Chp.2 Help+
Hi people I'm back wit a brand new chp. srry it took soo long stupid computer it h8's me i know it does it wont let me make the star thingy's! soo i'll just keep the actions out 4 a while srry the other was soo tiny it was a chaplet tee hee.. but anyways heres the story...
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"Let me go!" yumi shouted as she kicked him as hard as she could "your going to have to try harder than that child" X.A.N.A exclaimed as yumi kicked him again and again "fisty little one aren't we?"he chuckled as yumi kicked with the force she had left "OW! DAMN WENCH!" X.A.N.A screamed as he dropped yumi yes...yumi started running but tripped on rock and fell to the ground and then everything went black.
+BACK IN THE REAL WORLD+
Ulrich,Odd,Jeremy were waiting for yumi for about ten minutes "Where is she?" Ulrich questioned as he glanced at his watch "maybe she's sick" Odd suggested "maybe, Ulrich why don't you call her" Jeremy stated "As he calls her can we get lunch?" Odd questioned rubbing his his grumbling stomach "yes Odd" Jeremy smiled "what the human garbage can hungry already?" Ulrich joked "hey--" Odd started "ssssssshhhhh" Ulrich said as the phone rang "Hello Mrs.Ishyama this is Ulrich" "I'm fine thanks I was wondering did yumi leave for school yet" "Huh! she left 12 minutes ago?" "huh no nothing's wrong just wondering thanks bye" Ulrich said as he hung up the phone "12 minutes ago shouldn't she have been here by now" Odd questioned "maybe you got something there genius" Ulrich snapped "hmmmmmmmmm... where could she be?" Jeremy questioned "Well if we knew that we wouldn't be here now would we?" Ulrich questioned sarcastically "sorry" jeremy said his head bowed "geez Ulrich don't be soo mean!" Odd said 1/2 shouting when he noticed Ulrich was crying "where is she?" Ulrich questioned teary eyed "ohh you big wuss"Odd exclaimed "Odd shut up"Jeremy said sitting by Ulrich "Its ok Ulrich we'll get her back"
+BACK THE VIRTUAL WORLD+
yumi woke up to a long white dress and a seemingly nice bed Wh... WHERE AM I! yumi wondered as she looked over into the corner where X.A.N.A was sleeping soundly "nows my chance" she whispered as she slowly moved the blankets off of her and glanced at X.A.N.A Still sleeping... good she sighed god I hope he dies in his sleep... yumi rolled off the bed X.A.N.A seemed to twitch "shhhhhhhhh... don't wake up don't wake up" yumi whispered as she moved off the bed and on to the floor ok i'm safe (or so she thought) as she tip-toed towards the door all of a sudden an alarm sounded What in the hell? just then X.A.N.A appeared "trying to escape huh?" X.A.N.A said as he grabbed yumi "let me go you jerk!" yumi shouted "I give you a home a nice dress and a chance to rule this world and this is how you pay me back" X.A.N.A screamed grabbing her neck "p..p...please l...et me go!" yumi cried He...He... could kill me right...now
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Should i stop here or should i keep going? hmmmmmmmmmmmm...- just joking ummmmm... well if u want me to put any thing else in the story just tell me - peace out Cya pplz.