Hurky: We're near the end, and I know you guys want to read the rest of the story, so we'll just skip the part where me and Sora ramble on and head straight to the story!

Sora: Right on!

Hurky: And I realized that this is the revised edition of Chapter 10. I forgot to add a part and add a little more description...


"You turned my friends into starfish?" cried Sora angrily, craving for vengance. "You'll pay for that!"

He jabbed Ansem with the pointy ends of the trident, but somehow, it only pricked him a tiny bit.

"You think a tiny little trident can kill me?" asked Ansem. "Think again!"

Suddenly, he began to grow larger in size, until he was 20 times bigger than a whale. He cackled in an evil laughter once he was done growing.

"I AM WAY TOO POWERFUL FOR THAT!" yelled Ansem in a booming voice.

"If you're so powerful," said Sora. "Why did you need my mother's trident in the first place?"

"Because I could have become a lot more powerful..." explained Ansem. "With the trident, I would have been invincible..."

"You make absolutely no sense." said Sora.

Ansem lifted up one of his tentacles and slammed it to the ocean floor, hoping to crush Sora, but he was too fast and darted away.

"Why you little-" grunted Ansem.

"Over here!" teased Sora from behind Ansem.

Ansem turned around and once again lifted up a tentacle to smash Sora, but he swam away really fast. They did this repeatedly for ten minutes, but then Ansem thought of another way to anihilate Sora. By using his powers. He held out a hand and zapped out a powerful beam from it. Sora managed to get away from that one. Ansem shot another beam at Sora, but Sora swam away from its direction.

"Don't you think you should have fought this on land?" asked Sora. "Because it's easy for me to-UGH!"

Ansem shot another beam while Sora was talking and this time, it hit him, and he flew backwards until he hit a rocky wall with his back, and it hurt him, with scratches on his back and the back of his tail. It had also knocked the wind out of Sora. (Well, it wasn't really wind, since he was underwater, but you know that Sora lost his breath when he hit the wall). After that, Sora began to fall to the ocean floor, but Ansem caught him and held him from the waist down.

"Who's the powerful one now, Sora?" asked Ansem as he squeezed Sora and cutting off his circulation and his breathing.

"AHHHHH!" screamed Sora from so much pain.

Suddenly, out of nowhere, a brown haired mermaid came along, swam up to Ansem, and whacked his face with her tail.

"Let..." said the mermaid as she tail slapped Ansem. "My son...GO!"

"ACK!" yelled Ansem and he let go of Sora, who coughed like crazy.

"Mom!" called Sora.

"Sora, keep fighting, I'll distract him!" said Sora's mother. "Turn your friends back to normal!"

"How do I do that?" called Sora to his mother.

"Point the trident at the starfish and give it a good wave!" directed the queen as Ansem lifted his tentacles and tried to smash her and she dodged, like Sora had done.

Sora waved the trident over the two starfish, and they magically turned into Riku, as a merman, and Kairi, as a human, unable to breathe.

"NICE!" said Riku. "I'm back!"

"Riku, get Kairi back to shore!" said Sora. "And quick! She doesn't have much time under here!"

Riku grabbed Kairi and swam off with her, until he reached the surface and splashed up.

"Kairi, you OK?" asked Riku.

"cough-I-cough cough-I think so-cough cough." said Kairi as she coughed up the water.

"Good." said Riku. "Let's get back to shore!"

Meanwhile, Ansem had finally whacked Sora mother with his huge tentacles and she passed out.

"What are you going to do without your mommy fighting for you, Sora?" asked Ansem smugly.

Sora turned to his mother, who was lying on the ocean floor, knocked out. That's when he got MAD.

"Grr...THIS!" said Sora as he swam up to Ansem's face, and poked Ansem in the eye with the trident.

"AAGGGHHHH!" wailed Ansem as he grabbed his eye and he grew smaller and smaller, until he was his normal size.

"You have," said Sora as he fumed with anger. "Exactly one minute, to get out of here, never to return of be seen again..."

Ansem was silent.

"GO!" yelled Sora.

"I will NEVER LEAVE!" said Ansem.

"Then you give me no choice." said Sora.

He used the trident and randomly turned Ansem into a tiny goldfish.

"But to turn you into a goldfish." said Sora triumphantly with a grin on his face.

Ansem was about to swim off when suddenly, a jellyfish came by and ate Ansem up.

Back at the shore, Kairi walked onto the shore from the water and Riku dragged himself up, panting from swimming really fast and feeling really weak from carrying Kairi with him.

"Riku! Kairi!" called a voice.

Riku and Kairi looked up to find Namine, running up to them.

Namine continued to run, until she got to Riku and Kairi. She kneeled down to Riku's level, since he was a merman and couldn't stand up anymore.

"Are you guys OK?" asked Namine.

"Yeah." panted Riku. "Ansem turned Kairi into a mermaid and then both of us into starfish, but we're okay. Sora turned us back to our true forms.

"Well, that's a relief." sighed Namine, feeling a little less tense. "But what about Sora?"

"Last time we saw him, he was about to fight Ansem. His mother was distracting him." said Kairi.

"Who?" asked Namine.

"Ansem!" said Riku.

Kairi stood up and sighed worriedly. "I guess the only thing we can do is hope for the best." she said.

Kairi and Namine stood there and Riku sat there in silence...

Back in the sea, Sora watched the jellyfish swim away with Ansem, the tiny goldfish in its stomach. He smiled.

"Nice going, Sora." said a voice.

Sora turned around and saw his mother, off the ocean floor and up to him, smiling at him.

"You saw?" asked Sora.

The queen nodded. "I saw the entire thing." she said. "Right there, you proved to me that...you're not my little guppy anymore."

Sora stared at his mother, but then pouted. "I'm not a guppy!" he said.

"I know that." said Sora's mother. "Now that you defeated Ansem by yourself."

"Hey, you helped me." said Sora.

Sora's mother laughed. "I know, but you did most of the battling." she said.

The two were silent, until Sora put his hands on the sides of his tail and felt a sharp pain.

"OW!" he said.

"What's the matter?" asked Sora's mother worriedly.

"Something's hurting me..." said Sora as he looked at his tail to examine what was hurting him. Finally, where he had his hand on the right side of his tail, blood was gushing out. "How did I...?"

"You must have scratched yourself when you were pinned to the wall." said Sora's mother seriously as she examined her son's tail. Finally, she saw a gash on it.

Sora then felt woozy and pained as he passed out from the loss of too much blood.

"I better get you to shore before the sharks find us..." said Sora's mother as she picked up her unconscious son and frantically swam away as fast as she could...


Hurky: Sorry guys, but I have to end it here for today!

Readers: Awww...

Hurky: But when my other stories are updated, I shall give you the last chapter!

Readers: YAY! (applauding)

Sora: Finally! You can stop making me be a merman!

Hurky: Keep at it and I'll write a Sora Pan, where you kidnap Kairi to Neverland and make you fly!

Sora: I like to fly...that would be awesome!

Hurky: Then I won't write it. Besides, I haven't seen Peter Pan in six or seven years, so I forgot what happens, anyway. But continue to have a nice Thanksgiving weekend!

Sora: I sure will...when I finish raiding your fridge for leftovers!

Hurky: You better not!

Riku: By the way, Sora ate the leftover cranberry sauce!

Hurky: YOU MONSTER!

Sora: Serves you right for eating all the pumpkin pie!

Hurky: That's because you made me put on a turkey suit!

Jal: You're still Hurky the Turky, even without the suit!

Alexa: Because your name rhymes with turkey!

Readers: LOL!