The adventures of… OUTLAWSTAR!

(Fan fiction rated PG for no bad language and little violence)

BY : kittyfo 2001

I wrote this back when I was in midleschool! I'm surprised at how good I used to be at writing.. that I wrote this when I was 13 … I'm not sure if its been done already this was one of my first fanficts so its probably still good! I'd actaully watched the show so I knew how to write it.

(Fan Fiction rated PG for no bad language and little violence….)

Thanx for al the nice reviews! XDD

Chapter 3:unlikely rescuer

Gene Starwind flinched and struggled to stand. He wasn't hurt badly, He'd had worst. He wasn't going to give up, He was an outlaw. Even though he had only seven castors and that was it. He'd run out quickly and then what. Gene wasn't good at thinking up plans That was Jim's job. He found himself wishing he'd let Jim come along. He would just have to rough it like always. He loaded a castor into the special gun and aimed. He fired seconds later and waited.

The castor hit it in the chest but when the smoke cleared The creature was nearly bruised. Gene swallowed, The castors weren't going to phase it no mater what. Gene smiled ,and fired another. The creature completely dodged it and came stampeding towards Gene. The tusks jabbed him in the ribs and cracked them. Gene fell back and stayed there.

He felt like giving up ,But then A voice told him "no". It was his father, He could recognize it. "Gene ,You're an Outlaw you can do this." His father encouraged him. Gene wasn't sure of his own sanity. Gene shook off the newly fallen snow. He glanced around, no signs of Aisha or Suzuka. He found his heat goggles and surveyed the whole area. Nothing ,not even a little heat sources.

Then he found the ground shaking again. The Creature was heading towards him. He threw off the goggles and got to his feet. The creature was huge he realized , by the heat sensory goggles calculations 2 thousand meters high. It had brown fur and looked like an Elephant. One huge blue eye stared at Gene making him uneasy. Jim would have given him a full report if he was here. Jim was safe for now, Melfina could take care of him.

Gene realized he couldn't move him right arm which would make it difficult to shoot. The tusks had cut his arm and it was bleeding. The Creature was standing over him now Gene fired a round of five castors. They bounced off the creatures hide and fell into the snow. Gene heard clicks telling him he was out of bullets. He was done now, He hoped Jim & Melfina could forgive him. Suddenly He heard a voice, Not like the first voice it seemed closer. It also sounded Child-like. "Gene! Gene Are you okay?" Jim called from the top of the hill. He had on his normal clothes and his hair was a mess.. His head was still bandaged and so were his hands.

"Jim, you idiot …I told you to stay! "Gene yelled, he saw Jim smirk. "Little brothers don't always listen to their siblings." He informed Gene. Gene frowned, The creature turned and spotted Jim. It charged him ,throwing around its tusks. Jim dodged it, pulled out his lap top and scanned the creature. Gene smirked ,typical Jim. "It's called a Mammolopes, this is a young male." Jim told Gene through a special earring on Gene's ear. Jim picked up a huge gun ,way too large for him to manage ,and fired. "regular castors don't work," Jim commented and sat back down, " a number 44 will…"Jim smirked. Jim pulled out a bullet and fired. The castor flew over the creature and stopped over the back. He missed! Gene thought. Suddenly the bullet exploded on the creatures back.

The creature roared and fell. "YEAH! I GOT HIM!" Jim's voice screamed over the Mike so loud it broke Gene's eardrum. "Hey not so loud!" Gene said. Jim sounded embarrassed as he apologized. Suddenly the Mammolopes stirred and rose, Jim gasped. "That was suppose to destroy it…"Jim's voice seemed to reflect the fact that he was scared now. Jim frantically loaded it again ,but he didn't get a chance to aim. The tusks plowed Jim it the wall and he screamed. Gene felt terror took over him, Jim wouldn't live. But he couldn't move. Gene cursed and struggled to sit up. Suddenly Jim's gun fired and The Mammolopes screamed in agony. It fell on top off Jim and died. Gene struggled to his feet for the third time, and limped over to the pile of dead beast.

"Jim! Jim! Answer me!" He shouted, this was followed by an echo "Jim…Jim…"."Anki…" Jim's voice whispered, too soft to have an echo. Jim's small hand appeared near the creatures tusks. Gene grabbed it and gently pulled Jim out. Jim was shaking a little and very badly bruised. "I got it…Gene…I got it…"Jim said softly. Gene nodded, blinking back the tears. Jim's eyes were barely open and brimmed with tears ,but he managed a lopsided smile. Oh Jim…Gene thought. Gene noticed Jim staring at him, surprised. Gene felt moisture go down his cheek, I'm crying too! He realized. That's the last thing Jim needs now! Gene chided himself. He tried to wipe them away, but he was crying too much.

Jim's head sank into Gene's lap and he coughed. Gene stroked Jim's hair lightly, "Thanks for saving my butt." He said. Jim laughed and then shuttered. He became suddenly still, no longer breathing. Gene panicked and lifted Jim's head. It seemed so relaxed and peaceful. Gene eyes flooded with tears and he couldn't see. Jim had always been right beside him, telling him to be more careful. Who would do that now? He wondered. "Jim! Gene! Aisha! Suzuka ! Where is everyone!" Melfina's voice called. He couldn't let 'Mel' see him cry. "Over here Melfina!" A familiar scratchy voice called.

Aisha pooped out of the snow. Aisha whirled around and smiled happily. Aisha saw Gene and then noticed Jim. Her face fell, and she sniffed. Gene was sure he saw a tear in Aisha's blue eyes before she turned away. Gene smiled she was embarrassed, C'tarl C'tarl's probably weren't supposed to cry he figured. Suzuka came walking up with reddened cheeks. "I still need some training." She said. She noticed Jim lying still and walked over. She looked at Gene and turned Jim around. She put her ear to Jim's still chest and listened ,then looked him over. "He is all right…Just a few broken bones… he just needs to rest…you can stop crying." She told Gene.

Melfina appeared over the valley and stopped. "OH NO!" She cried running to Gene. Gene smiled and got ready for Melfina to throw her arms around him. Instead she took Jim into her arms and cradled him. "He's fine…"Suzuka told her. Melfina looked up and beamed. "I knew that already…"Gene claimed wiping his eyes, Melfina smiled knowingly. She stood with Jim still in her arms and walked towards the ship. Gene frowned, Jim took her away from me! He whined.

Suzuka was standing now, and saw the creature. "Did you do this Gene?" she asked. Gene shook his head and told here everything that happened. "You were lucky!" Aisha's voice chimed in after he was finishedYou 'll always have Jim around to save you." She proclaimed. Gene glared at her. She was annoying sometimes, but having a C'tarl C'tarl was a good thing. I think… Suzuka got up to and Shafted her sword then she turned and left.

Gene got up and grabbed his gun ,then he ran to catch up with Melfina and Jim. He was almost there when he collapsed, He was still hurt. "Hey ! GENE ! Is he okay?" Jim's voice came out off the blur. He saw Melfina was peering over him, looking worried. Jim asleep. "I'm fine I just… Got winded…"Gene said in a manly way. Melfina smiled at him while she stood up straight. Gene moaned and went to sleep after seeing that.

To Be continued…

Bwahaaaa!

(Gene's voice)

"All right!

Finally we get off of this stupid Planet …

Now that everyone's okay…

Were going to get Those MacDougle brothers…

They wrecked my ship!

And nearly killed my partner!

Were gonna take you down !

Next time on OUTLAW STAR…

Chapter 4: Pay back!…Better get ready!"

(Fan Fiction rated PG for no bad language and little violence….)