Here is a follow up to my first chapter. It's based off of "Rat Saw God". I'll probably update it soon so I can add some more. Thank you to all who reviewed! I appreciate it SOOO much!
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Neptune Madness
Sometimes it hits me. Right in the face. I can't escape my past. Abel Koontz, Clarence Weidman, and Logan Echolls all I hoped to leave behind. But it looks like that will never happen.
Abel Koontz, he asked me to find his missing daughter Amelia. But when I did she didn't have a pulse. So I lied to him told him his daughter Amelia was happy and on her way. Truth is she was dead and in an ice machine at a cheap motel.
And Clarence and I seem to have formed an odd alliance. Him and me looked for Amelia's killer together. Maybe it was dangling her old boyfriend out a window but it doesn't seem like he's lost a beat, except when it comes to me.
Logan is once again accused of killing Felix. But he was let out on bail. My good pal Weevil didn't find this amusing and set his house on fire with the PCHers. Logan bought Weevil's house and is evicting him and his grandmother. But the posh person he is can't live there. Logan is now living with Duncan my boyfriend his best friend. If I had a warning I wouldn't have laid on top of him. But when I saw it was him a feeling went through me, do I miss him?
My dad lost the election to Don Lamb. Disappointing, but we'll get them next time. But threw it all, I just kept thinking about Wallace. I needed him. But each time I realized more and more that I was a bad friend. Did he feel like this when he needed her, this desperate, sad and alone? I've lost both of my best friends. What's wrong with me?
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Now please review! Criticism is welcome, leaves room for my improvement! I'll try and make the next one longer.