Well I got my first two flamers today and I would like to say fuck you and don't read my story if you don't like it and as fact for my disregard for the real world well last time I checked this site was called Fan Fiction. Net key word... FICTION so again fuck you and for the rest thank you for you time and please check out the review that Fangirls suck sent me and know that everything that I said in the first chapter with my parents really happened. Ok I'm done ranting thanks to those of you who reviewed and said nice things. Yes I got the Cheapy thing from the other story but I forgot to put a mention of the author I just thought it was really funny so I added it.
Lucy planed to come and visit the day before Ashley left to go to Stanford. She was all packed and ready but it still hurt to leave John and Talon. They decided not to tell Lucy about Ashley leaving because that could hurt their chances with Talon. He was 4 months now and could already sit up by himself which was really amazing for a baby of that age. Ashley thought he would be able to turn himself over soon.
"John she is going to be here soon" Ashley yelled to John from the first floor.
"Yeah, yeah and we are all ready" John said coming down the stairs with Talon.
Just as he did the door bell rang. Ashley went to answer it she smiled when she saw Lucy.
"Hi please come on in" Ashley greeted her pleasantly.
"Thank you" Lucy said walking into the house."this is a lovely home"
"Thanks we try" Ashley said honestly.
"So where is Talon right now?" she asked
"He is in the living room with John" Ashley replied
"I'd like to see him first and then the rest of the house if that is ok" she said
"Yeah sure no problem" Ashley said leading her into the living room.
"Hello John" Lucy said walking into the room.
"Hi" John replied he was laying on the floor playing with Talon on one of those baby mats.
"He loves doing that" Ashley said looking at the two
"Which one?" Lucy asked
"Both" she replied
Lucy smiled and Ashley showed her around the rest of the house. They stopped when they came to Talon's room.
"Wow it is amazing in here" Lucy said
"Yeah our friends and family did all this to surprise us while we were away" Ashley told her.
"So your families love the baby?" Lucy asked
"Yeah they welcomed him in as if he was truly our son not that John and I don't think he is it's just well... you know what I mean" Ashley rambled she was starting to get nervous.
"Well it seems like Talon is really happy here and I for one am glad after what happened to his mother" Lucy said
"Yes I was there do you have any idea why that man killed her?" Ashley asked
"Unfortunately I do" she said "you see the man that killed Talon's mother was his father's brother when the father went to jail Ms. Alexander wanted nothing to do with him or his family so he hired his brother to kill her and take the baby" Lucy explained.
"What is he in jail for?" Ashley asked
"Two counts of attempted murder and drug trafficking" she answered
"There is no way he can get out and try to get Talon back is there?" Ashley asked
"Well anything is possible that is why we want to get his parental right stripped as soon as possible but the soonest we can get it is 9 months from now" she replied sadly
"9 months are your sure there isn't anything sooner?" Ashley asked
"No I am sorry but if it makes you feel any better he and his family have no idea where Talon is so that is a very good sign" Lucy said.
She left a little while later Ashley didn't tell John what she had found out the only thing he knew was that they had to wait 9 months to adopt Talon.
A/N: ok sorry for the short chapter but I am to utterly upset to right anymore. I checked into this Fangirls Suck person and they haven't written any stories at all. This shit makes me really mad and it is stuff like this that makes it so I can't finish anything I start writing. It sucks that 2 people have to ruin anything. HELLO FICTION... I had a reviewer telling me Ashley is one of their favorite OC's and I am really glad because I love writing this story and I have 105 reviews so I must be doing something right to have 103 good ones if anyone knows who this Fangirls Suck give them a really nice message for me thanks and I'll have the next chapter up hopefully by tomorrow but if not it'll be a couple of days because I am going to visit my sister Katrina.