Chapter 2- Surprises and Giggles galore
Review from last chap: "Oh I'm terribly sorry, I'm so clumsy, i." but Lily's apology was cut off as she looked up and saw three people staring down at her.
"Hi, my name is Sirius, I think you're hot..will you go out with me?" said Sirius, not even remembering that he didn't know her. Sirius Black was one of James' best friends and was part of the group called the Marauders.
"Sirius!!!" said James with a surprised countenance (A/N see Katherine? Vocab word! ^_^) as he smacked Sirius over the head.
"OW!!! What???"
"ARE YOU CRAZY!!!!" roared James forgetting that Lily was on the floor.
"Well she is," replied Sirius cockily, and winked at Lily. "So, how bout it? Out. With. Me?"
"Uhm.." Said Lily
"See you git? YOU SCARED HER YOU SMART ARSE!!!!" screamed James straight into his ear. "I'm really sorry, please allow me to apologize for him. I'm James, this is Sirius, and that's Remus." He said as he pointed each boy out. "Don't mind Sirius, he tends to go crazy over beautiful women such as yourself." Spoke James with a flirty grin on his face as he winked at Lily.
Lily blushed. "Thanks. Um.it was nice meeting you all, I'll see you later." Spoke Lily quickly as she left.
Shiz she's hot. thought James.
stupid James.had to go and mess things up real good for me didn't he? Thought Sirius.
*~*~*
Lily walked into a compartment on the Hogwarts Express and spotted her two best friends, Sandy Jameson and Katherine Bell. (A/n No Kat, sorry not named after you unless you want it to be.) She ran over and hugged them. Instantly, the girls jumped up and down, giggling madly.
*~*~*
"Shiz," said James.
"What?" Both looked at him.
"She was so freakin hot."
"Yeah, I know, that's why I asked her out. " said Sirius smugly, which caused him to receive another slap over the head from James. "Hey, don't be hatin (A/N, yes from Malibu's Most Wanted as some of you might now.I am American so thought it would be coolio) just because she was gonna say yes obviously,"
"Oh yes, she was OBVIOUSLY going to say yes," said Peter who had entered the compartment at that moment and was imitating Sirius. This sent James and Remus into a fit of giggles while Peter received death glares from Sirius.
*~*~*
A/N End of chappie.as you guys noticed.TONS OF AUTHOR'S NOTES!!!!! Sup wit that, you might be asking. This is my first fanfiction and although I stink at it, it's fun but I don't want people to get confused. Let me know about this chappie and whether I should lighten up. AND. REVIEWS!!!!!!!!! I mean 2 isn't exactly something to dance around about.but hey, for a bad writer like me, not bad.
Dan-rad- Yeah thanks. I had, but I realized you had to hit enter twice or it won't show up. (smacks forehead) doh! Thanks! I liked your story.
Lil Rose Angel- Well obviously yes I am (looks around) yeah for sure. I just thought that in this one, James and his father get along well. That his father's name should really be Harold aka Harry. I thought James should name Harry after.well, Harry. Definitely going to continue and I'll talk to you about it in school. Oh and Katherine, Jen's my alias on the web FYI.
AND ALL YOU PEOPLE..REVIEW!!!!!!! Or I shall send a angry mob of hippogriffs after you. Just kidding.
-Jen
Review from last chap: "Oh I'm terribly sorry, I'm so clumsy, i." but Lily's apology was cut off as she looked up and saw three people staring down at her.
"Hi, my name is Sirius, I think you're hot..will you go out with me?" said Sirius, not even remembering that he didn't know her. Sirius Black was one of James' best friends and was part of the group called the Marauders.
"Sirius!!!" said James with a surprised countenance (A/N see Katherine? Vocab word! ^_^) as he smacked Sirius over the head.
"OW!!! What???"
"ARE YOU CRAZY!!!!" roared James forgetting that Lily was on the floor.
"Well she is," replied Sirius cockily, and winked at Lily. "So, how bout it? Out. With. Me?"
"Uhm.." Said Lily
"See you git? YOU SCARED HER YOU SMART ARSE!!!!" screamed James straight into his ear. "I'm really sorry, please allow me to apologize for him. I'm James, this is Sirius, and that's Remus." He said as he pointed each boy out. "Don't mind Sirius, he tends to go crazy over beautiful women such as yourself." Spoke James with a flirty grin on his face as he winked at Lily.
Lily blushed. "Thanks. Um.it was nice meeting you all, I'll see you later." Spoke Lily quickly as she left.
Shiz she's hot. thought James.
stupid James.had to go and mess things up real good for me didn't he? Thought Sirius.
*~*~*
Lily walked into a compartment on the Hogwarts Express and spotted her two best friends, Sandy Jameson and Katherine Bell. (A/n No Kat, sorry not named after you unless you want it to be.) She ran over and hugged them. Instantly, the girls jumped up and down, giggling madly.
*~*~*
"Shiz," said James.
"What?" Both looked at him.
"She was so freakin hot."
"Yeah, I know, that's why I asked her out. " said Sirius smugly, which caused him to receive another slap over the head from James. "Hey, don't be hatin (A/N, yes from Malibu's Most Wanted as some of you might now.I am American so thought it would be coolio) just because she was gonna say yes obviously,"
"Oh yes, she was OBVIOUSLY going to say yes," said Peter who had entered the compartment at that moment and was imitating Sirius. This sent James and Remus into a fit of giggles while Peter received death glares from Sirius.
*~*~*
A/N End of chappie.as you guys noticed.TONS OF AUTHOR'S NOTES!!!!! Sup wit that, you might be asking. This is my first fanfiction and although I stink at it, it's fun but I don't want people to get confused. Let me know about this chappie and whether I should lighten up. AND. REVIEWS!!!!!!!!! I mean 2 isn't exactly something to dance around about.but hey, for a bad writer like me, not bad.
Dan-rad- Yeah thanks. I had, but I realized you had to hit enter twice or it won't show up. (smacks forehead) doh! Thanks! I liked your story.
Lil Rose Angel- Well obviously yes I am (looks around) yeah for sure. I just thought that in this one, James and his father get along well. That his father's name should really be Harold aka Harry. I thought James should name Harry after.well, Harry. Definitely going to continue and I'll talk to you about it in school. Oh and Katherine, Jen's my alias on the web FYI.
AND ALL YOU PEOPLE..REVIEW!!!!!!! Or I shall send a angry mob of hippogriffs after you. Just kidding.
-Jen