Your Defeat

by CryNeverWolf

Bakura has suffered greatly throughout his entire life. Now it's your turn to see his pain.Dark poem. A little bit violent. That's about it, though.

I wrote this poem a long time ago, as my first opinion of Bakura after I had learned all he went through as a child. It's a bit dark of a poem. It's also my first attempt at a rhyming poem. So if it sucks, just let me know.

Ihopeyoulikethispoembecauseiworkedreallyhardonitbutifitsucksthenohwell.

I cheat

I steal

I lie

I hate

Allow me to demonstrate

I'll let you feel

The pain I feel

Pain so sharp

You might think it unreal

Pain so intense

Life won't make sense

I'll let you

Be blinded by the darkness

Just like I have been

And will be

For the rest of eternity

But never fear

I'll be okay

Just long enough

To here you say

"Make it stop!"

"Make the pain go away!"

And as tears stream down your blood stained face

Your heart will begin a slower pace

Until it finally stops it's chronic beat

And as your body loses its heat

I will laugh insanely

To celebrate your defeat

Bakura

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So? Does it suck? Is it cool? Was it too violent? Was it okay, but you've seen better? Review and tell me what you think!

If you liked this somewhat and would like to see more poems like it that a much, much better than mine you should check out LeoOsakabakura'sstalker's poems! They rock!