Back at Sentinel Three Jim and Gene walked from the café. Aisha and Suzuka were off doing heck knew what. Melfina had joined them. She forced them to not drink despite Jim and Gene's profanity. "Clyde and Iris were really glad to see us." Jim commented remembering the four servings of pie he ate. Gene smiled as he remembered how Iris hugged him. HE smiled smugly. Jim whacked Gene " Slime ball…"He yelled. Gene grabbed Jim and Held his head in a head lock. Melfina laughed. "GENE! Stop it…Gene!" Jim gasped. Gene laughed evilly. Jim began to punch Gene which had no effect on him.
Suddenly a Man in a trench coat came up. "Excuse me… Are one of you Jim hawking?' A man asked. Jim looked up from Gene's grip, "That's me!" He gasped. Gene let him go and glared at the man. Jim nearly fell down. "Why do you want Jim?" Gene asked. He didn't like this.
The man was sneering and had brown hair. His trench coat was a dark brown and His pants were tattered. "You still look like your mother…Oh James." The man then threw his arms around a very surprised Jim. Melfina looked wordlessly at Gene. He didn't get this clown. Jim frowned thinking. Jim glanced at him for a minute then His eyes widen. A hopeful smile appeared "Daddy…You came back…"He yelled Hugging him back.
The man now known as Jim's father, held Jim a moment longer before standing to look at Gene. He made eye contact. Gene was confused. Jim stood by him beaming.
"Aren't you going to tell me who he is ?" He asked Jim.
THE END…
(Gene's voice.)
"Well…this is new…
Jim's 'bum of a father' has returned…
He wants Jim to come back with him…
And Jim is torn between me and his dad…
Could this be goodbye?
And what's with that new ship…OH NO…
Jim being held for ransom
Next time on OUTLAW STAR…The Father returns
Coming soon…
(The Outlaw Star NEW ADVENTURES #2)
Unfortunately that's ALL!
I do not have what happens after this written down or even the slightest idea...
Hopefully I'll decide to write a sequel. ;;;
But I'm not sure I can since it's been AGES since I watched OLS!
I could buy the DVDs ...I'm afraid it'd turn into yaoi! It was already teetering on shonen-ai.
REVIEW RESPONSES!
Macky:
THX! glad you liked chpt 1-2!
Micaz:
OO; hides
You'd inflict
violence on ME? Look holds up Jim SEE! He's fine! Don't
kill me!
Jim: blink
Yesh lay out the sugar plz TT;
Happy pappy
Thx! Well I'm sure you spelled words right at least...
I'll try to read your story...
