I've gotten reviews and everyones telling me to start writing longer well fine if thats what you want! I'll try...
(Ok its a new day cause as you know the group needs their beauty sleep)
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Chp.4 WHAT?
"Odd you really think she could be in there?" Ulrich asked looking at Odd whom nodded "YOUR SUCH A MORON!" Odd looked down to the floor "geez, Ulrich you don't have to be such an ass about this?" Jeremy said giving Ulrich a dirty look which surpised Ulrich that was the first time he'd heard Jeremy curse at him let alone anyone when did he grow a spine? "Don't fucking call me an ass you stupid insignificant dickwad" "Stop! Don't fight" Odd said as he got in the middle of the two, both of them just stared dumbfoundedly at him then Odd just smiled and Jeremy turned back to the computer and Ulrich sat back down "Aeilita you there?" Jeremy asked as the pink haired girl appered on the screen "Yes Jeremy I'm here" She smiled well... I'm going out on a limb here but maybe... "have you felt X.A.N.A at all lately?" Jeremy asked Ulrich looked at him quite strangely "Well I did feel his presence for a couple of minutes but I wasn't able to locate him" Ulrich suddenly rose and wlked towards the computer "You did? When?" he said his head bowed "Well I believe it was about yesterday in the early morning" "Why didn't you tell me sooner Aeilita!" Jeremy blurted out "Well... ummmm..." she blushed she felt so stupid how could she not have told him! "WHY NOT!" Ulrich cried out Aeilita suddenly got terrifed "Ulrich..."Jeremy began "don't yell at her!" "Ummmm... where's yumi?" Aeilita quesioned as she looked around the room "she, dissapered" Odd said as he joined the two by the computer "What? What do you mean?" Aeilita said surprised "He means she's gone we can't find her" Jeremy said looking down "DAMMIT WHERE CAN SHE BE!" Ulrich screamed
--Virtual World--
Ummmm...Ok then yumi was now giving X.A.N.A a strange look "I give you all of this! The palace, the dress, the Virtual world, I give you power,everthing I own, yet you still want that...that little human" yumi just continued to look at him speechless "Thats it I'm fed up with this if you don't love me then I will make you love me" he shouted as he left the room and locked the door Dammit! yumi was now the scaredest she'd ever been in her life What does he want from me! she began to kick the walls as hard as she could it was all she could do to relieve herself of the pain "THAT ASSHOLE!" she suddenly screamed out "Why in the hell did he choose me! Why not Sissy!" (heh, little wench would deserve it lol) yumi was now crying Ulrich, Odd, Jeremy, Aeilita thats it Aeilita lives in the Virtual world... but how do I communicate with her I can't read minds I'm not pshycic or any thing... yumi cuddled up in a corner How am I gonna get in contact with her? yumi pondered this for the rest of the day until she came to her conclusion: There was no way, no way for her to be free, no way for her to go home and see her family, her friends, god dammit! Dammit all! yumi cried herself to sleep that night...
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Hey sorry if its not long enough, I tried -.-' well yea just tell me anything else you'd like me to improve