Answers to my loyal minions opinions!
Devil may pretend to care: I have more adivce from the guru of fanfic writing wisdom! You are my hero! Your welcome! Just next time, return the tin! (hands another plate of cookies) remember!
shikaruTo: Okay! I will try to do this longer. I'm trying to keep it coming by writing short chappies. (just a thought, maybe if I still keep writing short chappies, then I definitely will make a lot of them.) and I will tell you I'm really bad at writing long chapters. XD
Anime/Manga lubber (): someone is really giddy about SASUHINA SASUHINA! Jeeze If I give you some hot chocolate will you…SHUT UP! Sorry AM (anger management!)
Randomness: I have to think about it. Both relationships have to sink in, and then I will choose. (it will probably be HINASASU! Or UsherHinata!)jk
Sooooooo….I realize my last chappie was kind of a disappointment, but what can you expect from a B average student with a higher potential then (I wont say she or he.. I may be both…lol definitely not) has been using? Anyway. I need some feedback! You have great stuff! I love you all!(falls off chair) Anyway (gets up and straightens tie)
On to chapter 3, foos! And I hope that retarded thing wont happen again with my fricking retarded computer! In this chap, Naruto agrees to be Hinata's fake boyfriend!ooooooooooo(and a little date happens) I don't know how to make dramatic ending)
I think that I will use NARUHINA to get Sasuke mad and jelous, and he can't confess to Hinata because he is too embarrassed. (thank you "Lems" for this idea!) (Remember this is not the same extreme Sasuke who is cold and heartless. This is a shyer one, but with purpose. He can still fight people!)
Chapter 3: Homework and propositions
Hinata nearly dropped the phone. Her Naruto-kun had called her! She was so excited, but extremely and deathly nervous. "Yes, it is me Naruto."
At the other end of the line, Naruto was sitting behind a desk, with a pile of "homework" in front of him. It was all Tsunade-Dono homework, which meant SCIENCE! Naruto's worst subject. "Hinata? I need help with Science homework. Can you help? I'm terrible at Science."
Hinata paused for a moment. Naruto was asking her for help. Not anyone else, but her! HER! HER! HER! "S-sure."
After about an hour on the phone, trying to sink simple science into Naruto's Clementine sized brain, Naruto finally finished his Science homework. "Arigato, Hinata-chan! I love you! Thank you sooooo much!" On the other side of the line, Naruto was bouncing off the walls. Finally, he understood science. And all because of a blue-haired Hyuuga Girl.
Meanwhile, Hinata was blushing very madly, Naruto had just said he loved her. She knew he didn't mean it, but it was embarrassing and at the same time, it was comforting. But then a strange thought came into her head. Suddenly an image of the boy that she met at school flooded her mind. She decided that she would ask tomorrow if Naruto actually liked her. If not, she would have to look for someone else.
"It is…It's nothing, Naruto. I have someth-thing to ask you. M-meet at the fountain in my garden." Hinata said to Naruto. Yes, she thought, tomorrow would be the day she says it.
"Wosurenai(I wont forget), Hinata. Sayonara!" With that, Naruto hung up the phone. Hinata threw the phone onto the holder, and buried her head into her pillow. "Sayonara," she said to herself, as she cried tears dedicated to Naruto. After 5 minutes, she was fast asleep
This will serve as a line, my stupidass computer wont make a stupid flipping line!
"Hinata! Haiaku! Breakfast is ready!" Hinata rose up from her bed and stared at her pillow. It was stained with the salty tears of desire she cried last night. For Naruto. She walked sleepily over to her dresser, and picked out a red tank top, and matching green Capri pants. She flew down the stairs and landed at the bottom and preformed an intricate bow. Everyone looked at her for one second, and then returned to their respective activities. Hinata sweatdropped and walked over to her mother. She picked up the plate from her and received a plate of eggs, bacon, and a bagel.
"Hinata! Guess what? I got a story published for the Tetzutomochu publishing company. They say they're going to publish my story to all of Konoha!" Her sister Hanabi blurted out to her sister Hinata nearly dropped her plate. She was so happy. "Ma…Masaka?" Hanabi nodded her head with a huge grin on her face. Hinata placed her plate on the counter and ran into Hanabi and gave her a big squeeze. Then she looked at the clock. "Yarou! I'm late for Naruto!" She rushed out the door. Her mother yelled at her before she left, "Don't use that language in this house!"
Anotherlineanotherlineanotherlineanotherline (at the garden)
Hinata walked through the rock archway, only a bit further until the fountain. She decided she'd use her freak technique to find Naruto, which was called the Evil Eye. No one believed her when she said she could see through walls. She turned it on, and saw Naruto through a small wall walking over to the fountain. She picked up her pace, turning her (review to me if I get this name wrong) Bayukagan off. There, at the fountain, sat Naruto. She seated herself right next to him. "Na..ruto…?"
"Yes….?"
"Do-" she stopped. She questioned herself. Hinata, she thought, what the hell are you doing? If you don't want this, then don't say it.
But I want to…I want to know his feelings…for me. She battled with her brain. Suddenly a picture of Sasuke came into her mind. Uh, she thought, why can't I stop thinking of him. Do I…(gulp)…Like him?
"Hinata? Daijoubu desu ka?"
"Nothing, I'm fine Naruto." (conversation with Author and Hinata
A:Hinata you love Sasuke! You are 100 in LUV!
H: NOOOOO! I LOVE NARUTO, I LOVE NARUTO, I LOVE SASU-! NOOOOOOOO
A: I told you so! Anyway, go ask Naruto if he likes you, He'll say, just as a friend. Then you can use him to get the man of your dreams
H:NOOOOO! NARUTO IS THE MAN OF MY DREAMS….OR IS HE? SASUKE IS IT? NOOOOO I DON'T WANT TO FALL IN LOVE AGAIN!NOOOOOOO!
end conversation.)
"Naruto? Can I ask a favor of you?" Hinata asked bleakly.
"Sure Hinata! Nani?"
"Well, I know you like Sakura-chan, but can I ask a favor of you? Can you (gulp) pretend t-to b-b-b-b-be my b-boy-b-b-boyfr…" Hinata shut her eyes and said very quickly, "canyoupretendtobemyboyfriendtogetthepersonIlikejelous?"
It took Naruto a minute to comprehend. "Well….I don't see why not! Sure!"
"Masaka?" Hinata blushed.
"mmhmm! Anything to help a friend. By the way, who is the lucky man?" Naruto added with a glint in his eye. He smiled.
"Sa…Sasuke."
"ooooohohoho! You've fallen for Uchiha-kun! I know the exact way to make him jelous. And you're sure he likes you." She nodded. "Good. Let's go over to my house, we can plan over there. Mwahahahahhahaa…" Hinata joins into his evil laughter. Suddenly, Neji appeared from behind an archway. "SHUT UP! I'M TRYING TO SLEEP, AND THE EVIL LIGHTNING ISN'T HELPING ME!" and with that, he flew away on a magic broom.
Naruto smiled. "I always knew he was a witch."
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(ten minutes later)
Hinata and Naruto walked past the Uchiha manor, rather loudly. "It's a great day, eh Naruto?"
"Sure is, Hina-chan!"
This definitely woke up the raven haired boy. He sat on the edge of his bed, and roubbed his eyes for about five seconds, and then got up to see what woke him up. He saw that girl from yesterday(BTW, he couldn't stop thinking about her last night) and that obnoxious bastard, Naruto. What was he doing with a mild mannered girl like Hinata?
Then he saw it. The thing that pushed him way overboard. Naruto pulled Hinata into a kiss. This definitely blew all of the steam in his kettle. He was so mad at that boy. Sasuke grabbed a piece of paper out of a drawer and got a pencil. He started writing letters and drawing pictures. After a half hour, he raised from his position, and looked at his work.
"That is it!" He said putting away his pencil. "Hinata, tomorrow you will be mine. Operation Liberation will be put into play!"
oooo cliffy. I wonder if that is a dramatic ending? Anyway. Review review review damnit!
Signed, yours truly, KurenaiMishatari!