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"This is bad, she doesn't feed, 3 more days of this and she'll die."
His eyes diverted from the cup of congealed blood which stood on the table, untouched for days, to Athrielle, sitting at the corner of her bed with her knees up to her face.
"I have to bring her to the castle, it's risky in this condition but I have no choice."
He thought to himself.
"When night falls we are leaving here."
She made no movement. He sighed.
When night fell, he urged her to go out with him, when she didn't budge; he simply carried her and leapt off the balcony with her bow around his shoulder.
"Where are you taking me?"
"To my dwellings, where your lord is but I warn you, there are vampires there. With me you will come to no harm but do not venture alone, you will regret."
They traveled deep inside Geffen dungeon; he put her down and stood in front of a stone.
"Adias Aguriante."
The stone rolled from its position and they entered, traveling for some other distance, they reached a castle.
Hisagi walked in front, gripping her wrist tightly, a sign that she was his and no one was to touch her. A vampire at the corner started approaching them, Hisagi let a low growl escape from his throat, raising one side of his lip high enough to show his tooth, the vampire backed off.
The castle was large with many rooms; the walls were made of granite and had big Victorian windows which were boarded up, making it gloomy.
He took her up a flight of stairs and pushed her into a room.
"If anyone here tries anything, mention my name to them."
She walked to a bowl of water at the side of her room, ever since she became a vampire she hadn't seen her reflection, it was certainly not her intention now. Her mouth parted but was quickly covered by his hand.
"Don't you dare scream here or anywhere else, a scream of a vampire is an attractive noise, anyone who hears it will come with no objections. That includes other vampires."
He left the room. She sat on her enormous bed and drew her knees up to her face again, he came back in and closed his eyes for a minute, it jostled his memory. Of when he was alive, a memory that had locked itself in his mind for a hundred and twenty years and had forced himself to forget. He tugged on her wrist and pulled her downstairs, to the basement. He was prepared for what might happen; he wasn't prepared for the intensity of it.
The basement was where the prisoners, mostly girls, were kept, waiting to be "played with", which meant tortured and raped, or eaten. The lucky ones were eaten, the prettier girls were repeatedly "played" with in the cruelest of manners. She was brought to a room where a girl was chained to a wall, her shirt torn so low she was inches away from throwing away all her modesty. Hisagi grabbed her hair and pulled her face towards Athrielle.
"Eat her."
"No."
"Damn, you made me do this. I didn't want to but it looks like you have to see her bleed before you feed."
He took a sharp knife from the table and cut a red line on the girl's shoulder, the girl screamed in pain. Athrielle went crazy, her vampire instincts acted up but was held down by her elven side, she was having a war against herself. He was prepared for it dodging every attack that was launched at him; he got her out of the room. She was deranged; obsessed with killing him, had he not been a high level vampire he would suffer injuries.
The worst thing happened, another vampire went into the room they were in, seeing the girl chained to the wall he started "playing" with her. The girl was new and virgin; her screams rattled the walls driving Athrielle to her limits. Her whole eyes turned blood red, her speed quickened, she became more vicious. Managing to injure him.
He saw no choice, possessing her he lead her upstairs, along with another fresh girl. The girl was dumped to one side and the door locked, he released the spell. Her eyes turn black as she became more deranged from lack of blood and the battle within herself plus the containment of the spell. Charging at him she tried to scratch him, dodging in a big room was easier than dodging in a narrow corridor so he managed.
As she lunged at him, he turned slightly and guided her head towards his own neck, wincing as her teeth sank in and took his blood. She calmed down at the taste; her vampire side had taken over.
He was beginning to feel weak, she was taking a lot of his blood and at this rate he would be sucked dry. He grabbed the nearby girl and passed her to Athrielle who started feeding on her instead; Hisagi watched her for a minute then fainted.
When he came to, he was on Athrielle's bed. She had somehow carried him there when she finished feeding. Her eyes were crystal emerald green again, then it flashed to him. The memory and what his grandmother had said years ago.
It's just a legend but it's said that for every one who feels love and died tragically, separated from their partners, an elf is born. The elf will not know but its waiting for its lover's death so they can be together. If the lover is evil and goes to hell the elf will eventually lose its mind and turn evil. If the lover is good and dies, they will be reunited and live happily.
"Sachii, will you marry me?"
"Well hmm…"
"That's a yes?"
"No."
"Ok…guess it's too early."
"No I will not, not marry you."
"That's a yes?"
"OF COURSE…haha."
"SACHII!"
A sword stabbed Sachii in the heart; Hisagi ran to her but the sword came for him too.
"YOU BASTARD! I WILL KILL YOU!"
"Try"
Blacked out.
Hisagi came to, a man hovered above him.
"Hisagi is it? Well I'm Dracula, I converted you. You are a vampire now; I shall train you as my prized pupil if you swear devotion to me."
"I will, but I have one mission to complete."
He slaughtered and tortured the murderers brutally; the memories were then locked up and never used again, he foced himself to forget.
The memory passed, a flashback that he had sworn never to bring out came back, this girl. This elf, which he caused so much pain to. She is, or was, Sachii…
Done…pls R&R
Ja Ne