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A/N: I've slightly changed the first chapter, but just on grammatical error parts. Um…yea I think you could figure out where this setting is when you see it.
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Chapter 1- The New Guy:
"Hey did you see the new guy?"
"Yeah! He's so hot!"
"You know, I heard he just moved here from Japan, for an operation on his hand. I wonder what happened to it…"
"Maybe we could ask him later."
The new boy was just leaning against the wall in the hallway, listening to his earphones, not really caring about what other people said. His mind was all on Sana. He wondered how she was doing right now. Just thinking about what happened after he told her he was leaving sent shivers up his spine. How could I just leave her like that? She just recovered, who knows if it might start again. That was the first time I've ever saw her like that. He thought. No, slightly shaking his head, she said she was fine. Plus, I have my own problems to think about. He tried stopping himself from thinking of her but it didn't work.
Ding! Ding! Ding! The bell rang, forcing him out of his thoughts. He walked into the class and stood next to the teacher, Ms. Jones, waiting to be seated. It's a good thing that I actually listened in the English class back in Japan, he thought.
"Class! We have a newcomer. His name is Akito Hayama. He came from Japan," she informed the class. "Wow that's a long way from here. It's all the way across the world." She added.
Akito got annoyed by all her chitter-chatter. Just tell me where to sit! He commented in his head, though almost saying it out loud. School had already started in America, so everyone already had their assigned seats. He saw that there were several seats left. He hoped he'd get one farther to the back, preferably the corner spot.
"So, Akito, would you prefer front or back."
"Back." He responded without hesitation.
"Alright, why don't you sit in that corner spot over there next to Ches', the girl with the headphones. Ches! Take those off!" she yelled at the girl, who looked up, rolled her eyes, and did as the teacher said, looking quite annoyed at the teacher. He could tell that she wasn't even paying any attention to the new-student introduction. He trudged over to his seat and sat down. After he sat down, he noticed a hmph that sounded kind of like a chuckle coming from the seat next to him. He stared at her.
"Great. An extra person here to make this worthless, meaningless life of mine even worse." She complained.
He just stared at her, not understanding what she meant. Doesn't seem like she's a very welcoming person. Exact opposite of Sana. He secretly though in his head. Then commented, "Yea, but I'm the one stuck sitting next to a person like you."
"What'd you mean by that?"
"Hey don't you think their personalities are some what similar?"
"Yeah seriously!" Two girls whispered in the background.
"Class!" the teacher suddenly shouted, temporarily stopping their tension from rising, "I got to go run some errands. You behave and don't mess up the class, alright?" Then left after saying that. Great! Perfect time to leave! Akito thought.
Ches turned her head back to her victim and repeated, "What did you mean by that?" He didn't respond or even act like he was going to. The little patience that she had had run out, which made her burst. "WHAT DID YOU MEAN BY THAT?!"
Ches had her hands clenched to the collar of his shirt pulling him down to her level. "What you want to fight or kiss?"
She quickly threw him across the room. "JERK!" she shouted.
"I've been called worse. You're lucky I gave you the chance to react, I'm not going to be that nice next time you pull my face in front of yours," Akito noted, smiling in the evil way he always smiled.
"Pervert!"
"Yup."
She was kind of shocked by that answer. Who on earth would admit that they're a pervert? She wondered.
"Why are you admitting that you're a pervert? What you have some mental problems or something?"
".....I'm known to be the world's most perverted guy. So you better watch out," Hayama says while giving his evil grin.
"..........." She didn't know how to respond, then realized that she had just been tricked. Furious, she yelled at his retreating back. "Hey! That still doesn't answer my question!! Get back here!!" His leopard ears popped out. He smugly walked away with his wagging tail behind him.
A/N: Whoa! Tension building! What's going to happen next? Will a quarrel start during class? Why are their personalities so similar? What made the girl so offensive? Knowing Akito's personality, what will his reaction be?
I decided to make the chapters short. So I think the America section will probably have more than just 2 or 3 chapters. But I don't know how long, it depends on how much detail I want to put on the American part. Well you'll see…but there will be story in the present as well. Just not right now. I pretty much forgot the whole my daydream, cause it was a long time ago…so I might take a little longer to update. Sorry. Please review! I really want to know if people read this. And please give me comments. Flames are welcome. I need comments on how to improve my writing. 1/21/04
A/N: I decided to make chapter 1 longer that way I could just end the scene right there. Thank you Karen (karebearluv15) for your help!!!
SORRY for not updating any sooner!!! But if you know how much sleep I've been getting, you'll understand. SORRY!!! REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NEED IDEAS!!!!!!!!!!! Esp. from the ones that do write fanfics, you should probably have pretty good imaginations too. PLZ!!!! Help!!! I'm not sure of when Chapter 2 is going to be here, but I'm pretty sure it's not going to be as slow because I got my friend to help. Still IDEAS!!!!!!! Thanks! C ya!
Thank you reviewers –
-crystal- -yea… this is when Hayama first went back to America to get his operation done. So this is his first day of school.
Brie- Don't worry I'll make sure to email you… ^^
Animesweetdream (Mary)- I love what you have so far!!! I'll continue reviewing you! Oh yea…you're only 10!! Man you're seriously too young for that type of writing talent!!! Lol jk man you're good! I doubt I could even write stories at that time, or at least have it so well written like in grammar. Yea I live in Houston, TX.
i wUb X kOdOcHa- Yea. I guess I'll review more people's then to get more reviews ^^
frogfroggy5- I only wrote that fast because I had the idea all thought in my head before I started the Intro. And this chapter I got writers block plus I didn't have as much time. So that's why. Sry for not updating sooner!
GCLover- it's chapter one because the first part was just an intro. And this setting is when he went back to America which is before this.
karebearluv15- thank you!!!!!!!! C ya!
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