To my faithful reviewers whom I can control with the click of the update button : Yes, I am fully aware it took me so gosh-darn long to review! I just started high school(yes, I am a freshy—if any of you mock me, I will delete this story before you can say fresh meat) and I have been so busy it is crazy! I have swim team and a club meeting every week, so no, I haven't had time to update, let alone sleep. Also, I have had a serious case of writers' block.
But, I am updating now because I have been afraid to go outside for fear of being stabbed to death with a butter knife or evil squirrels, or your favorite weapon of choice. So, I need to eliminate the fear from my chest and update this VERY short(for that I am undyingly sorry) chapter that took me over three weeks to write, so be grateful minions!
Thanks so much to:
That-girl-who-likes-dolphins: you are the people who make me scared to go out at night, or into the pool for fear of the scene from Gothika, where Halle Berry is hiding from the guards at the asylum and the dead chick pops up in front of her…night-terrors I tell ya…
Pigsonthewings: yes, I gotyour review, or else I wouldn't be writing this… but, please use periods 'cause it is hard to understand what your are rambling about…
Wiccan-wiser: I can't tell you what happens, but I can tell you SOMEBODY DOES DIE, and it is your job to figure out who, since I can't tell the entire world, even though it is painfully obvious, to me, anyway…
Uh.yeah: Thanks! That is what I was going for…them being grown up and all…one of my friends told me that it was cheesy! CHEESY! I hope you don't feel that way…
EasyTiger: yum, cookies…chocolate chip? Yum…
And all the rest of you who are hooked and loved my story…you are the people who made me scared at night for fear of rocks being thrown
And, now, without further ado,
Chapter three:
Jess stepped out of the bathroomand put her hand on the door frame seductively. She was wearing a red sheer tunic that cut off just at the upper thigh. Nothing else.
I dropped the fork I had at my lips.
"Hey, this isreally hot(pun very much intended). Do you want to help me take it off?"
"I- ahh -I'd be happy to."
My, ahem, 'happiness'… bulged through my pants a little.
Jess walked over to the bed and sprawled out. She blew me a kiss.
I walked over to her, but tripped over my chair. The tips of her lips went up slightly. As I straightened it, I kept my eyes on her. I walked over to the bed and crawled over to her. She lifted her arms and I pulled the sexy lingerie up over her head and threw it somewhere. Then I kissed her hand. She fell backwards and I rolled on top of her.
As I kissed her hard on the mouth, I tasted something coppery. I ripped my lips from her mouth and touched my finger tipto my bottom lip. It was dark red and shiny.
I looked up at Jess worriedly and saw with terror that blood was filling her mouth. She chocked and spit and sputtered, but it kept coming.
She was drowning and there was nothing I could do to help her.
"Jess! Oh god, Jess!"
The last thing I saw before my eyes flew open and I rushed to the bathroom to throw-up my dinner was her eyes. It was the look in them that told me that I hadn't just been dreaming.
Wow, that was really short. I mean, I knowI warned you and all, but still. But, it was alot better thatI expected. The first draft I wrote was bad. Really bad. So bad, in fact,I wanted to spit on it. That bad, I swear. You all would have mobbed me on the street for making you wait that long for such a peice of crap. But, this one was way better.
So, please review. I love those reviews. I could just eat them all up. Yum Yum. Ok,I am just a kid, and even I know that sounded wrong. But, anyway, review, and I will try to have a good, long chapter out ASAP.
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