Most likely this has a lot of mistakes. i didn't proofread this, i didn't feel like it. so if i make any mistakes let me know, and i'll go back and fix them! no, do not correct my spelling in my author's not!

Chapter 8:

Cragen was pulling Casey out into the main area. She was holding her head as blood flowed between her fingers. Olivia, John, and Cameron stopped dead in their tracks at the sight.

"Get in there! Now!" Cragen yelled. The three detectives ran back into the hallway. Huang was crouched in a corner, clutching his shoulder. Olivia leapt over to help him.

"Huang, what the hell happened?"

"Brenda, she just went crazy, smashed the window." Olivia turned back to see Cameron and John pull out their guns. Cameron, jumped through the broken window, Munch just opened the door. The sight they saw was horrendous. Brenda's lawyer lay in the corner, bleeding. Brenda had Elliot pinned down and she kept slapping him. Elliot's spit to t blood as she kept hitting.

"Get the hell off him you crazy little bitch!" Brenda stopped momentarily to stare up at Cameron and Munch.

"He attacked me! He tried to rape me!"

"You know not everyman wants to screw you Brenda, you're not that pretty." Cameron said angrily. Brenda screamed at the top of her lungs. She was angry at the young detective. In one swift motion she grabbed Elliot's gun and fired off three rounds into Cameron. She fell to the ground on top of her gun. Munch kept his gun up on Brenda and fired one round that landed into her shoulder. She jerked back and Elliot used that as an opportunity to crawl out from under her. He grabbed the gun that she dropped. Brenda sat against the wall pulling at the wound, trying to get the bullet out. As she pushed her finger in, more blood flowed out.

"Hands up Brenda! Now!" She looked up at Elliot. Elliot was caught off guard at the site. Just moments ago Brenda was a beautiful, well-kept girl. Now, her hair was wild and frizzy, hanging in every direction. Her eyes were wide, what lay deep beneath them was this incredible malice that Elliot had only seen in select sociopaths. She smiled an evil smile and started to rub her blood covered hand over her face. She pinched her wound so more blood would come and continued to just rub it across her face and through her hair. Soon she reminded Elliot of the book Carrie, how there wasn't a spot on the girl that wasn't covered in blood.

She got down on all fours and started crawling towards Elliot. "Don't move Brenda!" He shouted. She just laughed.

"Or what? You'll shoot an unarmed woman? I'd love to see you get out of that one detective." She now lay in front of him. She grabbed onto his belt and pulled herself onto her knees. "You want to shoot me detective? Want to put me out of my misery? Come on. I dare you." She paused a moment. Elliot didn't move. She started pounding his thighs and stomach. "COME ON DETECTIVE! KILL ME! SHOOT ME! I DARE YOU!" Still Elliot didn't move. Brenda started to cry as she waited for Elliot to react. But he wouldn't. Brenda shrieked at the top of her lungs. It was a vicious sound that pained Elliot's ears. Brenda jumped up and thrust her hand over Elliot's nose and mouth. She pushed him into the wall. "YOU BASTARD! I HATE YOU! WHY DON'T YOU JUST DIE!" Elliot punched Brenda in the face, but she didn't move. He grabbed her hand trying to pry it away, but Brenda was stronger then she appeared. A loud bang was heard behind him. Brenda's hand slunk away from Elliot's face, as Brenda fell to the ground. He saw Munch standing behind him holding a smoking gun. Elliot dropped down with Brenda. She wasn't dead yet. She clung to Elliot's neck, sobbing. Elliot watched the tears form little valleys on her blood covered cheeks.

"I'm sorry! Daddy! I'm so sorry! Please! Please I'm sorry! I'm sorry." Her grip on his shoulder weakened as she finally died. Elliot felt the tears burn his eyes but refused to fall. He wouldn't cry.

Only pansies cry.

"Oh my god! That was so short! Why is it that the coolest chapter is only like two hundred words long! Come on! This is bullshit! That bitch of a writer!" Well I know, I know. I didn't know what else to write! Well, there's only one more chapter. Hopefully that will be a longer chapter. Adios!

Bob