Hmm…I sometimes have writers block…I MIGHT post it to you later on; but that's a maybe. Mine isn't as big…I think? Anywayz, yes, I dedicated my chapter to Illegally Blonde last time…who will be new dedication of gratitude NOW? Well…drum roll and the dedication of the new-and-improved chapter is, presenting…

Thugette90!

Words of "Wisdom"-I love your fic "Brotherly luv" please update ASAP! You are most defiantly a loyal reviewer! Thankers and thankies to you, girl!

Words of "wisdom" to Illegally Blonde (who did not get one last time)-YES! I LOVE and ADORE your fic "I Have My Eye On You" and "Love, Hatred, And Jealousy" you rock HARDCORE!

Sorry…I had a friend in school who often used "hardcore" and got me interested in that "vocabulary" word, if not, hooked.

Update Of Life: Wellz…I just picked up a copy of "Fruits Baskets" and it's COOL! But one problem…I was kind'a disaponited. Why is it so popular? It's like a mix of all anime I've read…especially "Ranma 1/2"! They're both about people who turn into something after something common occurs! Later, since Barns& Nobles didn't have issue two, I got five. I know pathetic I skipped from one to five, isn't it?) So, in the first one, there seems to be more…Yuki/Tohru-san (Lol, love the "San" and "Kun" they use. First off, if you have not or heard of Fruits Basket (Yeah right –rolls eyes-sorry) the first issue is TOTALLY different compared to fifth, there's more Yuki/Tohru in the first and more Kyo/Tohru in the fifth. Needless to say, I'm just a newbie of Fruits Baskets.

Curious question:

What is the current issue of Fruits Baskets? I must know! Is it ten?

Second:

Why is there a fan club for Yuki? He's handsome? Oh wellz, again! I haven't seen the anime, just the manga.

Chapter Three

"Detention With Destiny I"

Kori, Raven, Bee, and Jinx came out of school in the afternoon, angry as ever. "How dare those evil little preps ofuva…" Raven cursed on and on.

'Geez, I can't believe I'm thinking this, but I couldn't said it better myself.' Bee thought and spoke, "They have no right to be angry at us, but we did start the fight…I'm so glad I got to kick Veronica's ass, although, I really wanted to attack Barbie or Terra…lucky you guys, Raven and Kori."

"Yes…but personally, who was the one that Jinx pounced?" Kori asked curiously.

"No such luck…can't remember her name…although I'm sure she remembers mine…" Jinx answered. "And they say the not popular one is supposed to be 'desperate' to be noticed? Please, those girls want attention 24/7 non-stop the center of attention."

"Hey, guys…who do you think is worse?" Bee inquired.

"Does it matter? In this case, equality is everything." Raven sarcastically said.

"But, really, if you had to pick," Bee begged.

"Oh...fine...it's kind'a've a tie between Terra and Babs."

"I think Carrey and Babs are awful." Kori admitted.

"Well, duh, and Babs…she's so…slutty…" Jinx gave a gross expression.

"Uh…yeah…see you guys on Saturday…no thanks to the preps…" Raven waved goodbye and they swear they heard a 'stupid Terra' in there.

Kori arrived home later that evening after going to her favorite new café, Starbucks. After she ran into an old friend, her worst nightmare. Someone she hoped to never cross paths with ever in her life again…she might, as well he was Kari's old boyfriend, Xavier. Luckily, he was graduating from his senior year this year, and Kori was in her junior year. Xavier was violent, 'cool', hot, bad-tempered, and overly abusive, especially to woman he had his sights on. Kari broke up with Xavier about one and a half months after they started dating. So to them, being two-timers, it was never really a big impact on their love life. But Xavier quickly hit on Kori and flirted with her, even when he was dating Kari. Kari was usually gone or out on a date with some other guy when it occurred most of the time. But Kori swore, once she rejected his 'love', well, lust, he grew angry. He stalked, followed, and watched her every move with his sharp, razor-like, and cold hazel eyes…and one night, Kori just couldn't take it anymore. She was fed up; so she alerted the authorities. Xavier was sent to juvenile hall, it already said on his record he had committed other crimes, like: injuries, gangs, drugs, smoking, and all sorts of things a male teenager at age eighteen could get into.

Kori thankfully didn't have to wait in line, her order was ready and she immediately left and took the bus home instead of taking the chance of walking in the rain alone at night with him around. He didn't see her, but if she hadn't come earlier, he would have. But back the bad news; Xavier was out of jail and capable. Capable of the unthinkable revenge.

XxXxXxXxXxXxXxXx Kori's Mansion xXxXxXxXx

Kori sighed and took her shoes off when she came home.

"I'm home, mom," Kori announced.

A boy with red hair and greenish blue eyes was sitting down on the couch watching television. 'Huh? What's this? A visitor?' Her mom came in the room, after hearing Kori's voice.

"Kori, dear, we're having a family reunion tomorrow at Seven and your half-brother who you never before is going to live with us for now," her mom was baking something, "He used to live with Kari but recently it sounded like a good idea for him to stay with us from now since you guys need to get to know each other and all."

'Need to?'

"Besides, help me make this chicken," her mom began, "And all your cousins and relatives will be there, Kari will inviting her lovely friends, Veronica, Terra, Barbie, and Jessica there. So, you can bring some friends, too."

"MOM," Kori said in an exasperated tone, "Kari and her friends and my friends don't get along…so, um, Kari's friends and my friends got detention, and…we won't get out until five or more."

"And on your first day…sigh, well the reunion doesn't even start until seven…sure…"

"Thanks, but I need to study."

"Don't you want to meet and greet your brother who you NEVER EVER met before?" Her mom emphasized "never ever".

"I would, um, but…I must check up on my homework? Maybe later." Kori excused herself.

Once she got to her new room, she jumped up and down on her bed. 'How can I live with two Kari's? Mom said he lived with her for his whole life but I guess she really meant a long time…great…the male Kari. Looking forward to "bonding" with him.' Kori thought scornfully. She remembered Raven, Bee, and Jinx's phone number but didn't think that talking would work since Ryan might hear her gossiping about him or something. So, instead, she contacted them by their IM address:

KoRInAsHiNE16: Thanks again for giving me your IM. And sorry...it was my fault that we have detention...

Bumblebee-Clone: No, Kor, those so-called females deserved it. I'm just sorry it wasn't me who beat the crap out of Carrey; I call dibbs on her next time!

RaventHeDaRkGoDdesS: Lol...I was gunna say that! No, wait-I'll just stick with Terra. I swear, I still have a bruised nuckle from pounding the blonde (censored)'s head...I think I won't ever wash this hand again. I'll keep it as my little...'suvoneir'. Heh, heh...

JiNxyDAsOcCoRCeSs: Nice censor.

KoRInAsHiNE16: Who was that dark-haired boy those...um...female dogs were saying I had a desire 4?

Bumblebee-Clone: Richard Grayson. Most egostistical, arrogant, sel-centered guy on Earth...Babs' boyfriend 2.

KORInAsHiNE16: I see...but in math class...

RaventHeDaRkGoDdesS: I know, because I was there, and Kori...it's called a crush. Something Richard has on u.

KoRInAsHiNE16: Oh...you are positive?

Bumblebee-Clone: No shit, sherlock; we wouldn't lie.

JiNxyDAsOcCoRCeSs: ...at least not to u.

KoRInAsHiNE16: I am glad 2 hear this.

KoRInAsHiNE16: ...um...read this.

Bumblebee-Clone: Want to meet us somewhere? We really need 2 "fill you in" on how things work here...

JiNxyDAsOcCoRCeSs: ASAP...

RaventHeDaRkGoDdesS: We'll see u...

Bumblebee-clone: at Starbucks...

KoRInAsHiNE16: Now.

As soon as Kori logged-out she thought, 'I guess I'll have to meet Ryan later…unhopefully…' Kori got out her purple top, skirt, and matching long boots. 'What time is-?' She locked at her clock: 6: 10 p.m. "It…I guess I have twenty minutes." Kori left.
Detention

"Can you believe that guy? Detention on Saturday?" Bee asked unbelievably.

"I know," Jinx agreed, "Not only that, but the preps said they were 'sick' to Mr. Stokes and how their parents are so poor-"

"-They are sick! So let me guess, Mr. Stokes, evil or gullible, bought the whole thing and now it's just us four in detention on Saturday?" Raven guessed correctly. "Those bitches."

Suddenly they heard something-or someone-coming. Raven, Bee, and Jinx glared and didn't seem the least bit surprised except for Kori, of course.

"What are you doing here? This is detention, not Juvenile hall." Raven snapped. It was Richard Grayson.

"Now, now. Is that anyway to treat me?" He asked as two other boys followed him.

"Great, he brought his fleas with him." Bee said sarcastically and the girls laughed.

Victor, Garfield, and a redheaded boy who looked similar to Richard tumbled in. "Joy, I can scarcely wait; the whole party's here." Raven rolled her eyes.

How did you like that? That chapter was "Detention With Destiny part ONE" there will be a part two, maybe even three, but if there was a three the detention would be half the chapter.

-Reviews-

Anwen: You're British? I didn't know that; I'm California. In like San Francisco or around that area. Trust me, were not like those valley girls, that's like Los Angeles which is more than eight hours away. It's REALLY far. 'Bitches' is what you call preppy British girls? Heh, either way suits me!

Illegally Blonde: You'll update "I Have My Eye On You"? SWEET! Thank-you! Thank-you! Thank-you! Thank-you! Thank-you! Thank-you! Thank-you! Thank-you!

Rupertlover90: Yeah cliffys are STUPID. S-T-U-P-I-D! But for a chapter that was updated fast, how was it?

starxrobin: Yup my humor and comedy is one hundred percent authentic originality! They fight was good? Yup one of my favorite songs is "girl fight" with Brooke Valentine, Big Boi, and Lil John. Did I forget to mention that?

Melody Of Melodies: Yup "Grass-ass" is mine by law copyright-oops-that didn't sound right. But thankx!

PREPPYGOTHFREAK101: Yes thank you so much! Ciara does rock hardcore, especially "1,2 step", "Goodies", "Oh", and "Lose Control".

Salorgirl: Aww, you're nice.

Strodgfgf: Okay I updated!

Sailor Attitude: Yup I love your penname, too! Thanks! I didn't think my chapter would be "sososo" good!

Seethet: Oh, please, you loser. Go somewhere! No one likes you, you get on everyone's fucking nerves, flaming stories for hell of it, you must be thinking: 'tee, hee, hee! I'm so cool!' DORK!

Well that's all of my reviews and peace-out, A-town down!

Thank-you and oh yeah "End III" airs today I can't wait!

LOV'IN IT,

LILY

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P.S.-Do you not get my penname? Well my favorite all-time author besides Jackalobe's name is Waterlily721. She's on my fav author/story list for "I Want You To Want me" most people have read her story it's quite popular, if not, the best thing I ever read here.