Hey everyone this is my first fic so don't be hard on me. Thanks.
Angels at Dawn
Chapter 1
Draco Malfoy had finally managed to escape the prison that the Malfoy Manor offered to him. He walked toward the forest that was behind the manor also part of the vast amount of land owned by his father. He directed himself to his special place. He had found it many years ago and in that same place he had found love.
He got there without much difficulty he had come here dozens of time before. The place was a majestic sigh. There was a huge lake in front of it and every time he would just be entranced by its beauty. The sun would soon set and before it left the display of colors was amazing. Draco had learned to appreciate such simple things with her.
Flashback
Seven year old Draco ran crying out of his house towards the forest while listening to his father yelling after him. He ran and ran without looking back and not caring where his feet where taking him. Soon he came upon a clearing the perfect spot and he saw her.
She was a girl around his same a age maybe younger and had long black her and electric blue eyes she looked pretty common through his watery eyes until he saw something that amazed him.
She had wings. They were pearly white and had blue designs on them. Not intricate but simple designs that ran across her feathers adding more marvel to the already breathtaking sight. Suddenly hope called his name and Draco ran towards his angel and to his amazement she hugged back.
Present
As he stood there remembering that first encounter he heard her land. She was barefoot as always (not because she didn't have money but because she liked being barefoot) wearing some dark blue jeans and a powder blue color tank top. She had changed a lot since their first encounter. She had grown more she had her feminine curves and her hair had grown darker almost to a midnight black she was still shorter than Draco. He was a towering 6' while she was only 5' 3" but she as he recalled was as beautiful as always.
"Draco I must leave" she said with a tired voice
"Why? You have only been back for a couple of days and now you leave again" he was shattered and desperate. He needed her to breathe his hear was beating thanks to her and now she was leaving him with no explanation.
"I didn't ask for it but I promise that we will meet again soon"
She began to cry he could see the tears pouring down those eyes that had offered him comfort in the time of need and for the first time he saw something that his own selfishness had not allowed him to see for many years her eyes also held pain and the horrors of her life.
"We'll see each other very soon I promise" she repeated as if knowing something he didn't but he let it go.
"Can I at least know you're name?" he asked as if a way of stalling and having her a little while longer and now moving forward to hug her. She didn't push him back and he was glad for this.
"In all these years Draco you haven't had that need but if you must know my name is Sophia" she laughed and that was music to his ears.
She gave him a small kiss in the cheek and took off not wanting to stay any longer. Draco watched as she flew in to the horizon and cursed him self for not saying what he wanted:
"I love you Sophia"
This is the end I don't know what else to do what do you think? Please review flames are not welcomed but I'll take tem and also I would love constructive criticism. Thanx.
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