I will make sure he knows it was your son." Raven's father held his hand out and absorbed the memory of the fighting techniques of the 'open hand'. He then made a dark flame and morphed it into a sword and struck the monk across the chest. They both passed out on the spot and Raven had a dream.

Raven walked the halls of an empty Hero's guild. He walked around looking at books then he heard a loud explosion and the door busted down. There was a man masked in red called Jack of Blades and the other was a tall man with large muscles and a large set of Dark armor. He wielded a large broad axe covered in blood. It was odd for being quiet outside they looked like they came back from a war, but then they opened a door to a large chamber.

So this is the chamber of fate? Impressive I thought it would be a puny little table to worship at. Jack marveled the room as the man in armor held up what looked like a head and it vanished to a large door. Seven symbols all light up and a portal opened up. They walked towards the portal and Raven ran to catch up. The tall man turned around and took out his axe. He drew back his hand, Raven watched until he realized that he was going to get him. Raven's head was chopped off and flew to the other side of the room and his body was offered to the portal and it turned a dark red.

Fire was near Raven and it woke him up. He was covered in sweat as he looked around and saw the monk. Oh thank Avo, he must have lived, maybe he could help. But now visions of certain fighting styles rushed through his head and it burned into his memory.

"So you are alive, we must have been attacked by bandits during our fight." He happily ate his fish that was roasting on an open fire. Raven hadn't eaten in days so it looked like a good meal to him. "Yes, I do have an extra one." Silver Phoenix handed him an extra fish.

"Thanks, so what are you doing here?" Raven looked down at the cut the monk hand on his chest, one of a blade. That ruled out his suspicion that he did it.

"I'm here to fix what happened in the past. My father's father was in the Great War with Alister during that time he was killed by Death-bringger and was placed under a spell called the Mark of Skrom. I will have to kill a blood relative of death-bringger to free me from this curse." They both sat in silence as Raven thought about what he was told by Silver Phoenix's father told him.

"I'm trying to get to the east to find a dragon's fang to fix my sword." Raven looked at him realizing that he could help him out.

"That would be do able if the river was not blocked off by Omega and all the boats have been destroyed." The monk threw his stick in the ground and got up.

"Omega huh? I've heard of tougher."

The end of chapter three

To masterbeef, no I don't play any of those online anymore but my friend does and I'll get back to that.