Reiews:
To everyone- Sorry I put this off. I really didn't expect to add to it any time soon but I received review that made me think-why not. The writing style is different and to find the correct worlds take a little longer and a little more thought to this story. Hence, why it's has taken longer and why I have put it on the back burning. I plan on finishing all of my stories I just get new ideas and for some odd reason I need to act upon it. Sorry for the delay.
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Story:
Normally I would soak in a shower of lukewarm water during the summer. However, the morning was not a typical summer morning. My stomach ached, I wanted to hurl even though my belly was now a drain pouch. My muscles throb, my throat was hoarse, my tongue felt oddly textured and my mouth tasted as though I just ate some putrid produce. This was far from a normal summer morning. Instead I decided what I needed was to simmer in a nice mist of steaming water. The first second the water reached my exposed skin, it stung but almost instantly, it became an orgasmic bliss as it caressed my flesh, my muscles liquefied with the heated cascade of water that drizzled over by body. I leaned into the wall, allowing the water to have full access to my body. I gave a deep gratifying moan and realize that I did not care who wanted to shower, I was not leaving my beloved ray of water.
Growing up, I have come to grasp that no matter how bad you might be feeling you will feel a tiny bit better once you had a shower. Not as well as the school bus zipping by with out you, but still enough to make you feel somewhat human again. I felt my pain flow off me with the droplets of water, I felt my shoulder slip back into a relax form. I felt…I felt alive again.
"Are you going to be in here all day?" A low voice called from beyond the realm of the shower curtain. As to remind me, there is another world out there.
"Go away!" I yelled, hoping the impostor would leave me to my tranquil new world.
"There are other people who would like a shower Tai," The rumbling voice felt the need to remind me that other people lived beyond the shower of water.
"A few more minutes!" I cried it was all I needed, all I wanted. That wasn't too much to ask for.
"You already had forty-five minutes," the voice started to sound annoyed. Why? I was the one being disturbed.
"I'll be out in a few seconds," I pleaded. This was my paradise! How could anyone ask me to leave it! Suddenly I heard the swish of the toilet bowl being drain. I tried in vain to side step the icy water that splashed out of the shower-headed above me. "DAMN IT! Whatcha do that for!" How dare he ruin my trance!
"I thought I'd get your attention." The thunderous voice was right outside the curtain. "You are using up all the hot water, Tai."
That was it! This alien wanted the sacred water! The water that came from the earth, pulled through the plumping system, ran through the heating tank to flow over my fit masculine body! This was an evil person. "GO AWAY AND LEAVE ME ALONE!" I believe I made myself perfectly clear. I was not going to allow this…this person to take over my shower!
Another flush of the toilet. Damn this meddling being! I pulled back the curtain, staring into those evil blue eyes. "What the hell is your problem Blondie?"
"My name isn't Blondie and I already told you that there are other people who want to use the bathroom!" Matt pointed to Jun, who was giggling, Sora who tried to avoid any part of my naked form, Mimi who beamed, Izzy who looked more embarrassed for me then I could ever feel.
"Oh," I pulled the curtains back to hide behind the wall of the solid blue shield. "Err…I'll be out in a few more minutes!" I smiled back to my lovely spray of water.
"I'm going to kill him," I heard Blondie storm out of the bathroom.
"Now what did my brother do?" Kari, who I have to admit I was delighted to miss the view of my body, must have just entered into the scene.
"Tai is using up the hot water," Sora sighed.
"Try flushing the toilet?" My sister asked.
"Matt did a few times," Izzy spoke up.
"After what I just seen, I'll be fine with a cold shower instead," Mimi voiced. I reached over the shower curtain and wave at her, thanking her for understand real beauty when she saw it.
"That was…" June's voice sounded a bit uneven. "A cold shower does sound good."
The water went stale, it would flow no more hot water through the pipes to relax my body. After drying off, I dressed and headed for the down stair rooms. I bypassed the kitchen; there was no way I was going to eat with the hang-over still lurking inside of me. I did find Izzy playing chess with Joe in the entertainment room.
"Hey," I bounced next to Joe on the love chair, who in turn gave me evil looks. "Who's winning?" I hated chess but it seemed like a good way to start a conversation.
"No one," Izzy mumbled, looking down at the pieces.
"Who's who?" I asked.
"I'm black he's white," Joe told me, not taking his eye off the board. I could not understand why, it wasn't as the pieces were going to move by themselves. However, it was very cool when it did so in the movies.
"Where is everyone?" I asked, looking over the sofa, expecting someone to pop up from behind it.
"Out and about," Joe mumbled, his finger seems to be stuck between his top lip and his bottom lip.
"Out and about where?" I continued to ask my mind bobbling questions..
"Outside somewhere," Izzy sighed.
Ah, now we are getting somewhere! "Who's out there and where did they go?"
"I don't know. Mimi, Jun, Kari, Tk and Davis went horseback riding. I think Matt went to the hot springs with Sora, considering you used up all the hot water." Joe glanced over at my way.
"It's not my fault the inventor didn't think that people would spend over an hour in the shower." I shrugged. To think these inventers are called geniuses!
